Voted For: Stanza

damn, nice shit stanza

Personals - Neither really won
Punches - Stanza by a mile
Multis - neither really won
Metas - Stanza -- this was nice...
Structure - Stanza
Entertainment - Stanza

Sorry, Stanza just won all the way around...

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Voted For: Stanza

v/ stanza

let me break it down

personals went to Stanza because he had better DTO meaning damage to opponent.

"Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"

is way bettern than

ripping this bitch, burning through ya head like im lighting a comb
crackin ya dome, cause im splittin stanza faster than writing a poem

becuase the multi in Bliss's was forced and his structure was off

personals was included with stanza's punches becuase they both had personals but Stanza had better punches to back his up

multis went to nobody because Bliss was the only one with them and they seemed forced

word play went to Stanza because he had bigger words rhyming with the same lenght and number of syllables as before

overall vote V/ STANZA

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Voted For: Stanza

v/stanza

blisss......punches were kind of weak and u didnt stay wit consistant with the punches....your creativity was lackin a lil bit...your coulda fixed da structure a lil bit like re-word some things to make it all flow and transition better....

stanza-good creativity to start off wit...punches could have been a lil harder but it got the job done this time....the game line was nice lol....

v/stanza

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Voted For: Stanza

Heh, aiigh stanza won what can I say. Blisss you started off well but you just didnt bring it through the rest of the verse. Your punches were very hit and miss. Stanza I wouldnt say your shit was dope nah mean, but it was decent. The blisssters attempt at wordplay was pretty weak sort of make me go :wtf: but your disses were more consistant and I guess you could say they had better flow if such a thing exists in text.

No real quotables in either verse to be honest, you need to both work on making punches that people will find dope and humorous. Cause you definatly wouldnt get any crowds going by spitting this type of stuff. But netherthe less, I guess it wasnt a bad battle. Jus elevate to both and keep at it.
Peace.

Stanza- rtf on the link in my sig please.

Voted For: Stanza

ok this was a good battle but i would have to say stanza won it with his punches.

not good enough for anything, and even stanza knows that its true
just look at his sig, he's even laughing at RAW for letting him in the crew

was a very nice personal but that was all bliss had

stanza surprised me with a better structure than bliss and punches like

Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"

this was a battle until i read stanza's verse which made it a blowout because in a close battle it is like a boxing match... and only strong punches are good... and bliss just didnt have it