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i hope not..........................................
that was short but explained.....please leave it alone you want explaination, he gave it to you |
This was feedback posted for hotshh!
checkin pollz, idk who won, its split to me///////
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lol yo hot fam now i really think ur gay ...u voted 4 typical in me n his battle..and he votes 4 u in me n ur battle...lol....funny shit but when u ready da stop bein a bitch and battle me offline holla
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u cant be serious......
this battle should be closed . . . u can beat everybody else.....u cant fuck with me....at all in multis... nope in KLL, ill be up for championship youll watch in korv, YOU WONT LAST... and you dqing all my votes proved my 1st bar....snitching for survival i merk you hands down...... leave it alone....i liked your style. but it aint fucking with me dont start no gay beef with me you shoulda blacklisted typ like i shoulda blacklisted flow we even..... no matter if u win or lose, we both know i won....leave it alone |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
RETURN THE FAVOR pretty hot battle here, yall both came with some nice drops but ima go wit MarvJay on this one. I was feelin his verse more, it was more complex, and easy to understand at the same time. Plus the punches in his joint were better in my mind and hit harder. Marv Jay- nice verse from you, you really brought that fire in this battle. some pretty good punches, and really nice multies helpd ya verse flow real well. had some good creative lines in there makin ya shit more thorough sounding *Marv Jays best bar*= no1 stopin dis bastard!,u lyin 2 ppl on rv hot ur an actress go hop in a casket. u wouldn't have a "buzz in da hood" if u put ya "intercom on da top of ya jacket". ^^hot shit, my fav bar of your verse good delivery n erething hotshh!-pretty good verse from you, didn't like ya opener tho, and some of your punches didn't really land. you had decent-good flow and nice structure. could have come harder wit some better multies tho, maybe that woulda upped ya verse's quality a lil more. but overall pretty good verse from you. *hotshh! best bar*= I done whored em in multi's, but marv smoke weed, i can Tell Cause he came back for seconds..... and left with another "L" ^i liked this punch, nice set up and goo delivery, hit pretty hard overal=marv got my verse, his punches was just hittin harder and i liked his multies better. good shit from both PLEASE HIT ME BACK!! return the favor, links are in theSIG |
............................................^^^^my 1st line is the truest personal i ever said
the second bar was confirmed by this kid when he got 3 votes dq but gather ya friends....................... |
lol yo shut up nigga u aint win shit...u'll take any fukkin vote u cant get
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i know u aint talking
if i win again, you'll send it to complaints.......... dont even know whats the point.... |
Voted For: hotshh!
I think that hotshh! got this battle because i feel that hotshh! came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt hotshh! got it was effective and was on point marvjay1009 you should of been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to hotshh! good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to hotshh! and flow and structure i'll give to hotshh!. Marv i think what lets you down sometimes is the stretched structure effects your verse, try and cut it down some... V/hotshh! RTF In My Sig 3 days or vote removed |
u neva won so shut da fukk up u dickhead...dis da battle of ya life...dis aint shit 2 me...cum on i done said dat weave line like 2 years ago...da droppin dymes shit is played ur a rv mc u have a rv style
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2 days until RTF deadline.........................
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lets get this straight, battle of my life? i beat you b4, http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174225 it was a KO in MULTI'S! AND you had punches, i told you, imagine a text battle....and you came with some busted shit in that too, dont believe me? lets see.... im 2 sick,and u bitch!..i just got a new 5th so fam a few clips. a hit a head n leave u like da "yankee's when babe died","roof-less".*ruth* YOUR SETUP IS ALWAYS SELF GLORIFY type of guns i hold make kops-get-scared,chill! ya not-sick-quer. he raps like "nelly" ppl came da see marv spit no1 cares if "HOT in here"* AGAIN, AND NOW YOU GOT GUNS ONLINE, WOW...AND A NELLY PUNCH! HOW FRESH!! no1 stopin dis bastard!,u lyin 2 ppl on rv hot ur an actress go hop in a casket. u wouldn't have a "buzz in da hood" if u put ya "intercom on da top of ya jacket". OHHHH, MULTIS, IN A TEXT BATTLE, WTF, STRETCHED AND HORRIBLY WORDED dis fagget lie's!...talkin bout in da bronx he shoot his gun & be stabin guy's. put jay in ya PaRa-graph PaRa-medics gon tell ya moms her boy's PaRa-lized. SETUP, NEVER SAID THAT, AND OHHH LOOK HOW MANY TIMES HE SAID PARA...UNIQUE vets think ur still a noob who wants dis dick in a crew,he does alot of bickerin 2. u spit with da flu?,no u "da medicine man" well i know "women sicker" than u. WOMEN SICKER THAN ME...NOW IMA CRY... couldn't "see marv" on his "bp page",im cool u dont wanna c-me-rage. u'll neva get on da radio usin ya "demo as a frisby" a be da only time ya "Cd-plays" ANOTHER SELF GLORIFY INTO A PLAYED PUNCH....... MOST YA PUNCHES BE PLAYED ANYWAY, TOO STRETCHED TO SPIT TO A BEAT...NO PERSONALS IN ANY OF YA BATTLES... SO THAT MEANS YOU JUST INSERT PRE WRITTEN SHIT INTO YA VERSES. AND YOU THE BEST? NIGGA YOU ME IN MY 2ND MONTH ONLINE.. AND BY THE WAY, YOU THINK IMA TEXT HEAD? THIS THE 1ST TIME I EVER DID TEXT WAS THIS SITE...TOOK ME MAD LONG TO ADJUST, READ MY 1ST SHITS YOU'LL SEE THE DIFFERENCE. IN THE STREET I'D MERK YOU EASILY, NIGGA CANT SPIT TO NO BEAT... AND THIS AINT SWAYING, ANYONE WHO READS THIS VOTED ALREADY OR AINT GONNA VOTE.. AT BEST, YOU PRETTY GOOD........BUT YOU AINT BETTER THAN ME. PERIOD |
wish i could vote.
would of honestly given it to hotshh! |
Lmaoooo U Been On Dis Site Madd Fukkin Long Stop Frontin Bitch....and I Asked U A Thousand Times...lets Battle In Da Streets 4 Some Doe...nuff Said I Can Get Da Cam Corda U Just Show Up...and Im 1009 Times Betta Than U Fagget And Typical Got Some Dickridin Crew Goin Along Dat Shit Is Gon Stop Tho...and U Currently Have 2 Unexplained Votes They Will Get Taken Away Lol..
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yeah i know you will
listen the whole site is aware of this battle, you just looking like a bitch by getting everything dq'd, ...and i been on this site for mad long? u joined in dec and almost got more posts than me....hahahaha you have no life when im back in the city this summer we'll see whats up |
1 day...don't think i'm kidding...you and another 2 battles are gonna get my vote removed RTF please...it doesn't hurt...oh no refunds so once it's gone...it's gone
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lol^^.....look stupid i have 1,400 somthin post...im no where near u so dat was dumb...nobody can call me a bitch cuzz they cant fukk with me...n a lose is nothin 2 me i just want explained votes datz it
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on EVERY battle? and ONLY when your losing?
i wont beef wit you marv, its gay...if i lose fine...but i hate checking on battles every day,let the shit close outta dem 3 votes DQ'd, one was un explained, you just think cats is gonna drop novels for votes.....its a miracle if a battle closes as fast as this one almost did, the more u dq the longer it'll be b4 someone votes and the battle finishes i bet if YOU were up 4-2 wit the same votes i had you wouldnt have DQ'd ya votes cause they was unexplained..you'd take it....dont give me that i had a battle with like 600 views and 2 votes that expired, dont tell me ever1 DR's me...cats barely vote, THATS why i was mad, u got more than half my votes DQ'd |
Voted For: hotshh!
Chose Winners Verse: All my votes are Liable.......cause you be snitching for Survival Marv dropped so many dimes, he got a bank account with 5-0 Nice Bar could be better worded tho... So of course marv J "runshit"....... he too broke for a Whip!! Da last time u hopped on anything dat move, was Strobe Dick I'm feeling that set up and the punch was relevent nice... Ha! Im starving to play, cuz on da ball court u are what u Say Ya shots miss on the net, Ive always owned a 'Marvolous JAy' this is kinda weak.. but still decent... I done whored em in multi's, but marv smoke weed, i can Tell Cause he came back for seconds..... and left with another "L" LMAO i definitely liked this one for some reason... U need 2 eave son, no beast on the beat, we dont Believe em U only visit "trackmasters" when ya girl gets her Weave done ahah Pretty Nice Bar here.. So say hello to Defeat......... and kiss goodbye your Streak Nightmares? HA!....... america reads ya shit to fall Asleep nice closer... i liked this...(silly internet geeks!!) Okay So Overall: Hotshh you came pretty original... your punches were hitting hard the whole way thru.. also your flow and structure was on point.. you had plenty of personals.. your verse was pretty edgy and i enjoyed reading it.. the only line i wasnt feel too much was the basketball line.. it coulda been done better but hey it was still nice... MarvJay: Your Verse was nice.. but your structure is very hard to read.. also you have a tendency to come played on your punches this time you didnt do that as much.. the only thing i really dont care for are your punches like "Buzz in Da Hood" stuff like that just isnt really what i look for... overall your verse was decent i just dont think u had what it takes to edge out hot.. pz.. |
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