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Voted For: GlocKoma

very close battle

glockoma
I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup...
"Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]...
Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick...
Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It...
Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static...
"Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It...
I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped...
Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped...
For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips...
You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips...

liked ur punches and word choice
good personals
iight structure
elevate a lil more
8/10

kesse


you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room
i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums
your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese
looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease
still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain
my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name
i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth
cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth

feelin ur punches as well
not as much personals doe
word on enhancin vocab
elevate so more
no hate 7/10

my v/ glockoma

ay yall check out ma battle verse the kid 523
i think i posted a nice verse
letz c what yal think
we need sum votes so leave good feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
holla back!

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This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup...
"Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]...
eee...I dono, just nothing really special... seems like you're not trying hard enuff....yup/up/tie-up? 3/10 - ouch...
Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick...
Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It...
See now that was alright, but still too basic. - 5/10
Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static...
"Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It...
damn....i just dont get it? sorry man, maybe you're just too complex i dono? - 3.5/10
I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped...
Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped...
You didnt really tell us what you're name says... I mean it doesnt say spunn-popped at all.....??? Sorry man, still not gettin'r, mabe next line......... - 3/10
For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips...
You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips... - 4/10
Uhm - ok i spose... I think you can elevate if you tried a little bit harder? I Dono, sorry man = just not feelin this one. Better luck next time
*18.5/50.

you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room
i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums
6/10 - Kinda good I guess...nothin speshl
your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese
looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease
7/10 - Good punch
still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain
my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name
7/10 - Bringin out a lil' tech in yea
i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth
cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth - 8/10 that was a sucker punch...he didnt see that one comin...then again, its just to easy to rip on a name like that. Still good though.
*28/49 *
Good Drop kesse...I think you'll prolly take this one.

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Voted For: Kesse

kesse:
you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room
i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums
^^^okay opener...COULD OF MADE DIS BETTA
your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese
looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease
^^^LOL..GOOD PERSONAL
still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain
my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name
^^^NAH WASN'T FEELIN
i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth
cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth
^^^LOL...HOTT



glock:
I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup...
"Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]...
^^^UMM I C NOTHIN BUT A MULTI
Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick...
Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It...
^^?????WHUT
Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static...
"Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It...
^^^U JUST TALKIN ABOUT YASELF FAM..U SUPPOSE DA BE BATTLIN
I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped...
Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped...
^^^OKAY CLOSER...DA BEST LINE OUT YA WHOLE VERSE..

VOTE/KESSE......RETURN DA FAVOR MY BATTLE VERSE ORION
For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips...
You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips...

oh and return da favor ya'll.....links in da sig or i will send a virus 2 ur computer

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

Checkin my the polls.

No vote, Kesse and I are in the same crew.

Also...Upping......

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This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

Kesse got his,

you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room
i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums
Nice punch quite funny. 7/10

your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese
looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease
another good punch 7/10

still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain
my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name
Probably could have been worded differently but still hit 6/10

i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth
cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth
Wasnt as good as your others, but good for a finisher 6.5/10

Glock, yours was just multies which was good for flow and shit, but didnt have any proper personals

kesse got it overall for harder hitting punches and personals.
No hate glock.
RTF Link in sig.

couldnt vote coz i dont have enough posts, so theres feed^

rtf please

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Voted For: Kesse

meh.... one sided to me...

you claim your verses are good, but your shit belongs in the bath room
i'll have you doubting your drop, saying "it really sucks" like adds for vaccuums
^funny line right there 7/10
your verses are useless, like using a mousetrap without any cheese
looking at your writtens... think you got more than just an eye disease
^not that much of a punch but decent 5/10
still couldnt spit good shit if your mouth was friend to my brain
my verse will hit so hard, leave you to experience the end of your name
^niceness 7/10
i'd quit, rap isn't your area....like drug dealers selling to youth
cause if you can't see the crap you write, your name must be telling the truth
^good ass closer.. 8/10

I feel like you switched up your style for this battle, but i liked what you did to it, structure was off but i don't care about structure, good verse




I'm Fuckin' This Guy-Up... Have Him High In The Sky-Yup...
"Grapplin' Wit GlocK"..? You'll Get "Shot" In This Tie-Up[/b]...
^Meh... gangsterism is a no no.. word 4/10
Punked-Bitch... I'm Gonna Have Ya Body Dumped-Quick...
Even Tho Yer "Gassed"... You Still Won't Be Able To Pump-It...
^same thing as the last ryhme 4/10
Cuz I'm Automatic... Quick To Leave Ya Like Cellphone Static...
"Puttin' GlocK Away"..? Even If I Waz Ya "Body Heat", You Still Couldn't Pack-It...
^still same thing, its very repititive, i honestly don't even wanna read this anymore 4/10
I'm "Sprayin" Gun-Talk... Cuz My Name Says It All... I'll Have You Spun-Popped...
Like "Pringles"... So When I Leave A "Chip On Ya Shoulder", You'll Know All The Fun-Stopped...
^that was a little better but still the same thing 5/10
For The Final Thought... I'll Have The GlocK Reline Ya Thoughts Wit Hollow-Tips...
You'll Become Vile-Bitch... So When You "Smile"... Ya "Mouf Will Be Disgusted" And Swallow-Lips...
^same same same 4/10

you got potentiol but you said the same thing over and over and over again.. kesse made you look bad.. and all i can say about kesse is hes probably dead cause thats all your verse was sayin... mix it up homie...