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Voted For: Daubs
Verbal Shoota- Your verse was pretty nice...Punches some were good and hit hard n connected...But then some just came weak...and didnt connected...Wordplay was aight...Structure...was Blah could have been better...but overall-6.0/10....You came with a good verse and good punches and had some good personals too... Daubs- Your verse was good too...Yo punches were good also but then again the same with Verbal some were a little weak...But mostly i thought you had better personals and better hard hittin punches...and they connected well too...Wordplay was aight...Structure was better then Verbal...easy to read n all...But overall- 7.0/10...You got this with better Punches and Better Personals..... *Return Honest Favor In My Sig...Or Ill Get My Vote Removed Please*.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota
Daubs a real emcee?...HA! ....only time you 'Kick Game' is playin soccer* couldnt even 'Bang-Heads' if you Tried passin yourself off as a punk-rocker ^^set-up bad,the set-up shoulda been a punch...3/10 You's a Nerd, kid....look what 3 Words did...got you thinkin your 'Dope'** Ya 'Letters' only ever got shit sealed........when you lickin the envelope! ^^horrible set-up....good punch....5/10 You can 'liv-in' hope, maybe one day you'll Throw a punch an last the 'Rounds'*** Ya'd think Daubs is wearin a skirt, cause i got this fastened like a wRaparound**** ^^^OK......5/10 Dog, i got your Face on the Ground, eyes down.....like ya playin Bingo**** Legendary status?...shit, your just a ''Day dream believein'' starr like Ringo ^^flowed good...punch lacked....4/10 Fuck your Lingo, bitch..........stop thinkin you mingle in the best of circules you always typin : shoot : ...so i'll just stick the shells too ya back like Turtles ^^not much of a punch here....2/10 Fuck gunplay tho..'Cause we all know british kats got no street-smarts Daubs winnin is unlikely as .........his idol makin it in the U.S Charts! ^^Best bar so far.....7/10 eat at ya heart like colesterol, sucker.....i stay slicker than afro-Gel Multiply ya verse....you still aint winnin, 'cause all ya duties associate with L's! ^^I hear this L/legend thing too much....3/10 Ok...good verse here.Your best bar was the Us. charts one.A problem I saw with your verse was that you set-up your shit badly...make the set-up's relevant to the punchline somehow so it makes it harder.As for your personals..mediocre.I heard too much L's/legend in your verse.Kinda redundant.OK verse overall.Coulda been better if you put more time into it. Whats that on your face, could be a smile, but's looks more like a frown.. Hate on whites? But on ya head, you rockin christmas cracker crowns!! ^^punch was shit man......2/10 From the pics posted above, im sure that your location is so correct.. Only time tephs a criminal, when he get confused with a clone suspect!! ^^shouldn't the punch be about his location based on the set-up?...2/10 Wanna be james bond, but cant even get that right,its 00 not just 07 teph.. And lookin at ya pics, i cant judge the ugliest one, the right or the left!! ^^Nice......7/10 My rhymes are like impossible percentages, outa ten i get eleven.. And your verse is like your jerzey............both are zero outa seven!! ^^Good.....but i think you overused his picture..4/10 We all know the only reason ya crews RAW, coz ya they spit raw sewage.. I could hand the win over to you...and you'd still manage to loose it!! ^^Played as fuck.....3/10 Battling me is like faulty ' B ' squads, Your diffusing the wrong bomb.. Shoot a Verb? al just shoot a herb So no wonder tephs long gone!! ^^Horrible nameplay...2/10 This murderer SHoTT a BoY, but the sword ain't mighty like a word.. So instead he adopted bad grammaticks, and went to shoota verb!! ^^again...horrible nameplay...2/10 OK...Saw a lotta flaws in your verse.First....your set-ups.Make your set-ups relevant to the punch somehow.It showed how bad you were at it in that criminal line.The set-up looked like it was gonna rip his location...then outta nowhere...you came with a "he ain't no criminal unless...".line.And the picture...once bar is enough...you overused it.That's a bitch move to base a verse around it.And the nameplay at end...shit.Just cause the some letters in his verse spell his name doesn't make it nameplay. Vote-Verbal Shoota RTF BELOW PLEASE. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203538 |
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You had the battle re-opened after like a month of it being closed and you dont even up the battle either, what the fucks the point Daubs?
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Voted For: Daubs
Daubs Stop putting those '!!' after every punch. That shit is getting annoying. Whats that on your face, could be a smile, but's looks more like a frown.. Hate on whites? But on ya head, you rockin christmas cracker crowns!! 4.. Decent attempt.. wording wasn't quite there though.. From the pics posted above, im sure that your location is so correct.. Only time tephs a criminal, when he get confused with a clone suspect!! 4.. Once again, your concepts are pretty decent, but the wording takes away from how hard they hit.. Wanna be james bond, but cant even get that right,its 00 not just 07 teph.. And lookin at ya pics, i cant judge the ugliest one, the right or the left!! 7.. Assuming that I'm getting it right.. I think it's good.. My rhymes are like impossible percentages, outa ten i get eleven.. And your verse is like your jerzey............both are zero outa seven!! 6.. Coolness.. We all know the only reason ya crews RAW, coz ya they spit raw sewage.. I could hand the win over to you...and you'd still manage to loose it!! 4.. Pretty played.. Battling me is like faulty ' B ' squads, Your diffusing the wrong bomb.. Shoot a Verb? al just shoot a herb So no wonder tephs long gone!! 2.. Not feeling this.. This murderer SHoTT a BoY, but the sword ain't mighty like a word.. So instead he adopted bad grammaticks, and went to shoota verb!! 2.. Could have been worded in to a punch.. but this is just more of a statement. Overall - 29 MeTaFo' Drop the fucking explanations. If you can't word your punch to where we'll get it when we read your verse, then you shouldn't include the punchline. Daubs a real emce?...HA! ....only time you 'Kick Game' is playin soccer couldnt even 'Bang-Heads' if you Tried passin yourself off as a punk-rocker 3.. Both are played.. You's a Nerd, kid....look what 3 Words did...got you thinkin your 'Dope' Ya 'Letters' only ever got shit sealed........when you lickin the envelope! 3.. Once again.. Played.. You can 'liv-in' hope, maybe one day you'll Throw a punch an last the 'Rounds' Ya'd think Daubs is wearin a skirt, cause i got this fastened like a wRaparound 2.. Fucking Jesus.. ANY wordplay that includes a rap/wrap combo just sucks, as they are all played. Dog, i got your Face on the Ground, eyes down.....like ya playin Bingo Legendary status?...shit, your just a ''Day dream believein'' starr like Ringo 4.. I guess.. Fuck your Lingo, bitch..........stop thinkin you mingle in the best of circules you always typin : shoot : ...so i'll just stick the shells too ya back like Turtles 2.. Played to shit.. Fuck gunplay tho..'Cause we all know british kats got no street-smarts Daubs winnin is unlikely as .........his idol makin it in the U.S Charts! 4.. Could have been better, but your wording killed it. eat at ya heart like colesterol, sucker.....i stay slicker than afro-Gel Multiply ya verse....you still aint winnin, 'cause all ya duties associate with L's! 8.. this one was nice. Overall - 26 This battle was not as close as the scores seem to say.. Daubs won this one quite easily I thought. Metafo had 1 bar I liked, and a bunch of garbage.. Daubs had a pretty consistently average verse, with 2 bars I thought were pretty good. Daubs easily won this. Vote - Daubs Hit up my battle with UNF if you feel like it.. or something. |
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Voted For: Daubs
Battling me is like faulty ' B ' squads, Your diffusing the wrong bomb.. Shoot a Verb? al just shoot a herb So no wonder tephs long gone!! This murderer SHoTT a BoY, but the sword ain't mighty like a word.. So instead he adopted bad grammaticks, and went to shoota verb!! ^Word..i loved that line...that is nice...i loved the whole verse but these bars i really liked...had some appeal to me...and umm... yea..i liked your wordplay, punches, and everything, your verse was just more appealing.... V Daubs Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Daubs
Tephlon Daubs a real emcee?...HA! ....only time you 'Kick Game' is playin soccer* couldnt even 'Bang-Heads' if you Tried passin yourself off as a punk-rocker Who cares if he likes soccer You's a Nerd, kid....look what 3 Words did...got you thinkin your 'Dope'** Ya 'Letters' only ever got shit sealed........when you lickin the envelope! Meh... You can 'liv-in' hope, maybe one day you'll Throw a punch an last the 'Rounds'*** Ya'd think Daubs is wearin a skirt, cause i got this fastened like a wRaparound**** Self Glory = whack Dog, i got your Face on the Ground, eyes down.....like ya playin Bingo**** Legendary status?...shit, your just a ''Day dream believein'' starr like Ringo Ringo starr is dope, half decent punch Fuck your Lingo, bitch..........stop thinkin you mingle in the best of circules you always typin : shoot : ...so i'll just stick the shells too ya back like Turtles Not feeling.. Fuck gunplay tho..'Cause we all know british kats got no street-smarts Daubs winnin is unlikely as .........his idol makin it in the U.S Charts! [b]No flow at all eat at ya heart like colesterol, sucker.....i stay slicker than afro-Gel Multiply ya verse....you still aint winnin, 'cause all ya duties associate with L's! That was a dope punch..nice Daubs Whats that on your face, could be a smile, but's looks more like a frown.. Hate on whites? But on ya head, you rockin christmas cracker crowns!! Meh.. From the pics posted above, im sure that your location is so correct.. Only time tephs a criminal, when he get confused with a clone suspect!! Word... Wanna be james bond, but cant even get that right,its 00 not just 07 teph.. And lookin at ya pics, i cant judge the ugliest one, the right or the left!! I'd go with the right one...haha My rhymes are like impossible percentages, outa ten i get eleven.. And your verse is like your jerzey............both are zero outa seven!! Meh... We all know the only reason ya crews RAW, coz ya they spit raw sewage.. I could hand the win over to you...and you'd still manage to loose it!! Dope...but kinda played Battling me is like faulty ' B ' squads, Your diffusing the wrong bomb.. Shoot a Verb? al just shoot a herb So no wonder tephs long gone!! Nice.... This murderer SHoTT a BoY, but the sword ain't mighty like a word.. So instead he adopted bad grammaticks, and went to shoota verb!! Word... Vote: Daubs In my opinion he just came harder in this battle.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Daubs
ok, let me do this...... DAUBS - first off i'll note that ure structure was cool and you had a tight flow consistently through the whole verse. the whole concept of using someone's picture aint as original as it used to be but with decent personals it is good and affective. and to start with, that opener was wack to begin with but the punchline made up for it cuz it cracked me up. the 2nd bar also was funny and a personal i wud've used, but then the james bond bar was wack as hell. the wordplay overall in ure verse was nice, you played off his names good, but shit cud've been worded better in places. overall you had a solid verse.....7/10. METAFO - structure was nice and ure verse flowed consistently all the way through to. i have to say though that ure punches weren't as affective as i expected. u started off with a real wack bar that was two lines irrelevant to each other....gradually though you got better to the middle with some funny lines, especially the wraparound skirt that was funny, but then at the end you fell off again and closed with a gay ass closer that has been done before on daubs, you just re-worded shit, overall ure verse was just too inconsistent....6/10 V/ - Daubs for a more consistently solid verse. RTF!! link to my UNF battle is in my siggy!! :thumbup: |
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