uppin..............................VOTE YOU FUCKIN ASSHOLES!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Gongshow.

My goodness , wat I doin?, battlin a nine yr. old kid?/
"Gong" could hold a "show",but nodody' d eva go to it/
decent nameplay, wack punch
Ur a tourist to this shit,So take ya beatin as a sovereign/
You get really raptorous when you hear men are near/
nah
Im the white blood cells a dis bitch,killin for vital cause/
Gong dun flow,like blood in vaginas after menopause/
okay
Seems ya got nutin better to do,but put urself in ya sig./
Savein the youth,"SO SAY NO TO DOPE KID,YA DIG?????/
okay


Go ahead, mention cock to this little phone sex fanatic
And he'll be on the line longer than cocaine addicts!
decent opener
Now i'm not an advocate for bad habits but shit happens
Like just last week I saw Trini's girl leave him for...
*Points to the O.Gs* ................ Pure Knowledge.
nah
You couldn't burn faggots with newspaper and matches
The only clips you bustin are on
............................................Email attachments.
okay
Spirograph's my passion so I got you in a stencil...
And yeah you reload lead... In my mechanical pencil!
aight
Get vocal in your sig, you're too antisocial for my innuendos
This kid 'DucKHunt' like he's at home playin super nintendo!
weak

didn’t like this battle.. hardly any good punches in here
both structures were okay.. vocab needs some help.. the
flow goes to trini here.. but overall gong took this battle
punches were just a little harder than trini’s..

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will it ever close????????????????????????????????????????

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Voted For: Gongshow.

ok battle.
straight up, gongshow had way better punchlines and better personals. plus his closer was made sense. trini's didn't. vocab and flow was pretty much even.
alot of trini' lines were played out, like that menopause simile. oh yeah, and not only does sovereign not rhyme with near, but a sovereign is a leader, so that line with it in there didnt make any sense.
much respect, return the favor or i will remove my vote

Voted For: Gongshow.



Go ahead, mention cock to this little phone sex fanatic
And he'll be on the line longer than cocaine addicts!
Now i'm not an advocate for bad habits but shit happens
Like just last week I saw Trini's girl leave him for...
*Points to the O.Gs* ................ Pure Knowledge.
You couldn't burn faggots with newspaper and matches
The only clips you bustin are on
............................................Email attachments.
Spirograph's my passion so I got you in a stencil...
And yeah you reload lead... In my mechanical pencil!
Get vocal in your sig, you're too antisocial for my innuendos
This kid 'DucKHunt' like he's at home playin super nintendo!

the punchlines were crazy

the structure good, K-trini, I've seen better

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This was feedback posted for Gongshow.
 

Just checking the motherfuckering polls yet again..

This was feedback posted for K-Trini
 

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Voted For: Gongshow.

fucka K-trini........................... :shoot:.....