uppin................so bored doin this.................................

Voted For: KiNg SoLo

U The Franchise like Micky D’s, but here I’m the real Burger KING…
Ure lines are old and stink, like month old grime around tha toilet ring…
^^^OKAY OPENER
Can’t beat me, I pull out rhymes that electrify like faulty plug sockets…
Dude wanna steal my lines, bitch tryin to Jimmy the King’s Pocketz…
^^^GOOD NAME PLAY
I’ll slash ya cuz like “dead crews” u always getting “rocked-by-cuts”…
I’m Cena, u can’t see me, like dickheads ure eyes get “blocked-by-nuts”…
^^DECENT PUNCH
Welcome to my nightmare, think u can beat me, ure just another dreamer…
Lyrically blowin me off cuz ure rhymes suck more than a vacuum cleaner…
^^^PLAYED
I’ll be known as a Mafia Boss the way I’ll have u sleepin with the fishes…
Face it after this battle ure ass is gonna be washed up like dirty dishes…
^^^^2 BASIC FAM..

Read this in Slomo..u Homo..This ya Dick Fiend Queen Promo
Like Lebron in War By Himself......Your not really a "King Solo"
^^^NAH...DIDN'T LIKE DIS
You want respect..Batteling Kids if any.nuthin but Pure Bitches
Ya Hit Attempts Remind me of Griffey Blind Folded..Pure Misses
^^^^WEAK PUNCH...
U Kinda like a Nervous Diahria Patient......Nuthin but Pre Shitz
And ya Battle History Resembles the Bible..Nuthin but Pre Writz
^^^^SECOND LINE WAS DECENT
If Rv gave out Awards...You Defenetly wouldnt have a Full Shelf Better than Me?...Like u Swallowing ya Cum..U Full of ya Self
^^^GOOD CONCEPT..BUT U WORDED DIS FUKKED UP
For no damn reason should i Duck u...Im Posed 2 Shiver Right?
If you were a Virgin Ups Worker..You still Coudlnt Deliver Tight
^^UHHH..KIND OF CLEVER

V/KING SOLO....dis shit was kind of close

RETURN DA FAVOR LINKS IN MY SIG

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uppin this bitch again..................................

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Voted For: KiNg SoLo

Ok battle.

King Solo:
Weak beginning, but you got better as you went along. Your metas were a little weak, but your punches made up for it. Not great punches, but the wordplay was good in one spot. Work on your flow though. Not that creative, a Cena line is not that strong. Too much self glorifying as well. Overall work on making punches and not self glorification lines.

(Jimmy Pocketz):
This is one of the weakest verses I've seen from you. Metas are played and weak, as are your punches. Really no personals, just wordplay on his name. Your wordplay was decent, but not that witty. Your flow is ok, but that one line I had to re read cuz you messed up when typing it, but that didn't hurt you. Your verse was just too simple and not that creative.

Overall, both of you need to work on better personals and punches. Wordplay on a name is not a personal.

v/King Solo

Voted For: KiNg SoLo

Ouch. Wow, Pockets i can't believe the verse i read here. That shit was garbage dogg, for real. Solo came wit some good wordplay , very solid verse. He won all categories, this was like not even close, so i ain't gonna do my standard breakdown. A lotta your punches were just worded and set up horrible. I've seen worlds better from you Pockets, shake this one of and get back to it. Vote: King Solo

-CJ-