uppin this battle

uppin this battle

Voted For: metaman

metaman
this dick is out his zone so now imma handle you quick,
you da best poet? faggot i aint maya angelou bitch,*
text cuz you weak cant stand in the same ring or ill end ya,
even if yo name was sly you wouldnt be a contender,**
you evolved from a poet to the wackest site member,
change your name to clef cause imma banish you til november,
you picked this fight with me makes me think yo head be a mess,
i done cramped you left you bloody cause of yo p-m-s,***

like your punches
lotz of personals
good structure
elevation wuz nice too
8/10

evolution
I’ll come half-assed, & your rhymes are easy to break like foam
But your punches are getting old too...
................................................go put them in the retirement home
This kid thinks this is all fun & games, hah, your just prattle*
You’d have to get an alias...
to vote on your own matches, just for you to win your battles
Look at this hoe, trying to act ill, your punches won’t even hit
His drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don’t want to hear it
Why am I facing you? You’re just a waste of time
You’ll never elevate son...
...cuz you already having trouble trying to rhyme

work on structure sum lines were hard 2 read
elevate a lil bit more
work on gettn sum more punches at opponent
7/10
no hate

v/metaman

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uppin this shit

Voted For: Evolution

nice verse here...wordplay good...punchlines were good they hit hard...personals were ight they could use a lil work... structre was good also...vocab gvery good...nice job man

Voted For: Evolution

ughh pretty one sided battle here evolution had nicer punches personals flow structure.. the whole works.... ughh the word prattle in a battle is just pretty gay.. but besides that nice verse... metaman or whatever ur verse was just weak.. and contrary to ur name u had no real metaphors in ur verse... soo overall evolution just owned here with some decent punches and some nice personals... so no hate just elevate... v/evolution.. bye bye.....