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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

Big City:

He couldn’t get sick wit a nasty germ
That fact is ya structure crashed and burned like Mc hammers tax return
^^good multies and meta but stretched 6/10
Ya rhymes is shit son, its really showin in ya vowels
U treat battles like washing machines, u always throwin in the towel
^^dope bar 9/10
The demands’ll be final,… u and ya mans will b bridal
Just like tha mage in ya sig,… your lil fantasy’s final
^^good meta and personal 8/10
City comin thru, gunnin dudes, give him a hundred blues
Can’t have illegitimate kids, so I’ll admit to Son’n YOU
^^good bar 6/10
Listen dirt bag, I squirt mags, suffocate you with my jerk rag
U aint hard just becuz it says, Triple X on ya shirt tag
^^woo fire 10/10
DAMN….After u, dog I’ve seen the worst
How u gon b about kinetics when u can’t MOVE people to read ya verse
^^good meta but stretched 6/10

Overall: 45/60 (75%)

Kinethic:

Punches are Aim'd-To-Do-Harm & 'Run All Over City' like a police Chase-In-A-Car .. Only tracks u lace are Blazed-On-Ya-Arms So punches leave 'Big City Out Of Place' like Hicks Raised-On-The Farm!! (KO?)
^^dope bar nice multies and metas 14/20
Ya this Newb-Is-Sick once i Spew-The-Shit & 'Hit Every City Corner' like my Crew-Be-Pimps! .. ya punches dont Move-Me-Bitch but mine 'Destroy The Big City' like day after tommorrow Movie-Clips!!
^^wooo fire again 18/20
Im Landing-Cuts-Demanding-Such a Commandin-Bluff while u just Rambling-Stuff! .. U prolly Planning-To-Duck cuz ill 'Quickly Put An End To Cit/Sit' like Standing-Up!!
^^dope bar again 8/10
Punches break ur Tooths-&-Ears & Bruise-Ya-Beard! .. Ill Have ya Crew-Get-Smeared & Punch Threw-They-Gear! Plus ill 'Flip & Shake The Big City' Like New York Snow Globe Sovenieurs!!
^^nice shit 8/10

Overall: 48/60 (80%)

Dope fucking battle probably the best i have seen in FL since i was battling here

Vote: Kinethic

Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

Punches are Aim'd-To-Do-Harm & 'Run All Over City' like a police Chase-In-A-Car .. Only tracks u lace are Blazed-On-Ya-Arms So punches leave 'Big City Out Of Place' like Hicks Raised-On-The Farm!! (KO?)
Lol. Nice nameplay. Creative concept.
Ya this Newb-Is-Sick once i Spew-The-Shit & 'Hit Every City Corner' like my Crew-Be-Pimps! .. ya punches dont Move-Me-Bitch but mine 'Destroy The Big City' like day after tommorrow Movie-Clips!!
Lmao. Nice ass nameplay again.
Im Landing-Cuts-Demanding-Such a Commandin-Bluff while u just Rambling-Stuff! .. U prolly Planning-To-Duck cuz ill 'Quickly Put An End To Cit/Sit' like Standing-Up!! (ROFL!)
Lol. Nice nameplay.
Punches break ur Tooths-&-Ears & Bruise-Ya-Beard! .. Ill Have ya Crew-Get-Smeared & Punch Threw-They-Gear! Plus ill 'Flip & Shake The Big City' Like New York Snow Globe Sovenieurs!! (KO!)
Wow... That's just Illy. Dope ass concept.

He couldn’t get sick wit a nasty germ
That fact is ya structure crashed and burned like Mc hammers tax return
Ok Ok... First part is blah... Second is cool.
Ya rhymes is shit son, its really showin in ya vowels
U treat battles like washing machines, u always throwin in the towel
Lol. Decent.
The demands’ll be final,… u and ya mans will b bridal
Just like tha mage in ya sig,… your lil fantasy’s final
Ok. This is straight. Ok personal.
City comin thru, gunnin dudes, give him a hundred blues
Can’t have illegitimate kids, so I’ll admit to Son’n YOU
Played concept playa.
Listen dirt bag, I squirt mags, suffocate you with my jerk rag
U aint hard just becuz it says, Triple X on ya shirt tag
Umm... Ok? This is ok. A lot of assumption though.
DAMN….After u, dog I’ve seen the worst
How u gon b about kinetics when u can’t MOVE people to read ya verse
Lol. This was prolly ya dopest bar.

Punches - Kin*Ethic™ - His nameplays killed it, while Big City didn't have many.
Personals - Kin*Ethic™ - Nameplays.
Wordplay - Kin*Ethic™ - The Cit/Sit wordplay won it for him.
Creativity - Kin*Ethic™ - His first and last bar were pretty creative while City had a sonnin' you line. Lol.
Complexity - Kin*Ethic™ - His nameplay punchlines got him this.
Multies - Kin*Ethic™ - Obviously.
Structure - Big City - Obviously.

Vote - Kin*Ethic™ - He came harder with punchlines and made it more personal with all his nameplays.

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Voted For: Big City

ay im just checkin out the polllsss.......................

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rofalmo wtf!! .......... this guy checkin polls and votes .. how you get rid of that?

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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

kin:
Punches are Aim'd-To-Do-Harm & 'Run All Over City' like a police Chase-In-A-Car .. Only tracks u lace are Blazed-On-Ya-Arms So punches leave 'Big City Out Of Place' like Hicks Raised-On-The Farm!! (KO?)
^^DOPE OPENER...ITS KIND OF HARD 2 FOLLOW YA STRUCTURE BUT I DID DA NAME PLAYS WERE CRAZEE
Ya this Newb-Is-Sick once i Spew-The-Shit & 'Hit Every City Corner' like my Crew-Be-Pimps! .. ya punches dont Move-Me-Bitch but mine 'Destroy The Big City' like day after tommorrow Movie-Clips!!
^^^^WOW....DA SECOND BAR WAS SICK
Im Landing-Cuts-Demanding-Such a Commandin-Bluff while u just Rambling-Stuff! .. U prolly Planning-To-Duck cuz ill 'Quickly Put An End To Cit/Sit' like Standing-Up!! (ROFL!)
^^^^ANOTHER GOOD NAME PLAY..
Punches break ur Tooths-&-Ears & Bruise-Ya-Beard! .. Ill Have ya Crew-Get-Smeared & Punch Threw-They-Gear! Plus ill 'Flip & Shake The Big City' Like New York Snow Globe Sovenieurs!! (KO!)
^^^^LOL..YO I THOUGHT I WAS DA 1 DAT USES NAME PLAYS ALOT...DAT LAST LINE WAS SICK...


big city:
He couldn’t get sick wit a nasty germ
That fact is ya structure crashed and burned like Mc hammers tax return
^^^I WAS FEELIN DA MULTI BUT DA HAMMER PUNCH WAS WACK
Ya rhymes is shit son, its really showin in ya vowels
U treat battles like washing machines, u always throwin in the towel
^^^I LIKE DIS SHIT...VERY ORIGINAL
The demands’ll be final,… u and ya mans will b bridal
Just like tha mage in ya sig,… your lil fantasy’s final
^^^WACK PERSONAL
City comin thru, gunnin dudes, give him a hundred blues
Can’t have illegitimate kids, so I’ll admit to Son’n YOU
^^NAH
Listen dirt bag, I squirt mags, suffocate you with my jerk rag
U aint hard just becuz it says, Triple X on ya shirt tag
^^^AGAIN YA MULTIS WERE BUT DA PUNCH WAS WEAK
DAMN….After u, dog I’ve seen the worst
How u gon b about kinetics when u can’t MOVE people to read ya verse
^^^GOOD PERSONAL I WOULDN'T OF GOT IT IF U AINT EXPLAIN IT



okay...i gotta go with kin he was consistant thru out dis battle...even tho he had nothin but name plays he came real creative....city u were off n on fam and ya punches were real weak

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Kinethic you ripped this hoe

and Big City

Why didnt You Checkin The battle?

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end this already damn people .. this site sucks for voting ....

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aight
pretty decent battle here y'all...

B.C:
Pretty decent verse, the main thing i'ma fault is that you seem ta have a certain style with your flow that suites O.M's but dosent really have an effect in battles.....overall ya had some decent ideas, few nice bars with good wordplay, but ya personals an punches have ta stand out, an sorry but i cant really say ''oooh'' ta any of your lines, no hate...you know u my boy, an i dont like voting against my peoples, but i need ta get some votes on my shit lol

Kin:
good verse, structure is fuckin awful
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each line seperated an not all bunched up, maybe you got the strucre from another site or somthin but anyway...ya had dope rhymes, good hard hittin creative punchlines that get u the win.................

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