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Voted For: Hitchcock

Hitchcock gets this one, better personals better punches not multis but better structure overall his verse was better hitchock gets this vote

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Voted For: J.Terror

Hitchcock
You nice? i wouldnt say thats true
Cuz if you sick, than Hitler's cool wit gay black Jews
Bad punch.
You can play that fool, ya wack that much we all can see
Look at is lines, they longer than the ones at the DMV
Bad attempt at a personal.
You gon need three MD's, when i flip ,click the trigga
He about to be kicked outta this "rap city" like Bigga Tigga
Bad punch and self glorification.
You a bitch nigga, so stupid and i love it
Last time you was "cockin heat" was a rooster in the oven
Eh, bad punch once again. Horrible set up.
Ya gimmick is trash, wit raps like that , you meet oblivion fast
A shadow could bring Terror to J's wack Caribbean ass....
Bad wordplay attempt on his name.

Overall, you need to work on making good punches, and including personals. You make statements and self glorify right now.

J. Terror
No need to swing jabs,see I already won this battle, even before you signed in
But you'll get hit twice like da twin towers,cuz my punches always "bin landin"
Self glorification.
You Could punch through glass walls,& still not be a breakthrough performance
And my punches'll chin "check" dude, even If my nickname was "allow-ants"
Ok punch, but you are bordering on self glorification.
Jaw's fist bound for a pounding, teeth shall bow to my finest- cuz I’m hot
rip & tear this pussy so many times, he’ll be mo’ limbless than KFC cups
Forced rhyme, and horrible punch.
And when i say i'm win'N no doubt- i ain't talkin dates with Gwen Steffani
Cock thought a hollow tip was a contraceptive, so i put 2 on his head for safety
... Punch is where?
Wreckin frames, ya career'll be hittin mo' brick walls, than test dummies
And hitch couldn't chest box, even if punchin with monopoly money
Only real punch. Not that good.

You won cuz you had one real punch in there. Work on making real punches and not self glorification lines.

Both need to work on forming real punches.

v- J Terror

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Voted For: Hitchcock

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