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.Barz Of Steel. 07-14-05 08:00 PM

Voted For: sabotage

checkin polls...

Nice drops by both...

Daubs you should join U.E. :)


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.Barz Of Steel. 07-14-05 08:02 PM

Fuck my bad yall...

Meant to click feed, get that shit removed

Daubs 07-15-05 04:28 AM

No problem, cant my friend, LL til the end :shoot:

Stanza 07-17-05 05:37 PM

Voted For: Daubs

Aii Total Breakdown

Daubs
You couldnt have me stirred and eaten, even if my raps were stews..
You think your skills are independant, but sab reps-two-crews!!
Aii Personal But Not All That Good of a punch

Your raps got my organs turning, and I aint talkin about anatomys..
And its like killin skeletons, your records full of wins from no-bodys!!
LOL That was Good lol

Sabotage is a tiger? But how when your not wild your tame..
Its comedy that ya careers down the gutter....................
...................................so watch me laugh like a drain!!
I Swear I didnt Know LOL I Had to look at the explanation lol

Nice overall Man I Think That 2/3 of your bars was good the first bar was the one that wasnt really all that but it was decent compared to your oppenent Io Think That you Take this battle man so Ima give my vote to you

Sab

Your whole career could be summed up by the last 2 letters in your name*
His whole career is “fish-crap” that’s why I say this “bass-terds”(bastard) lame
Nice wordplay
Sorry to say but you won’t be reppin UK no more**
Because the only time “I” finish after “U” is on the keyboard
That Was coo[/b]
Daubs don’t wanna battle me, he throwin up peace signs like Mercedes***
He puts more crap on paper then diapers from diarrhea infected babies
......Somewhat Aii

Overall Your first bar was great But Then Its like you feel Off and you didnt attepmt anymore strong hit points like in your first bar so I Cant give you my vote sorry no hate jus voting

RTF IN The battle LINk IN my SIG ASAP Bcuz I KNow your Online Daubs lol

Stanza 07-17-05 05:38 PM

Please RTF Daubs Bcuz I voted on This bcuz I saw you Was Online lol

Daubs 07-19-05 04:27 AM

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Implicit 07-19-05 06:29 AM

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Ryan Hughes 07-21-05 03:25 PM

Voted For: Daubs

V/Daubs.....this was a one sided battle daub came wit some good punchs that had good personals an consistent wit good structure...Sab u came wit some played shit No Hate but u should came harder than that u need to work on those things........RETURN THE FAVOR...(or I'll get this vote removed an u'll never get an honest vote from me agian)
Opener=d
Closer=d
Vocab=d
Punchs=d
Multi's=Tie
Personals=d
Wordplay=d
Structure=Tie
Overall=Daubs

Daubs 07-22-05 12:27 PM

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Daubs 07-22-05 04:53 PM

close this........................................

MiSk 07-24-05 05:18 PM

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 
wow... look at this merkin.... good job fam

Macreep 07-30-05 01:02 PM

Voted For: Daubs

Your whole career could be summed up by the last 2 letters in your name*
His whole career is “fish-crap” that’s why I say this “bass-terds”(bastard) lame
^^1st line was a nice concept but worded bad and 2nd was shit
Sorry to say but you won’t be reppin UK no more**
Because the only time “I” finish after “U” is on the keyboard
^^^NIce....this was DOpe
Daubs don’t wanna battle me, he throwin up peace signs like Mercedes***
He puts more crap on paper then diapers from diarrhea infected babies
^^^OMG...this is played as fuck dawg

OK...6 line battle..so flow doesn't matter.That 1st line may have been special...if ya worded it better.That fish-crap line is the tye that is dieing for a set-up line.the 2nd bar was OK except for the set-up.The 3rd was played and may have cost you the battle.

You couldnt have me stirred and eaten, even if my raps were stews..
You think your skills are independant, but sab reps-two-crews!!
^^^set-up badly......and i feel to see how line provides proof of him repping 2 crews
Your raps got my organs turning, and I aint talkin about anatomys..
And its like killin skeletons, your records full of wins from no-bodys!!
^^^Damn...this was classic...
Sabotage is a tiger? But how when your not wild your tame..
Its comedy that ya careers down the gutter....................
...................................so watch me laugh like a drain!!
^^^Good

That 1st bar may have been true...but you didn't provide enough proof to show it.The 2nd bar was onr of the best lines I read.The 3rd was good.I think Sabaatoge would have gotten you...if he didn't have a played out 3rd bar.

Vote-DAubs


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