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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

structure was a big factor in this one, and I think OSB took it. he had better structure as well as personals, and punches to go along. not really a battle to me. i think osb took this one one handed. i wasnt feeling buck shot's verse at all. i think u should elevate more homie. or i think u just rushed this one, cause i seen better from you. no hate tho, jjust being honest. osb gets my vote. i was feeling his more, and he came more consistent from start to finish and never fell off. buck, yo structure was all over tha place, and yo verse didnt really flow too well to me. hard to see where tha punches and creativeness was, but a ok verse, im just sayin it couldve been a lil bit better. my vote goes to osb.

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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

I don't know who took this one. I'm leaning more towards OSB because I was feeling his personals and structure wayy better, but then Buck had some nice mettas and half descent punches that I seen in his verse. So I don't know. It kinda evens out. I'm just not guna vote....uppin...sry

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

meh, i wasn't really feeling either verses, to tell you the truth, both came out dry, seriously, both have done waaay better, but this is a hella old battle....haha......im giving it to onestep, because i chuckled at a few more of his lines, i dunno buck, i think your verse was plagued by poor set up lines, and non-creative punches, no hate or nothing, just wasnt too interestin, i liked your intro, that was a good personal, but nothing was good after it, and i really hated your closer, no-show lines are stupid......so, onestep gets it for having a little more creativity, but kept it consistent......oh, critique onestep too.....meh, kinda basic, up vocab and wordplay, but you still edged this out

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uppin for fuck sake...............................

uppin this for some closage......throw up your diamonds

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lmfao...this battle has been going on for a long ass time....damn!!!!!

ya'll kno ya'll can get battles closed after 21 days? checkin polls

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

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Voted For: Buck.Shot

buckshot....punches were right on target,flow was dope
structure was good funny shit in there had me laughing
nice vocab nice overasl verse a lil bit long but it was full of disses so good drop i was feelin this.....

one step...good drop also but punches were played a bit,flow was good,structure was good..but i wasnt feelin all your gangsta talk about guns and shit cause i know its untrue
also it was much shorter than buckz which also help since he had punches pretty much tha whole battle return tha favour in tha crew battle me against slobk

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thanks for the vote, its about damn time people started votin again, all of a sudden people stopped lol......

i'll RTF

Uppin this tho.

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