Voted For: Tony.Self

Tephlons Verse

Kids Reppin me in His Sig.....
....''The Champ Iz Back''
I didnt even Realize I Left....
....But Thanks for Statin Facts
^ Nice punch/personal but structure and the way it was laid out is blah IMO

Ya should stick ta Audio, I'm Ho'n you with ''Tetxual Skits''
I got a Question......
......You or Fluid, Which one has Bigger Tits?!
^ ok nuthin special 3 line bar -_- to be honest it's look better as 2 lines

My lines perform BackFlips, Got you takin ''Long Trips''
Sending Post Cards from everytime you ''Fallen'' off Dicks!
^ multi...but i woulda replaced fallen wit "trip"pin

Kids like 3rd persona, so self conscese
Ya flows are like a New born baby trynna speak..
....There Just NONSENCE!!!

Overall
Nothing special...some punches which connected but structure needs to be sorted it's naff lol...all in all an ok verse but prolly seen better from ya

Tony.Self Verse

ide send ya ass a n email but you to scared to open up
admit it tony self has become ya most recent phobia
^ Honestly...not feelin it 2nd line lacked it was more self glory flipped your song name shoulda been better wit opener

ill pop ya like soda
stop ya like a hold up
im hott on mics blown up
you like holdin clovers with no luck
^ Nice rhyming, structure eugh punches started played in 1st line but were short and effective nice flow too

puttin sandpaper to kids toys to make ya block rough
dont even take showers you araid you de be washed up
^ nice bar like the punch diss = effective

i pickure you lookin goofy at a bar with some roofies
slip em to a bitch or floozytaken her home to call her ya groupie
^ lol @ rhyming but yea ok it's good

hollerin bout streets speekin on whats really good
puttin on a sweatshirt only time ya in the hood
^ lol punch = good nice bar

ill put ya raps up in a vice grip say u spit tight shit
ill lay my rymes in an edible fashion soyou can bite this
^ good closer coulda been better but it's good

Overall
Obvious audio hit ya text skills early on wit the self-g and the 4 line bar...but you picked up and threw a couple of good punches...flow was good but lose that 4 line thing...

V/Tony.Self...verse was more consistant i was impressed coz of the deadline what you both bought so i can expect it being not as good as a verse what took it's time but Self was more consistant overall...less 3-4 line bars better punches...Tephlon bought a couple of personals but layout effected it and i don't care what people say layout & structure is important in text...RTF in ma sig (vs EC) within 3 days or vote removed :thumbup:

Vote removed by Mad Dog's request

much appreciated just a few more to close this cmon

dawg if you gonna vote and fuckin make me rtf on whatever it is you want keep ya fuckin vote thats a str8 bitch move kid

Voted For: Tony.Self

Yo Tony.Self Got Diz EZ......

Better Verse, Both Came Weak But Tonyz Sand Paper Line Killed Da Verse Off, Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature