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haha... at u stealin my lines agianst her in the punchline cypher
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Voted For: Jack The Ripper
K-Trini: Best verse Ive seen from you, but thats not saying much. You lacked creative punches, dope wordplay, and creative personals. You were not very consistent with punches, which made your verse wack. Decent multies, but that doesnt win battles-punches do, and your verse lacked. JTR: Definetly not the best from you, but I understand you didn't really need to try in this battle. You were consistent with personals that were both funny and hit, and they were pretty creative (nothing was played). Both verses flowed fine, so that wasnt an issue for either of you. Overall, JTR had the better verse, so he gets my vote. |
Voted For: K-Trini
Breakdown Trini Jackie Unceaselly attempt to dodge ,but this time the~loop-hole's-trapped~ Any applause for u comes from illusions,so you tell me~who's-soul-clapped~ Nice Wordplay and Nice Little personal on his crew :thumbup: Pm'in me and callin me herb ? but your'e the faggot who's sedated And Over 3000 posts in 3 months? , a nerd's is wat youv'e formated Bad ryming Not all that Good of a bar or personal or punch sorry Touchin on urself cause ya had last post in every thread in front page? Jack the false ripper couldn't rip E-style if he payed under the blunt wage ......Nice :thmbup:.. Overall You Had a 75% Good verse your middle bar wasnt all dat good and it almost made your whole verse look played and wack So watch out fo wack bars man Theyll bring you down Jack Middleweight cuz you stay between guys, thats sick K-Trini(dad)?.. ya, cuz "boxers" always stay on dicks ....Nice concept... Your wack, ok-trini? And damn, your rhymes aint felt N' I aint talkin boxin when trini swings bellow the belt ...Same concept as before man Be original .... This guys bad, he's done, n' his rappin is fuckin sad Fuck boxers, when I son this bitch call me trini-dad :nono: Your using the same approach all throughout the whole verse man and thats bad you should keep using that same wordplay and same Approach in each bar mayne and thats what made your verse look that much unoriginal You was good with the first punch but then all the rest of your punchez was jus repeating the same concept as your first bar so sorry i cant guve you my vote in this battle my v/ Trini |
Voted For: Jack The Ripper
lmfao hahahahahahaha you owned him simple and straight through ... trini- shorten up your lines get a flow... fix your style up take out the ~ things they are noobish the soul clapped thing is played .. but you new sorta so i guess its aight.. but yea alright just didnt have the impact of Jacks haha jACK hahaha your shit jus had me going dude... like a bitch and a vibrator .... but werd you had good rhyme off and your structure was workin you kept it short and still packed the punch... nothing wrong with your verse... This guys bad, he's done, n' his rappin is fuckin sad Fuck boxers, when I son this bitch call me trini-dad that was the funniest line hahah wow For having the better verse overall... Vote//Jack the Ripper |
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Wow, and Trini, you said you could beat Soc...lol wow.
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Voted For: K-Trini
In my opinion this was a weak battle...I will summarize first and then analyze: JTR: Ok verse, punches but didnt land hard enought...ok verse K-Trini: Decent verses good opener...and ok for the rest of it.... Middleweight cuz you stay between guys, thats sick K-Trini(dad)?.. ya, cuz "boxers" always stay on dicks ^^^ Decent opener...3/5 Your wack, ok-trini? And damn, your rhymes aint felt N' I aint talkin boxin when trini swings bellow the belt ^^^^ Again alrite...not really hittin...2/5 This guys bad, he's done, n' his rappin is fuckin sad Fuck boxers, when I son this bitch call me trini-dad ^^^ Aiite wordplay...3/5 8/15 Jackie Unceaselly attempt to dodge ,but this time the~loop-hole's-trapped~ Any applause for u comes from illusions,so you tell me~who's-soul-clapped~ ^^^ Good opener...4/5...pretty funny Pm'in me and callin me herb ? but your'e the faggot who's sedated And Over 3000 posts in 3 months? , a nerd's is wat youv'e formated ^^ Meh ok....2/5 Touchin on urself cause ya had last post in every thread in front page? Jack the false ripper couldn't rip E-style if he payed under the blunt wage ^^^ Good ending...but not that good...3/5 9/15 |
yeah.................couple more votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: Jack The Ripper
Middleweight cuz you stay between guys, thats sick K-Trini(dad)?.. ya, cuz "boxers" always stay on dicks Lol nice nice Your wack, ok-trini? And damn, your rhymes aint felt N' I aint talkin boxin when trini swings bellow the belt Ok This guys bad, he's done, n' his rappin is fuckin sad Fuck boxers, when I son this bitch call me trini-dad LOL tight but using the same concept too many times in dif ways VS Jackie Unceaselly attempt to dodge ,but this time the~loop-hole's-trapped~ Any applause for u comes from illusions,so you tell me~who's-soul-clapped~ Niice Pm'in me and callin me herb ? but your'e the faggot who's sedated And Over 3000 posts in 3 months? , a nerd's is wat youv'e formated Wack Touchin on urself cause ya had last post in every thread in front page? Jack the false ripper couldn't rip E-style if he payed under the blunt wage Ok Heres how i see it 2 dope punches from jack 1 from k trini but the fact jack used the same concept in dif ways makes this alot closer but still never the less his verse was better in strenght of punches so he gets the votes trini dad punches will be played out in my eyes now thoughlol |
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This was feedback posted for Jack The Ripper
This is still open?...................................
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This was feedback posted for Jack The Ripper
nice battle jackkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk kkkkkkkkkk
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askin if this shit still open yet you assholes won't just drop a vote.....................
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wtf, my pc crashes and after something like 7 days this is still open... fucking wow
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