yo i have a sorry battle record, cuz i dun quite understand a forum rules yet.....but check out my rideinconline.........

www.rideinconline.com/jamroom/bands/466

o yea hemz told me to tryout...........

pz

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I say yes. And not because that was good, because it wasn't a diss, more a self-glorification. But I can see where we could help you work out your text dissing. You've got potential. So I say yes. You have to be willing to elevcate though, and listen to the text heads here. Understood?

^To Retrospecktive

talking about me......................... or him

propps hemz...you gettin yourself a pretty dope roster, good job...hope shit works out for y'all..

oo never mind.............................................. .....................................

Word... Thanks.

Yeah, we're gonna help you elevate. I liked your choice of complexity in your words the most, that's your strength. Your weakness is that you tend to glorify yourself rathewr than diss your opponent... at least judging for that. Me and other textcees around here will help you understand how to find good concepts to diss people with. You'll see.

Okay, Retrospecktive, if you have any links from another site, post 'em here please, battle links. Also, if you have AIM, post it. If not, get it.

Everyone: Get your asses in here and think of a crew slogan. I like the one in my sig, but if you don't, speak now or forever hold your peace.

yea since the league isnt workin out, ill be down......if you want

We're covered in text and audio, but you can do text or audio as a secondary and do graphics as a primary if you wanna be down. Okay?

yo fam when we get our sub forum?

When strobe comes on.

yea im down, but i aint really want to be primary graphics, i dont really want a primary spot at all. but i will still make graphics if you guys want

I mean, you can be down for anything... Primary position for you is just a figurehead. So word.. You can battle audio and text still if you want.

whats good......this roster llookin tuff so ar....that black dragon kid is pretty sick......im feelin this man....lets stomp heads

yea, im still down. my "title" or "postion" in the crew doesnt matter to me. im down

Never really freestyle rap or anything i started like 2 weeks ago so this my first time on a site of rap............ and i can diss i wasn't dissing u i was freestyling because i was typing before u said diss me so my page wasn't refreshed.....

Okay... Rep us in your sig. Let's do this shit, yo. I'll find a crew for us to go merk.

Yo Mikez, your diss on dizzle was fire. Nice choice on beats again. Same with Tito Bronsky, and the one where u used Jada's beat. Good shit.
And you got nice disses goin'. I know you in the league, but battle somemore in Audio Front Lines. You got good battlin' verses. Nice freestyle towards the end, just iddn't rhyme at certain points. I was feelin' those I listened to tho. Quicksand was a bit weird... LOL...
Who's the kid? Your lil brother?

Black Dragon, you got some really good shit there, but it lies more in your songs. With your disses, it comes out okay, but it trails like you can't think of much to say after you've spit. Also, it comes out a lil bit slow, more like a Ludacris type shit. Speed it up a lil more, and think of more concepts so you can spit longer. I noticed, like I said, that songs are your strong points, so to strengthen your battling verses, I want you to join the Audio League that Mikez is in. Maintain your Soundclick with all of your battles so we can hear them. Like an elevation project.

Oh yeah, to my three audio heads, do any of you do beats? 'Cause if you do, that'll be another area for ya'll to cover, get known in.

i like the a new angle on dopeness thats straight.......

Word. Me too.

But yo, go to Front Lines and get in a battle.

im tryin to ............................................

heres 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...492#post2136492

yo 'preciate all da feedback..........

thanx emx...and quksand was me....i put an affect on my voice...and i posted up a call-out....and im in text too

Oh. LOL... Sounded like a kid.

Welcome every new person. Whus up

uh huh?!?!??......................................... ....

sup crew. damn, alotta additions since i been out. cool shit. internet isp over here on the westcoast been having problems. i should be good to go come next week.

and hey hemz, i`m 0-1 =)

I know, beyotch. :mad:

Oh yeah, we got our forum. Everyone who wants the password, IM me. GHemZ Master.

Ur not 1-0 yet, Retro. You don't get a win if your opponent never checked in. That's why it doesn't show on your battle record.

i know that lol...............................................

Oh... I saw ur sig.
Anyways, get AIM.

Yo I decided i want to run wit some new faces. but i dont wanna give up on BP so ima still try and help them get back on they feet but they aint doin shit as far as crew battles. So I wanna join this crew and still be able to help them out

I do topicals and audio. i got a new track i the audio section u can peep out. and I was co-captain of the topical portion of the original Relaunched dreamteam.

degree............6 feet is callin you out..............accept?...
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cali well drop the roster or i.............

I dun have the power to decide, but personally i am up for da audio section so, if hemz wants to put me to battle, i'm up for it...............

pz

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You'll have to wait... Everyone in my crew doesn't even know the forum password yet... LOL... Give us like 3 days... 'Cuz they've gotta get in there and look at certain things before we decide. So just be a lil' patient.