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Uppin Thru the Fucking Roof...

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Goddamnit will someone please fucking vote on this shit?????

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This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 

Well i would vote but cali yours sucked plain and simple

i dunno what it is about your topicals but they are a fucking joke... If you call what you did a good topical people should be honest with you and say it sucked.....

i read the whole thing and laughed my ass off

You try so hard to seem intelectual and you fail miserably every time


Magiks was written nicely and had a much better message behind it

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This was feedback posted for ^^..^^
 

checkin polls...i dont like topicals so im not goin to vote

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fucking vote you homosexuals......................

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alright ive voting for u because u went outside of the box u wrote about truth black was just blah nothing really special i think u took an extra step
ur emotion was good vocab could be improved ur imagery was great
black ur vocab was great but i didnt that picture in my mind like i did when i read ^'s u did good though id say try and go outside the box some more both good peices though no doubt

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Wow at these fucking dickriders...................

nah not really idk who he is to tell u the truth i just voted on all the battles in efl sorry if u dont like my vote though

You dont know who CALI is??

Bullshit :gfy:

Nice Try Tho :thumbup:

lol ur a cry baby i really didnt no that was cali and ask him we hate each other

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Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

this wasnt as clsoe as i thaught it wood be...

black-your verse was complex not too complex but not simplistic either, good imagery, very dexcriptive, good vocabulary also...thsi verse just overallswept me off my feet, especially since this is one of your first topical battles...

cali- i expected much more from you man, this verse was very simple nto a usual thing from you, dont get me wrong this verse was nice but damn you had some strong competiton...all the thigns you did well in black did well in also but jsut a little better than you, basically to cut to the chase you lost because your verse was just too simple and it didnt have enuff imagery or description in it....

overall- very good drops from both oppoonets but my vote goes to black...

CAW CAW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THAT EAGLE CALL MAKES SEAGULLS FALL :thumbup:

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

ok nice topical here like the imagination in oth here and both had some creative words and a good voacab as well ....but i felt BM's more cuz of the creativity and the structure on the verse.... both did good but just BM's was a lil better though..... it was tuff what brung me to the vote was the creativity and structure....Cali u need to work a lil more on ur creativeness and structure of the flow of the verse too....cuz thats what brung u down cuz i had alot of emotion and better then's BM's ......so good battle and keep it up....but my v/ goes to blackmagik cuz of the creativity and structure.....