Voted For: Kordozar

wes city:
Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke
And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note
^^^MOMS BARS????..LOL... GET DA FUCK OUT OF HERE FAM..U WASN'T SERIOUS HERE
Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see
The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne
^^^I GET DA ACNE/BUMP THING...BUT WHUT DO U MEAN ONLY THING THAT BUMPS KORDOZAR??...I DIDN'T GET IT
Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister
Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister
^^^NOO...STEP YA RYHME SCHEME UP FAM U MAKE YA WORDS RYHME LIKE A NOOB
I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum
……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb
^^^????? LOL DIS WASN'T HOTT
ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials
^^NICE...GOOD PLAY OFF HIS NAME
a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek
you may need those^^
…… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep
^^^NO


kordozar:
You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen
And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons
^^^GOOD RYHME SCHEME...BUT DA WES PUNCH WAS WACK
Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin
Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods?
^^^DECENT PERSONAL OFF HIS ALIAS
You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You
Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle
^^^OKAY..NEVA SEEN DIS WUN COULD OF WORDED IT BETTA
I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped
Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts
^^^NAH
Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name
Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain
^^I GET IT....IT WAS MISSIN SOMTHIN
Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It
Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises
^^^DECENT....

KORDOZAR TAKES IS BATTLE EASY...WES SOUND HE LIKE HE WAS TRYIN 2 BE FUNNY BUT IT WASN'T WORKIN DATZ BASICALLY ALL I CAN SAY....

Voted For: Wes City

wes city... damn child... hahah you took this easy.. overall all your shit was on lock from the vocab to the set up very nice verse. nothing to imporve on ... could get a lil more complex vocab but eh i think you still took this..
i had a favorite line in this
"ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials"
^damn

Korz.. iw as expecting more from you on this but i liked your verse. it just wasnt as complex as wes cities was. you had some nice vocab and your thoughts in it were complex but they just didnt carry through. overall though nice job but it just wasnt up to wes cities...
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Voted For: Kordozar

ok Kord jsut had more thought out and better punches, and I liked his flow more, Wes urs was too short for me man..this was a hella good battle both had mea laughing but Kord made me laugh more and he made his hurt more so great job Kord..keep writing guys

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Voted For: Wes City

first off this was a reasonable battle from both.but only one cat can take the win and thats wes, firstly his structure & flow were more on point, but more importantly his punches were a lot more creative & original.
both cudve cum harder and tried sum personals etc, but still, the winner is wes

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Voted For: Wes City

You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen
And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons
concept played...ok for an opener - 5/10
Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin
Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods?
decent personal, flows aiight - 7/10
You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You
Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle
not worded right, gd concept tho -6/10
I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped
Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts
wackness...wordplay doesnt work.. - 5/10[B]
Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name
Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain
[B]hahaha dope bar, i aint seen that shit on Tv in tiime tho - 9/10
Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It
Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises
-_- doesnt really work fam....- 6/10[B]

Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke
And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note
[B]meh @ a yo mama type bar - 6.5/1-
Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see
The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne
lol, gave me a chuckle decent..-7/10
Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister
Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister
wackness...teister bars r played as a mofo -5/10
I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum
……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb
decent, nuttin spectacular, flows well - 7/10
ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials
decent concept...decent nameplay - 7.5/10
a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek
you may need those^^
…… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep
solid closer....not original in concept bu well worked = 8/10

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Voted For: Kordozar

You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen
And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons
^^OK.......5/10
Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin
Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods?
^^Ok....coulda been better....4/10
You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You
Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle
^^Good....6/10
I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped
Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts
^^meh...weak....3/10
Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name
Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain
^^OK......4/10
Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It
Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises
^^no punch...horrible closer...1/10

OK...kinda boring verse man.1st punch was creative and hit well...and so did the 5-0 candle one.But the rest were just some mediocre punches.The closer was the worst...as it wasn't a punch.Work on your flow and set-ups.

Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke
And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note
^^weak punch.....2/10
Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see
The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne
^^Uncreative....2/10
Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister
Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister
^^set-up was bad and punch sucked....1/10
I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum
……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb
^^terrible......1/10
ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials
^^Finally a good line....5/10
a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek
you may need those^^
…… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep
^^c'mon.....1/10

OK...too simplistic.You need better concepts.Look at that last bar....he puts you to sleep?...terrible concept..the only decent line in your verse was probably the kors-light one.The others were basic and weak.Work on your complexity and using more personals.

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Voted For: Wes City

Fuck a kordozar his ass will just choke
And tha fat lady has sung…his mom jus hit a high note
Yea Im an ill head with a mind that knows ya wack see
The only thing that bumps kordozar is a face full of acne
Your not dope, you prolly look like cali’s sister
Ill beat ya hands down on the spot like I was playin twister
I mean this battle is nonsense like your iq you bum
……this line would be dope if your name wasn’t so fuckin dumb
ya punches don’t hold weight and are very controversial
kors-light.. I can tell with all them low carb commercials
a bottle of sleepin pills and a lullabye for this geek
you may need those^^
…… but I jus read ya shit and that puts me to sleep
6/10


You Nice?Ock Please Your A Nobody Anywhere See Boy Listen
And It's Easy To Knock Wes Off Without The Detroit Pistons
Ya Seed Will Lose Both Legs Before It Ever Starts Steppin
Come On Fam Your A Has Been So How You Learnin New Methods?
You Respected?Highly Doubt It Even Ya Legs Can't Stand You
Ko The Only 5-0 You Seen Was Ya Grandfathers Birthday Candle
I Bet Ya Audio Was The Flip After All The Tracks Then Flopped
Kord Always Was A 'Star'Who Left Him Gassed Up Like Astronauts
Defeatin Me With What?You'll Lose Just By The Personals In Ya Name
Cartoon!!Nut They'll Indentify Pinky Once They See It In His Brain
Ya Verse Was The PastWack Punches..Why Post It You Already Knew It
Already Left You Blue!Now My Black Fist Will Match With The Bruises
5/10

v/Wes City... this was a very close battle, Wes had good punches that edged Kord out, both need to elevate, no hate

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Voted For: Wes City

this was a real close battle....but wes city got this

wes-your dope lines were bump you/face full of acne and the kors lite was good personal...also the fat lady has sung line was dope...ya structure was a little weird in some spots but overall ya verse was packed with punches

kordozar- i felt that your only strong line was the detroit pistons line it had me laughin, all your other lines were aight, i think wes just out punched you by one or two punches.....you had better structure though

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Voted For: Wes City

ok lmaaoo

Mr.Kord-had a good..verse punches were alright nothing 2 special.just ahd an average verse try to come harder next time with more hard hitting punches

wes- lmao had sum good punches on there sum made me laugh ..you had more hard hitting punches then the other guy..i think that wat made your verse stand out more than him..so im gon to have to give it to wes

Voted For: Wes City

better verse, better vocab, better structure, more appealing to me...