what is this cat talkin about.. anyways... uppin

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uppin this battle its still only one vote in here.

Voted For: Golden shellz

Aii Breakdown

Flow-Aii If ANybody hade good flow in this battle itll have to be Golden shellz I Mean Even His Structure SHOWS good flow so I had to give him My vote for flows

Punchez-Aii This Was A hard Decision Bcuz DoContinue Started off with a really nice bar but then he lacked to keep his verse on track but Golden Jus kept it comin every other bar so thats why he takes punchez

Personalz-DEF Golden Sheelz he dug up some Dirt On Docontinue LOL So Of course he takes personals

Multie-Nobody- i Didnt see any real Multies so this area doesnt go to anyone

Vocab- Again Nobody Didnt Really Focus on Good use of Vocab So Again Another empty category

Originality- You Both Were Very Original But Of course Golden Takes it ...his verse was original bcuz he jus didnt focus on hard punchez he also focus on personals and thats what made it more original made it have less chances to have played bars and stuff do you know what I mean ?

my v/ Golden Shellz

And Oh yeah This is an adiquite Vote Jus Look At The rules LOL

DoContinue You Owe My Money/ vote

Golden Shells Can You RTF PLease

Golden doesnt have to return the favor because if he does then i wont pay you anything. only one person needs to return it. its not fair for you to get two votes from your one vote... but anyways, im finna go hit up ur battle. thanx for tha vote cali

iight im up in dis battle now so lets get more votes in dis battle

this is takin to long man uppin this battle.......

Voted For: DoContinue

aiight lets see this shit:

DC:
This kid needs help, i told him his vocab need "raisin"
so he got fruity, wrote a verse, and then threw grapes in
um, opener was nice, punch was ok... 5/10
yo ass get layed out, wit gats you sprayed out
like every house party punch, ya shit's kid n' played out
umm.... not really feelin' it 3/10
golden shellz's a punk coward, know that he aint beatin me
he like the simpsons, yellow bellied and erased easily...
ok................ 4/10
ya style's as dusted as the front lines in IRAQ
like warren sapp, you'll be retired wit two nines to ya back
haha....... nice. feelin' this one. got my attention 7/10
besides the fact that you 'dumb', you cant speak clearly
battles in text but got tha nerve to holla "nobody's hearin me"
lmao..... wow, liked this..... 8/10
but feel renewal, you could shine wit a pound of a jewel....
but rappin wit LIL JOHN wouldn't issue you the sound of approval
(YEAAAAAH!)
oh, shit, pickin' it up towards the end. nice 7/10
im livin tha truth, hittin you goofs, my sound heavy like thunder
assemble ya troops? but like you suspended from math class.... you already "out-numbered"
hmm.. not bad............. 4/10

overall, real nice verse man. You started weak, had me fallin' asleep on the keyboard. But then that sap line made me go, oh damn!!... and then kept it goin' wit next two punches. nice man... good shit....... 35/70

Ok, GS:
I thought about battlin a herb but who better to choose
no sense in wastin 5 credits if u know that you'll lose
ok, too basic........ 3/10
Ya rhymes is preschool all patty-cakes and rattles
thimk u gangsta? just coz KIN-Ethic declined ur battle
ok............... 3/10
losing to this nigga is like losing to a "SUBTLE" fag
i'll treat like gym clothes carried in a duffle bag
nah, not really hard......... 3/10
u supposed to be a flyweight? ha ur just new to da game
why view poll results there aint gonna be 100% by ya name
tooo basic.......... 4/10
my personals are like "dunks" ill posterize this guy
call me "IMAGETITAN" coz u beneath me like a posted reply
nice, not bad....... 5/10
Ludacris? nah but my lyrics make u say "oh" like a Ciara music video
after the poll is closed ill still be here "continuing" on this "hoe"
nah............ 3/10

Nah, not really that great of a verse, man. You didn't really have that much good shit in this. Flow was cool, but work on wordplay and wit in your verses. Decent drop, I guess tho. 21/70

Overall, IMO this battle was one-sided. Docontiune took this easy. Those 3 punches in a row were only lines worth mentionin' to me in this batle. v/DC

also RTF on this battle or vote WILL be removed. Trust me:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197037

well uppin this battle i guess for more votes.....

Voted For: DoContinue

vote = docontinue.

docontinue, u had better punches, a couple nice multies, n sum of yo lines made me laugh.

golden shells, yo shit wuz good, but i didnt git sum of yo punches, no hate or nuffin mayn


This kid needs help, i told him his vocab need "raisin"
so he got fruity, wrote a verse, and then threw grapes in

lmmfao

like warren sapp, you'll be retired wit two nines to ya back

lmao, werd, good battle............................................ .
.................................... werd

dddddaaaaaaamnnnn this shit still aint closed ayyo uppin this battle

uppin this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMFG this is takin toooooo long!

uppin,.......................vote, i will RTF.......

uppin this battle---------------------------------

Voted For: DoContinue

I thought about battlin a herb but who better to choose
no sense in wastin 5 credits if u know that you'll lose
4...weak shit...
Ya rhymes is preschool all patty-cakes and rattles
thimk u gangsta? just coz KIN-Ethic declined ur battle
5...an Ok personal i guess...
losing to this nigga is like losing to a "SUBTLE" fag
i'll treat like gym clothes carried in a duffle bag
3....weak...c'mon.
u supposed to be a flyweight? ha ur just new to da game
why view poll results there aint gonna be 100% by ya name
2...no punch.....self glorifing
my personals are like "dunks" ill posterize this guy
call me "IMAGETITAN" coz u beneath me like a posted reply
6...ok...i haven't heard this before.
Ludacris? nah but my lyrics make u say "oh" like a Ciara music video
after the poll is closed ill still be here "continuing" on this "hoe
4..not much of a punch...

This kid needs help, i told him his vocab need "raisin"
so he got fruity, wrote a verse, and then threw grapes in
6...liked the concept..wit the raisin/raisin...but the 2nd line coulda been something better.
yo ass get layed out, wit gats you sprayed out
like every house party punch, ya shit's kid n' played out
3...wasn't liking this one.
golden shellz's a punk coward, know that he aint beatin me
he like the simpsons, yellow bellied and erased easily...
5...decent punch...
ya style's as dusted as the front lines in IRAQ
like warren sapp, you'll be retired wit two nines to ya back
6...good flowing...shoulda made that dust/FL thingy the punch IMO.
besides the fact that you 'dumb', you cant speak clearly
battles in text but got tha nerve to holla "nobody's hearin me"
5....ok...
but feel renewal, you could shine wit a pound of a jewel....
but rappin wit LIL JOHN wouldn't issue you the sound of approval
(YEAAAAAH!)
4...aaah....i wuzn't likin this..sorry,
im livin tha truth, hittin you goofs, my sound heavy like thunder
assemble ya troops? but like you suspended from math class.... you already "out-numbered"
5....straight punch

OK...decent battle here.
But Docontinue got it IMO.
Tho some lines,like the raisin one,coulda been worded better 'n shit.
Golden Cat...
U had some basic and weak punches.That 5 credit one..now..the problem with that is..it's just another one of 'em "I ain't wasting my time on you" lines.And that's played.Two lines on the polls too.Sounded repitative.Don't use same concepts twice.They were completly different in termz of wat they were saying..but it wuz still ABOUT polls.Get more creative.

Vote-Docontinue
RTF BELOW :thumbup:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209188

uppin this old ass battle right here--------------