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B. Magik 04-23-05 09:06 AM

^^ Lmao...He wasnt battlin armada...he was battlin me...u didnt even read the battle did u? Sry Kesse, but this vote will be removed

King Solo 04-23-05 09:24 AM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

Ya squad is weak, I'll rip you apart with speech
Watch this gay chump, get "raked up" like "autumn leaves"
6...nice opener, gud meta!!
Don't start with me, you garbage dude!
Ya flow is rookie, now watch me "expose this pussy" like "prostitutes" *
5...not feelin it. structure is off and 1st line is filler!!
It aint a fable you wack kid, I'll leave you unable to back-bend
After I'm thru clappin "shots at ya dish" like "cable assasins" **
6...nice line....clever and no need to explain!!
You'll get destroyed, Black~Magik is hot, this faggot is not
So I'll put this "jack in a box" like a "childrens toy" ***
4...meh, i get how u tryin to rhyme but it aint workin still!!
Aint Nobody matchin me, especially this actress queen
face it, ya flows couldn't "bounce back" with "matress springs"
7...funny. best line so far!!
I'll attack his spleen, cock and bust, let the shots erupt
And leave his whole body with "no lid" like "topless cups"
6...another gud meta...sum nice shit!!
When I'm 'squeezin the tech', I'm easily bringing 'heat to ya chest'
Plus I'll "shove my nikes up your ass" just to "keep it in check" ****
7...hot line!! that nike shit was nice!!
I'm Godly ho, stay "packin heat" like "Dominoes" *****
Damn dawg, all I need is a "tampon" to "stop your flow" ******
8...LMFAO!! i love the 2nd line!! funny shit! tampon lines are funny!!
You're thru if you try me, look dawg, you losing is likely
And please, you couldn't "Be G" if you were that "group from the nineties" *******
6...gud line...Beegees shit cud've been done better!!
Show respect to the guy, and if you question that I'm the best when I rhyme
Look dawg, you got shit "fucked up" like "sex in the sky!"
7...gud closer, a lot of nice metas in ya verse!!

OVERALL: 62/100 (62%)


fusion of color and witchcraft, you having a whack name is my only conclusion
'hip-hop's theme music'??? oh i get it, that must be part of the illusion
6...funny opener, nice play on his name!!
a delusion? you can think whatever you want when my punches go through you
no confusion, you wont be winning this battle just cause your into voodoo
4...this line was weak man, Kesse ya better than this!!
cause your not impressive at all...actually your skills are quite tragic
you aint putting on any show, cause B............... you just lack magic
7...hot 2nd line, gud play on his name again!!
fact is, the way he stiffens men.... you could call him the human starch
cause only time hes droppin anythin golden, is if hes on top of the arch
6...clever bar, sum gud shit!!
st.louis kid has skill? things must look different from a bird's eye view
how bout i ram this loss down your throat, and you can sing RV the blues
6...nice line again!!
what are you gunna do....stir up a potion with bat ears or warts of a toad
cause the only time your rhymes ever sound any good......are in morse code
6...ok line, but that morse code shit wasn't done that well!
pms me asking for a 'challenge', so i know you musta prewritten your lines
i should be fine, cause for you its a challenge just to write decent rhymes
4...GAY! GAY! I hate pre-writ lines!! NO!!
youll never hit any primes, always be some punk ass teen who just drops for fun
funny how your interests are rap and pussy....you aint familiar with either one
8...LMAO!!! funny shit!!
we all know your name is an equation, that squiggle sign is really a minus
and you can add whack to the problem, because youre reppin emericas finest
7...nice personals in there!!
'once you go rap, you never go back'...just too bad you never got an invite
cause like your name, your rap future is a mirage that will never see light
6...ok closer!! not a bad verse!!

OVERALL: 60/100 (60%)


a real close battle................
both came with the punches all hittin relatively hard, some extra and funny!! what lost Kesse the battle was that one weak line he dropped and then that GAY ASS pre-writ line cuz i realy do not like them!!! black came with some mad metas and shit and overall it won him the battle!!

V/ - Black Magik

rtf hoez!!! links in my siggy!!

Germ 04-23-05 02:00 PM

word, yeah......i couldn't think of anythin else...plus, yeah, new kids vote is crack, whatever, its coo/black, you still want in my crew, or are you leavin for a while?

B. Magik 04-23-05 06:29 PM

yeah I still want it...but I wont be that active for a lil bit, so dont add me to the roster yet

Germ 04-23-05 06:58 PM

word, just get at me whenever you're ready, yo....

B. Magik 04-23-05 11:56 PM

Uppin for more votes...Come on bitches!!!!!!!!!!!!

B. Magik 04-24-05 09:52 AM

Weerd...Uppin this shit...

B. Magik 04-24-05 01:25 PM

uppin to the fuckin roof...

immortality 04-24-05 08:42 PM

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 
wow nice battle checkin the pollz since i cant vote

B. Magik 04-24-05 08:43 PM

uppin thru the fuckin roof...

Key... 04-24-05 11:44 PM

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 
checkin.....polls...interestin battle.........................

Germ 04-25-05 08:11 AM

indeed.......................................uppin

B. Magik 04-25-05 03:57 PM

Uppin thru the fuckin roof...someone fuckin vote!!!!!

Freestyle-King 04-25-05 04:01 PM

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187638
iight hit this shit up and when i get enough votes i will return da favor

B. Magik 04-25-05 09:33 PM

Will someone please fuckin vote on this shit?? Tryin to get shit closed! Please explain all votes!! Uppin to the fuckin roof...

Germ 04-26-05 09:39 AM

yup...............................................

B. Magik 04-26-05 11:35 AM

Vote on this you gay fags!!! Stupid homosexuals...

B. Magik 04-26-05 02:37 PM

Y wont anyone vote?!?!? Lets CLOSE THIS FUCKIN BATTLE!!! JESUS CHRIST!!! WAY TOO MANY LOOKS...Someone drop a FUCKIN VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Germ 04-26-05 02:39 PM

^ what he said....................................

B. Magik 04-26-05 05:45 PM

uppin..........

Germ 04-26-05 06:05 PM

^ what he said....................................

Stanza 04-26-05 07:42 PM

Voted For: Kesse

Aii This Is What I Think

Kesse
STOP EXPLAINING YOUR VERSE!!!!

If ppl Dont Understnad then You Can Jus tell em to Stay Out bcuz when You explain your verse its makes it look so simplistic and Plain and it doesnt add that flare to it when ppl figure out what it really means so at the end stop explaining your verse man Bcuz you got some fire .......and I Think Personally That You Do Deserve This Win Bcuz You did drop harder and more complex .....Next time Dont Explain Your verse you might lose a vote LOL
RTF In Either battle Link In My SIg

Black~Magik
Aii Man You Started off nice but then Your lines got shortened then your verse got more and more simple and basic so I really didnt think that you would come so simple so it surprised me but i think that you started off nice then you jus let the battle slide like you already hade the win withh the first bar..........:nono: thats how alot of people lose battles Understimating Oppenents SO ...I cant give you the vote

RTF in Either battle link in my sig

BOTH OF YOU RTF!!!!!!!!!! *ASAP*

Stanza 04-26-05 07:45 PM

No Hate to either of you

Yall know yall my Dogs I Jus nEed some votes in my battles so i can get them closed

So If you can can You Hit up Both of them?

PLEASE!!!

You should know who to vote for the stats is in my sig.....Please atleast RTF

and again NICE BATTLE

B. Magik 04-26-05 10:48 PM

Iight man...Uppin this shot for more votes...

Germ 04-26-05 11:25 PM

^ what he said............................................

Kin*Ethicâ„¢ 04-26-05 11:47 PM

Voted For: Kesse

Vote-Kesse

Explanation: Ehh both verses were decent .. black doesnt get the vote cuz almost all his punches are maaaaaaaaaaaad played except for a few .. plus kesse came way more personal on him while blak didnt come personal at all...big ups stay elevating .. plz return the vote both of you on my battle with big city

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

B. Magik 04-27-05 07:48 AM

Uppin...............

Germ 04-27-05 08:18 AM

table.............................................

B. Magik 04-27-05 03:57 PM

Uppin...............

Germ 04-27-05 05:23 PM

beach............................................. .....

Stanza 04-27-05 05:27 PM

Hey Neither One of Yall RTF ............I Only Have one Battle so Both of yall can hit it up The linx in my sig

Please RTF

Ryan Hughes 04-27-05 05:31 PM

Voted For: Kesse

Vkesse....this was the best battle i seen lately you both came wit it but ima have to go wit kesse....he came wit good personals an consistent punchs that had good wordplay mixed wit good vocab an structure was on point..Black u came wit some hot punchs but some were a little played ur closer was hot an u had good structure but u didnt keep consistent wit the creative punchs.....No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR...
Opener=k
Closer=Tie
Personals=k
Structure=Tie
Punchs=K
Multi's=tie
Wordplay=k
Vocab=k
Overall=Kesse

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

B. Magik 04-27-05 10:06 PM

Wow...ok...uppin...

Germ 04-27-05 11:52 PM

^ what he said........................................

Germ 04-28-05 08:00 AM

bah.........uppin, gettin votes removed is only slowing this down

B. Magik 04-28-05 04:03 PM

Uppin this motherfucker...

morse code 04-28-05 05:06 PM

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 
holy shit, this was a nice battle if you ask me, i aint gonna vote though, just cehckin the pollz, nice job by both...

B. Magik 04-28-05 08:16 PM

Uppin thru the fuckin roof...

50Cal. 04-28-05 08:35 PM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

ok punches personals and dissses were even on this both came hard as fuck and dropped dope but kesse your shit was streched changing the font wont help it was streched bad flow wwasnt there it was hard to follow in parts while blacks flowed smoothly due to dope multis and just a much better write to it also black had a funnier verse so all that combined made his verse more enjoyable so i gotta go with him good drop by both rtf on link in sig.

Stu 04-28-05 10:00 PM

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 
uppin this shit for more votes...yep this is Black~Magik...


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