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King Solo 08-12-05 02:43 PM

uppin............................................. ......

Ryan Hughes 08-13-05 01:07 AM

Voted For: NOS-482

win off d/r votes...rv aren't u ppl tired n sick of dis bum??.
im da 'dad' of dis lame rapper like his name backwards dis kid is my SON*
^^^Good Opener...wit the personal
i bet cats in da uk dont even give u a pound..im really sick of u clown.
stole half of a 'nostradamus name' look he's even doin topicals now?.
^^^good Personal....Not to hard hitttin of a punch
somthin must be wrong ya eyes if ya'll think dis fella dont suck.
he still has fuckin net beef....nos like "maggie" he'll "neva grow up".
^^^Weak Punch i heard it plenty of times flipped...played
keep talkin till im clappin at ur brain..ya barz? fagget they all lame.
nigga u shit,sleep & breath rv only "life" u have is a "board game".
^^^Good punch
nyc wont be a place he visit..ya punches wack! i dont know how peeps get it.
u a pre writer u neva "come off da head" like "memphis bleek's fitted".
^^^Ight Closer.

fuck wastin a verse on ya, cuz there’s sumthin y’all gotta know..
fact is, Marv gets beaten even when his opponent doesn’t show..*
^^^Hot Personal....Good opener
now let’s talk about RV Prezidency, I think Marv shud hold the title..
cuz he stands for the environment ‘n’ shit……………………………
………………………………..there’s not a concept he won’t recycle..
^^^Good personal....liked this punch
ya punches are weak son, only time you were ever equal in a fight..
was when you fought the ‘caps lock’ when registering on this site..
^^^Good Punch Solid
fuckin idiot, ya never come original, ya lyrics are just the same..
so I won’t ‘marv’el at ya humour, I’ll just sit and laugh at ya name..
^^^Ight punch good personal
and ya claim to be ‘Amerikaz Nightmare’ but nobody is believin’..
cuz ya state that ya dope………so clearly ya must be dreamin’..
^^^Nice Closer......

V/King solo.....this was a good battle by both......they came wit it....marv u had a solid verse but some lines were played like the maggie....u had a hot opener u had good structure but not many personals....an some other good punchs...but i seen better from u.....King u came wit some fire in most areas Like alway's.....the opener was nice...u came wit good structure also....an many personals...an nuthin played u had a more creative verse an u get my vote....

King Solo 08-13-05 01:09 AM

uppin again............................................. ........

King Solo 08-13-05 10:23 AM

uppin............................................. ...

King Solo 08-13-05 11:35 PM

...how about you fuckaz vote on this fuckin battle

King Solo 08-15-05 01:19 PM

uppin............................................. ......

B_Loco 08-16-05 03:40 PM

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 
Actually maggies been a baby since they started the show.....and dats more den 5 years.....

Overall both of yall had a good verse.

King Solo 08-17-05 11:42 PM

^^ you cud've at least voted.......................uppin

Yvonne 08-18-05 06:15 AM

Voted For: NOS-482

this dude got it mayne..he had more punches which ere quite decent...hs verse kept on flowin from the beginin 2 d end and his closer was tight...he had gd mets on therre whice were entatainin personals were also an additional aind to the coolness of his verse...he focused more on his opponent and that kept him quite stable on the structural part...mayv instead was kinna focusin on him winin and he seemed to be thinkin more of what peeps could think about the whole battle...dawg u r 2 diss ur opponent...u had nice points but just didnt cook 'em up well...ur verse was flowin initially but towards the end it went off and to finish ur verse up the closer was kinna wack and to me it didnt really make sense...so that is that....this guy takes this hands down

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