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Terumoto 03-15-05 08:27 AM

Voted For: Black Queen

I like big butts and I can not lie
You other brothers can't deny
That when a girl walks in with an itty bitty waist
And a round thing in your face
You get sprung
Wanna pull up tough
Cuz you notice that butt was stuffed
Deep in the jeans she's wearing
I'm hooked and I can't stop staring
Oh, baby I wanna get with ya
And take your picture
My homeboys tried to warn me
But that butt you got
Make Me so horney
Ooh, rump of smooth skin
You say you wanna get in my benz
Well use me use me cuz you aint that average groupy

- Sir mix a lot

but for real though......... ewough0987wht02784h5t087254y608th725h642i5bhyt2bft ugtfgyuyo54gtyd542yugyufy54uvg3g56v3vg546fv56g3v56 kvg6356

AND THATS WHY SO STFU

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Dirty Nigga 03-15-05 12:09 PM

^^^
You are by far the biggest dick head on RV
When are u gonna accept my callout ho?

Dirty Nigga 03-15-05 08:44 PM

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Dirty Nigga 03-16-05 10:42 AM

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Black Queen 03-16-05 08:30 PM

lmao at da pass few post..........................

Dirty Nigga 03-17-05 10:35 AM

I do dirt, the gat bust
I get ta kickin' up Dust
Before the jakes come around here Kid
Niggas get Knocked
The D'z start askin Questions
My name ends up in all types of Shiiiiiiiit - 50 Cent - This Is 50

Dirty Nigga 03-18-05 08:31 AM

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fuckin votin!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dirty Nigga 03-19-05 08:01 AM

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Black Queen 03-20-05 05:58 PM

we need votes we need votes we need votes hey hey hey hey
lol bored

Dirty Nigga 03-20-05 06:01 PM

Yo kween, you wouldnt happen ta be suggesting we need votes would'ja?
LOL
Shit i'm bored too, an nobody will battle me

Uppppppppppin

Dirty Nigga 03-21-05 11:26 AM

okay now lets get some fuckin votes at long last people

Black Queen 03-21-05 07:36 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Escolayde
Yo kween, you wouldnt happen ta be suggesting we need votes would'ja?
LOL
Shit i'm bored too, an nobody will battle me

Uppppppppppin

yea im sick of this shit we not gettin votes :cussing: lol.............

Dirty Nigga 03-22-05 08:09 PM

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The Black Plague 03-25-05 11:23 AM

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 
Chekkin polls...

BQ won this shit tho

Black Queen 03-25-05 01:32 PM

no offense but why didnt you vote...................

M&rk 03-25-05 02:10 PM

This was feedback posted for Black Queen
 
checkin polls... this a pretty decent battle.
Just so you know, I enjoy the Hate, an It gives me Wood
So go 'head n admit it, You'd sit on my Face if you Could!
^^^haha goes for me too

Dirty Nigga 03-25-05 02:15 PM

wghat the hell?
youd sit on my face if u could?LOL...WHAAAT?
hahah, could people vote?
thanks for the feed tho..

fluidmoon 03-29-05 09:52 PM

Voted For: Buck.Shot

aiight...lol, good battle...
black Q~your opener was good, pretty effective, was hard hitting, liked the "hide in a hole,gopher it"bar,was witty,closer was a decent punch, but you had no real personals, but your vocabulary was good here, you did aight..1
escolayde~hard hitting opener, effective personal there, nice vocabulary, creative punches here,i'm feelin it,your flow and the way you set your punches up is good(structure)LOL@ the seven eleven bar, good, again effective hard diss there, and again with the window sheen line, ohhh dayum,you closed this off nicely, great job on the strong punches, again,this was a good battle to read, and i've read 12 today, this was one of the better ones,good job both,but escolayde, i thought you took this with ease,for creativity in your punches...1

FlowIntelligent. 03-30-05 11:14 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

BQ:

Comparing ur text to mine is like comparing playboy to the bible
Cause Buck just a cheap substitution for something desirable
^^good meta decent punch 7/10
No satis..faction, deep breathe and pause to effect,
He lost so many battles he still dont think dat he whack
^^no 2/10
But if you wanna go for rapping, i'll take you out in sections,
Voting is extremly one sided, like a cuban prez election
^^decent 4/10
But if you wanna try and win, by all means go for it,
Or you can be a bitch and hide in a hole, gopher it
^^dope bar best of the battle 9/10
Hold the glamour now, pretend like you a movie big fuckin star,
Cuz after these hits, your head will be seeing moving stars
^^no 3/10
ya lines ridiculous, like mute cows, i herd you were dumb
i could "ridicule less" but that wouldn't be as much fun
^^decent 5/10

Overall: 30/60 (50%)

Buck.Shot:

Says I'm whack, but she followed me into The Crew (Jury)
Nobody likes ya rhymes, they just wanna Screw!
^^no 2/10
I'ma hit the nail on the Head, n make ya Wig Flip
This tranny got a Bigger dick than Skriptz!
^^no 2/10
Chubby Cheeks, lookin like a Young Oprah
Bitch so fat.......
....They got literally ''put it in ya Belly'' when they Poke-ya!
^^ok 4/10
Claimed i never beat a Vet when her Record aint hit Eleven
Bout ta open a chain of Stores in ya Honour...
.......''Legs Open TwentyFour-SEVEN!''
^^ok 4/10
She went from Lil Nae, then claimed ta be a 'Queen'
Her rhymes wouldnt ''Shine'' if ya coated 'em in Window Sheen!
^^no 3/10
Just so you know, I enjoy the Hate, an It gives me Wood
So go 'head n admit it, You'd sit on my Face if you Could!
^^no 3/10
I'ma take you on a stroll thru the Hood...
....Let my Boys run a Train
Only reazon she think she ''Wise'' dissin me is.....
......She Constantly Givin' BRAIN!
^^decent 5/10

Overall: 23/70 (39%)

Vote: Black Queen

Please return the favor with a honest vote on a battle in sig!

Black Queen 04-07-05 07:51 PM

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Dirty Nigga 04-13-05 11:58 AM

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Restricted 04-13-05 08:09 PM

Voted For: Black Queen

Aight..

Black Queen: 6/10

You Had Some Aight Metaphors and Punches...Some Lines Fell off and Were Fillers and Wack. Your Vocab Wasn't Too Bad and Structure Was Decent.

Buch Shot.: 4/10

You Had One Decent Punch, but The Rest of Your Verse Was Shitty In My Eyes. Just Old and Not Enjoyable. No Vocab and Every Bar Delt With Sexual Content. Be Original and Bust Some Sick Metas Man. Structure Was Aight.

Overall Vote: Black Queen For More Punches and Better Verse.

~R~

Black Queen 04-16-05 10:11 PM

thx fo da vote pimp uppin...........................

Black Queen 04-17-05 05:07 PM

uppin uppin uppin again im sick of dis............

Dirty Nigga 04-21-05 06:27 PM

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Black Queen 04-21-05 08:34 PM

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DON 04-21-05 10:05 PM

Voted For: Buck.Shot

esco came hard here. black queen ur flow wasnt good there it bounced around and the punches were pretty weak especially the gopher in the hole one. esco that shit was hard man, especially the legs open 24/7 that was some hardcore writing i laughed on that one. the flow was sick it went together perfect, it was pretty much a one sided battle which is why i vote for esco his personals were real good

Dirty Nigga 04-23-05 10:03 AM

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Ill-Grammatix 04-23-05 03:48 PM

Voted For: Buck.Shot

black queen

opener was straight poison... and then.... it all went to hell... what happened between ya opener and ya closer? i mean... other than the cuban prez election joint.. i ain't really see anything that made you win this... the go for it/gopher it line? i see the idea but it didn't work out too well for ya.... and star and star don't RHYME... it's the SAME word.... lost points for that also

Teph... ya structure was ya biggest issue... lines just seemd mad short at times... and then stretched at others...nice personal in the opener... closer was killer... that pretty much summed it up... better word play and disses connected better...had a lil bit of filler and fluff in ya verse but it didn't hurt ya too much.... still, i've seen better verses....but ya won


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