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The Black Plague 03-22-05 08:21 PM

Voted For: Forgotten Flow

Obvious who won this battle here... Forgotten takes it easily...

Forgotten- Nice personals here.. First line was aiite, second line was nice man.. personal hit nice here...the whole 2nd bar was wack, didnt understand it, personal missed... But 4th line was pretty nice, good punch here and and a nice personal on his rec..lol... The Open mic shit was an attempt at a personal, but u coulda got more creative wit it.. J DOt line was funny.. kinda played, but nice... the " Non Stop" line was decent, again a nice personal wit a punch in there, but u coulda gotten more creative with it.. Closer was nice, maybe ya best line here.. Shit hit hard, and prolly won u the battle...

Buck- Decent verse from you.. coulda came harder tho.. Ya lines were nice, but just simple.. and you only had punches... Shoulda came wit some more personals... Openr was nice.. god punch there.. and the 3-4 lines was aiite.. jus basic punches some creativity... Some more aiite punches after there, doin aiite.. then when i seen that Pinstripe/Dyke line, i was like what the fuck? Shit was wack, and took away from the rest of your verse.. Lost you the battle.. Closer was aiite, nice punch.. But you coulda had more personals...

Overall- Flow takes this with harder personals, and a better and more consistent verse.. Good Struc from both, and decent flow and Content, but Buck shoulda came wit more personals as i said, and Flow's personals just killed it..

Vote/ Forgotten Flow

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Germ 04-16-05 04:16 PM

Voted For: Buck.Shot

meh, i thought esco had the better shit in this one, straight up, had harder punches, personals, and more things stood out, ff, your verse was kinda a drag to read, nothing really interesting.....so, basing off harder punches, esco gets this for sure, both had everything else down aight, cept FF your structure was a little off, but whatever........multies, word.

v/buck.shot......rtf if ya could


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