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chu bitches is gon' get cho shit splitted if you dont vote!!!!!!!!!
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can I ask you a question.. T Storm
What Is a Punchline mean To You? I jus wanna know.... No Beef.. jus wanna know. |
Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
Lawless: to hell-wit-this-trick... L-be-the-shit/ I'm bout to break this bitch like a elderly hip/ ^^first line self glorified 2nd line decent 4/10 no named no fame.... so I might as well remove-his-print/ I got a 9 that will slap this hoe like an abusive pimp/ ^^nice meta 6/10 I grab the switchblade.... jus in case I need to slice em/ I'll shatter ya ribcage.... u know I'm untouchable like a museum items/ ^^wack 2/10 after I'm done.. hell spit lawless shit for 3 days/ cause he knows his flow was truly artificially made/ ^^no 2/10 I got the 45 pattin' em on the back like he's un~able to belch/ Rv think you got 'imaginary friends' cause you always 'play wit yaself'/ ^^decent metas 6/10 Overall: 20\50 (40%) Unregistered: Repping 50 in ya signature like a muthafuckin disgrace You’ve been misplaced G-unit dot COM is this way ------> ^^no 3/10 You dumb shit, I’ll son you worse than your mom did Your brains more empty than eminems gun clip ^^wtf 0/10 I’ll leave you looking small like 50 without the steroids Ya whole crews like Michael Jackson’s children… scared boys ^^no 1/10 You’re wack as fuck so read my verse and take notes The only ways you’ll ever get a win is no shows and hate votes ^^ok 3/10 This battle is too simple plus this guys a queer When confronted with beef he runs faster than diarrhoea ^^played concept 3/10 Overall: 10/50 (20%) Vote: Lawless Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Unregistered
yo...lawless-all dat e-thug gangsta shit dont work on da internet...its all played out....on da otha hand unregistered-you had an "original" verse...da play on da sig was iight nuttin real jaw dropping but it got the job done....gay jokes is played out too and queer and diaharea dont really rhyme dog.....otha den dat u had a good verse...da michael jackson thing was a lil funny but a lil played....but its all good... |
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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
Wow he got it........Nigga shit was strait trill and Lawless......Was true A.T.L. Shit............Above The Law Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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I'll go first iight... Good luck in this battle man
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Lawless (Hs) has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-24-05 04:47 PM.
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Voted For: Unregistered
Vote= unregistered Theirs no point in breaking this down because it was such a weak battle, ya both had weak punches n shitty flow, you both need to elevate a great deal as well, no hate. Anyway im giving to unreg coz someones gotta win. LOL |
^lol at least we dont bite uppppppppppppppppppppppp
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this battle is fuckin old as vote cuntssssssssssssssss
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This was feedback posted for Unregistered
your rap wasnt bad...end kinda got confusing though
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This was feedback posted for Lawless (Hs)
polllllllllllllllllllsssssssssssssssssssssssssssss s
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Voted For: Unregistered
-This is an LFS Review- Umm yea let's GO! Lawless to hell-wit-this-trick... L-be-the-shit/ I'm bout to break this bitch like a elderly hip/ Wack no named no fame.... so I might as well remove-his-print/ I got a 9 that will slap this hoe like an abusive pimp/ Wack I grab the switchblade.... jus in case I need to slice em/ I'll shatter ya ribcage.... u know I'm untouchable like a museum items/ Wack after I'm done.. hell spit lawless shit for 3 days/ cause he knows his flow was truly artificially made/ Wack I got the 45 pattin' em on the back like he's un~able to belch/ Rv think you got 'imaginary friends' cause you always 'play wit yaself'/ Wack...but almost decent Overall that verse...sucked...badly....let's GO! Unregistered Repping 50 in ya signature like a muthafuckin disgrace You’ve been misplaced G-unit dot COM is this way ------> Wack You dumb shit, I’ll son you worse than your mom did Your brains more empty than eminems gun clip Wack I’ll leave you looking small like 50 without the steroids Ya whole crews like Michael Jackson’s children… scared boys Wack You’re wack as fuck so read my verse and take notes The only ways you’ll ever get a win is no shows and hate votes Played....HEY SOMETHING NOT WACK! wait it was This battle is too simple plus this guys a queer When confronted with beef he runs faster than diarrhoea Wack Overall: This battle was...you guessed it.........wack... Unregistered had the ONE personal so he gets the win...RETURN THE FAVOR OR I WILL NEVER LEAVE FEED ON YOUR SHIT.....EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
Yo good punchlines. Sum of the better ones i've actually seen on this site. Lawless gets my vote for the whole battle. to hell-wit-this-trick... L-be-the-shit/ I'm bout to break this bitch like a elderly hip/ no named no fame.... so I might as well remove-his-print/ I got a 9 that will slap this hoe like an abusive pimp/ I grab the switchblade.... jus in case I need to slice em/ I'll shatter ya ribcage.... u know I'm untouchable like a museum items/ after I'm done.. hell spit lawless shit for 3 days/ cause he knows his flow was truly artificially made/ I got the 45 pattin' em on the back like he's un~able to belch/ Rv think you got 'imaginary friends' cause you always 'play wit yaself'/ about a 8.5/10. So good battle man |
This was feedback posted for Lawless (Hs)
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Voted For: Lawless (Hs)
Started off with some decent mulites, props for that cause i dont see much of that here, but then you slacked off with them towards the end. You had aight metas and decent punchlines. Unregistered just came too simple so that's why my vote goes Lawless Vote: Lawless (Hs) |
Voted For: Unregistered
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