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Voted For: 1ndeph
Im Runnin on Blanks..and Your Full....But i'll still WriteThis If u were Nun Thongs Deph still couldnt Contain Tightness ^^ Opening line made no sense, 2nd was kinda played. Rv gave u a Chance 2 Be Great..,,,,.Whyy Didnt u Take It CopyWritein on Elevators.. ....is how u Protect Elevation ^ Nope, weak attempt at a punch, another played concept. Real Recognize Real but 2 Me u ....startin 2 look Faceless Cant Drop Complicated.Ya Avy said stick 2 the Basicks ^ Easily your best bar. Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest ^ Nope, shit was worded horribly and had no impact. Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On ^ Just another played concept that you worded in ya own way, it was okay compared to some of your other bars tho. I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self^ Thats laughable, I'm sure he doesnt care for an internet ''jackin'' and the second line seemed forced as fuck with the nameplay Not a good verse Troop, lacked alot of creativity an the ideas for your verse was a little basic an forced upon. I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win. so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent. ^ nah, wasnt feelin the opener, shit was weak indeph lol. you never sell records.You mouthin up untill you count em. damn,you' couldn't go platinum after your millionth album. ^ lol basic, but made me laugh. You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it. I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics. ^ I like this bar, nice flow as you read it, good personal on the jay shit too king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes. Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme. ^ Everythin was good up until the ''noone can rhyme'' part, could of used that idea on the punch a lil more creatively lol You were better as troop,You on a downhill slope. You always sucked tho, so you 100 underground zero. ^ the fuck? lol...Doesnt make sense to me. slang these days,the only way your skills benifit. cause to you bad and good must be a synonym ^ nah....dunno what you was thinkin Not a good verse either Indeph matter fact, I thought y'all would of dropped DOPE, kinda dissapointed, but Indeph had a little more consistancy with like 2 ok bars where as troop only had 1 ok bar.... Vote=indeph for being less played and less whack. |
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This was feedback posted for (Jimmy Pocketz)
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Voted For: 1ndeph
1ndeph verse I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win. so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent. ^ rhyme is off...punch aight but rhyme harmed the bar you never sell records.You mouthin up untill you count em. damn,you' couldn't go platinum after your millionth album. ^ ok bar reminded me of couldn't sell 2 copies if you pressed a double album bar by Em...nice flip You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it. I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics. ^ ok diss personal there king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes. Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme. ^ lol felt that good diss You were better as troop,You on a downhill slope. You always sucked tho, so you 100 underground zero. ^ na not feelin this rhyme again was weak slang these days,the only way your skills benifit. cause to you bad and good must be a synonym ^ ok closer ok diss one love ^ lol Overall Ok verse 1 or 2 bars wasn't really feelin the bars that didn't rhyme in my opinion woulda worked better in audio but text...na...some aight disses lol @ the midwest bar...ok verse... T.r.oo.P verse Im Runnin on Blanks..and Your Full....But i'll still WriteThis If u were Nun Thongs Deph still couldnt Contain Tightness ^ ok opener on Nuns lol Rv gave u a Chance 2 Be Great..,,,,.Whyy Didnt u Take It CopyWritein on Elevators.. ....is how u Protect Elevation ^ na not feelin it again rhyme was pssh Real Recognize Real but 2 Me u ....startin 2 look Faceless Cant Drop Complicated.Ya Avy said stick 2 the Basicks ^ basicks? i know it says basics...jus type that i hate the slang bar was aight though Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest ^ meh ok diss...coulda been better though Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On ^ good bar diss there lol @ narcoleptics I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self ^ closer ok...not amazing though Overall 1 bar stood out for me to be honest that was the narcoleptics everything else was jus average @ best...creativness wasn't really there...i think the nuns bar was aight but we all know bout thong punches though nowadays...avy personal was there...lose the slang as well..if thats how you write when you spittin...fine but text you gotta be considerate... Vote -1ndeph- More consistant despite the weak rhymes in a few bars...lose that for ya next text battle...RTF in my sig vs EC (audio battle A.I vs L.L) |
an RTF would be nice plz...and i jus upped the battle too
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Voted For: (Jimmy Pocketz)
Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self VS I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win. so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent. You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it. I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics. king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes. Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme. Tied on key punches, deph's was easier to read and flowed a lot better imo, although troop had one ill nameplay... ima have to go with deph 2 cause his was just plain a better read, nothing more to it. V 1ndeph. Vote switched |
again i voted...i'd expect an RTF...it's audio so no reading needed
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Voted For: 1ndeph
Im Runnin on Blanks..and Your Full....But i'll still WriteThis If u were Nun Thongs Deph still couldnt Contain Tightness ^^ok.. Rv gave u a Chance 2 Be Great..,,,,.Whyy Didnt u Take It CopyWritein on Elevators.. ....is how u Protect Elevation ^^elevator/elevation shit is kinda played. Real Recognize Real but 2 Me u ....startin 2 look Faceless Cant Drop Complicated.Ya Avy said stick 2 the Basicks ^^nice.. Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest ^^umm...ok.? Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On .^^played.. I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self ^^forced,how is that a punch?Why would he want to get indeph with himself?Just cause you got his name in there doesn't mean it disses. Ok..played lines,like the elevator/protect elevation..nacro/slept on..and forced nameplay in the last bar with the fingering anul to get indeph with himself.Bassically..ur opener and bassicks line was good.To me,it seems like your trying too hard to be complex.Just diss them str8 up. I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win. so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent. ^^good you never sell records.You mouthin up untill you count em. damn,you' couldn't go platinum after your millionth album. ^decent.. You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it. I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics. ^weak.. king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes. Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme. ^.good You were better as troop,You on a downhill slope. You always sucked tho, so you 100 underground zero. ^NO.. slang these days,the only way your skills benifit. cause to you bad and good must be a synonym ^^WTF??..HELL NO. Well..you were more direct in dissing..and not trying to be damn complex..so that was good.You still had some stupid ass lines..but..meh..you still won. Vote-Indeph RTF in sig. |
^ you don't have a sig
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This was feedback posted for 1ndeph
You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it.
I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics ^ I read that shit somewhere on this site. I cant it right now tho,when i find it,then imma vote. |
^You obviously have read this battle before and didnt vote.
When we made this battle he had a jayz sig. Don't even consider thinking of me as a biter. I'm offended as fuck about that. |
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Lmao ok, squad up?
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Voted For: 1ndeph
Im Runnin on Blanks..and Your Full....But i'll still WriteThis If u were Nun Thongs Deph still couldnt Contain Tightness PRETTY GOOD LINE FIRST ONE IS ALL FILLER THOUGH Rv gave u a Chance 2 Be Great..,,,,.Whyy Didnt u Take It CopyWritein on Elevators.. ....is how u Protect Elevation COOL LINE Real Recognize Real but 2 Me u ....startin 2 look Faceless Cant Drop Complicated.Ya Avy said stick 2 the Basicks NO IDEA IF IT REAZLLY SAID THAT SO CANT REALLY COMMENT Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest NOT FEELING THIS BAR Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On LOL LOVED THIS LINE PROPS I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self OK BUT BAD SETUP OK LINE OVERALL SOME OF UR LINES HAD WORDPLAY BUT IT WAS DUMB FLOW AND STRUC WAS ON POINT THROUGHOUT PROPS NOT BAD AT ALL MAKE UR SHIT BIGGER NEXT TIME I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win. so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent. OK LINE NOTHING GREAT THOUGH you never sell records.You mouthin up untill you count em. damn,you' couldn't go platinum after your millionth album. LIKED THIS LINE LOL KINDA PLAYED THOUGH You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it. I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics. LMAO GOOD PERSONAL KILLED IT king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes. Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme. OK LINE NOTHING GREAT You were better as troop,You on a downhill slope. You always sucked tho, so you 100 underground zero. OK LINE NOT BAD BUT NOT GREAT COOL slang these days,the only way your skills benifit. cause to you bad and good must be a synonym LOL LOVED THE CLOSER GOOD SHIT I THINK YOU BARELY GOT THIS BTH HAD SOME GOOD WORDPLAY TROOP HAD BETTER WORDPLAY BUT DEPH BROUGHT THE GOOD PERSONALS AND IT SEALED IT FOR ME BUT U HAD SOME CORNY LINES DOG LOL : / PLEASE RTF OR ILL D/Q MY VOTE VOTE FOR MY TRACK FEATURED AND ILL HIT UP SOEMTHING ELSE ALSO JSUT DROP LINKS IN THERE http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2546163 |
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