this the underdog in this bitch lol... nice flow, the beginning was a lil' off, but not bad, the beat is really good.. nice chorus. keep doin what you doing you gonna be at the top quick... i'm feelin this.
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Thanx for the feed ma :)

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I don't like this beat, that voice is starting to make me mad. For the song, basic rhymes in the hook, lyrics at first were good though. Flow was ok, got rushed a bit. Overall, I would play this every now and then, but it would get old and annoying after a while.

iight im listenin sounds liek its gonna kick hard..

yeah it did nice opener...mic presence im feelin it...and you hittin this beat hard..just lower ya adlibs a bit na'mean...its to obvious you have adlibs..and it shouldnt be like that..but lyrics is fire...and chorus is dope im noddin to this...iight finally another good audio cat in here nice stuff kid...2nd verse is kickin still nice shit man..sounds alil like eminem style no offense but it does..but you rippin it none the less...if you stepped ya quality up you'll be a danger to these audio cats in here ..but man chorus is good...real good at that...i like this be ..imma give you oh damn hold up 3rd verse..tight tight..i was just about to say it was good just alil short i guess not..lol good shit man Rv mcees this is what tracks should sound like if you claim your a rapper..na'mean lyrics shouldnt sound ass maybe ya quality cuz we aint rich like that to get studio time and what not but man imma give you a 8.5/10 iight 1ne..

^^ Good lookin man thanx for the constructive feed

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