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~Babylon~ 05-15-05 03:27 PM

Voted For: MuRcInAl

Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
no!.......
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
ummm no!
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
coo......
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
better!

overal an ok verse nothing really great.....only 2 lines were even deicent.......


Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
no!
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
NO!
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
umm...the first line was better...should switched it around
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
ummmm....NO!

not good at all..........



neither verse was good they both sucked.......so yall need to improve alot......

v/Oz

Big City 05-15-05 04:50 PM

Voted For: MuRcInAl

return the favor Please

ehhh i wasnt feelin this battle too much, seemed kinda half assed from both of u. but i think Oz just edged it out cuz his punches contained personals, nah mean. yall both need to work on ya flows tho, it made ya drops difficult to read.

pandemonium=u had some potential in ya verse but u didnt follow through with it, i kept waitin for it to get better but it just stayed the same, plus clown and ounce dont rhyme, thats a stretch for ya opener
Pandemoniums best bar=
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
^i liked this bar right here, nice set up n good delivery

Oz=ur drop was decent, work on ya flow and the set up of ya punches tho. and add some multies too.
Oz's best bar=
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
^^i was gonna vote for pandemonium until i read this bar, i think this one just edged it out for u

overall=oz takes this shit cuz his punches had personals so they just hit harder
RETURN THE FAVOR PLEASE, links are in the sig


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