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well this was easy....blahh battle

akn....structure needs work....punches need work....no self glorifying yourself....comparing yourself to the boogeyman = not a punch....elevate alot....you had stretched lines, which is bad....you never really dissed graph at all, your concepts are basic, need to keep consistency in a battle and add more complexity to your shit....this was one sided, elevate alot dude

grafh....disappointed in you too..haha, nothing that special in here, basic as well, but you had punches that hit (although they were weak, most likely takin it easy), but yeah, flow was okay....finisher was blahh, i know you can do better, so not much really to explain

v/grafh, for having punches that actually dissed his opponent

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Kyleon
Alright Your Flow Came Out Good Punces Was Here, Nicely Done, Personals Was Alright, Multi's Add Some Multi's Bruh, That'll Make Your Flow Better, Meta's Had Some In Here, Vocabulary Good, Structure Was Decent, Nicely Done Here,Overall 8/10

A.K.
Okay Punches Hmm I Didn't Really See Em' Man, And Try To Put Meta's In Your Verse, Coz A Plain Verse Like Yours Won't Help Nothing Man, Also Vocabulary Wow! Elevate On That, Structure Is Where You Need Alot Of Work Man....4/10

Ky Got This Coz He Had Better Punches And Personals A Better Flow, Vocabulary Was Mad Nice Man, And Structure, You Got This