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Voted For: One M.B.

ONB-Nice story here.Wasn't finding the 1st. verse so hot...but 2nd was.I liked the fact u spoke about how people take ur rhymes seriously while you tell em how it's for jokes.That fits the topic perfectly.Vocab was bland but it didn;t hurt ur verse.

Anxiety-Didn't like the rhyme scheme.Storytellin was a lil basic.Vocab was better than OMB's.But I found OmB's story better.And plus.....he had more lines.Neva let the oppenent have more lines than you.Gotta go head to head.

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^What the fuck? Never seen dat shit before........

OMB neva returned the favor......so fuck him........get someone else to vote.

Mines going now also. .. .

Voted For: anxiety

i liked urs it had more emotion but omb was really good too so props to both of u
andx i d say work on ur vocab and thats not ever that bad but thats all i see that could b improved
omb good verse no doubt i jsut think anx was more heart felt ur vocab lacke but thats cause u made it a track so no beef i just think he took it good topical battle u guys

Voted For: One M.B.

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OMB:
Nice drop....
Really good scheme to your chosen concept.....i feel it was much more creative, vocab was strong, both had complex imagery, so i cant give you that side of the battle....the 2nd verse was much strong an you took the battle by storm when you dropped the second verse, real tight emotional peice, good drop

Fave lines:
i can rap about whatever, maybe violence 'n greed,
but thats the joy of a mic, there aint no silencin me,
'cos i'm usually quiet, you know, the back a the crowd,
so this rap is my release 'n all the shackles are down,

an.....

I got so much to tell, just hope my throat can bare it
But there's OMB 'n John, please don't compare 'em,
'n don't go runnin’ ya mouth, all sayin ya know me,
Just 'cos ya heard this track, doesn’t make you my homie

Nice emotion an creativity at its best, good drop OMB



Anxiety:
Cant be faulted either...this battle is a close one to call..
Nice strong vocab throughout, Emotion asnt AS Deep as OMB, But like i said in my brakedown to OMB's verse, both had outstanding imagery in they topics.....OMB Was a little more creative with his scheme, so he has to get my vote, but your topic was strong as fuck, Wouldnt be suprized if you come close to the win 'cause one persons oppinnon is irrevlivent unless many people feel the same as me

But it was a close battle to call...OMB Took it but heres my fave lines from your drop Anx..

I thought i could help, everything i tried was useless...
And it seemed with each day, he got more and more abusive...
But the final straw, that made me lose all respect...
Was when he came hom from "work", with lipstick on his neck...
Then he found out, that he needed a simple operation...
But something went wrong, just one little vibration...


an the opening 2 lines really started ya peice off nicely....good drops both, good luck to y'all in this

RTF Tho please OMB...Links at the top of my vote.

Peace