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Voted For: NaRc-UzI
In battles ur like a one handed waitor cause u cant bring much to the Table How you gonna sign to a label when im cutting ur ass like ur un-paid Cable ^^nice internals....good metas and such Its not ur fault that ur not talented so ill just be honest and blame Canada* Ur a fucking faggot who cant bring fire to anyone like a pussy ass Manager ^^well...1st was creative...2nd was worded horribly I'll come with "Six Teens" to your block and make sure that you Dont Make It** The only way ill be a "Long Shot" in this battle is if i was spitting Butt Naked ^^Good...... Some good metas and such.Some lines were set-up bad or coulda been worded better for a harder punch.HAd a creative personal with that blame canada thing.Flow was on-point for the most.Some Ok wordplay. ...Your welcome for the loss, n' ima kill this lame Then bring the Narcs to Uzi like I spelt his name ^^good nameplay...but didn't seem to diss well So you better be carefull son, watch your back N' fuck your member title, cuz... In general... your just wack ^^^DOPE...but coulda placed a multi or sumtin And Uzi is a gun right?... so wait just a second He'll be gun-running ...without transporting weapons ^^^worst line in this battle Seemed to me that you underestimated him here.Coulda made ur lines flow better with some multis or sumtin.And your lines were short as fuck.If you sropped something decent for that last bar....it woulda been in your favor VOTE-NARC-UZI RTF PLEASE http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203256 |
JAck you lost why you keep bringing the battle back ur not gonna win
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This was feedback posted for Jack The Ripper
checkin the polls on this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: NaRc-UzI
STructure-Narc-uzi, better structure and flow....Jack.. u had messsed up structure which killed the flow Punches-Narc-uzi, BETTER puches that actually were too him..Jack dont know were u were goin wit that...n ohate though Personals-Narc-uzi, got him good in every way lol...jack ur verse was whack i wasnt feelin anything, sorry no hate just stating my opinion Originality-Narc-uzi had fresh rhymes that were felt ...jack u had played lines playa Vocab-Neither, didnt feel vocab was a strong point in this battle........ v/narc-uzi RETURN THE FAVOR OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DISQUALIFIED |
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This was feedback posted for NaRc-UzI
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Voted For: NaRc-UzI
In battles ur like a one handed waitor cause u cant bring much to the Table How you gonna sign to a label when im cutting ur ass like ur un-paid Cable "ha mad me laugh a lil" Its not ur fault that ur not talented so ill just be honest and blame Canada* Ur a fucking faggot who cant bring fire to anyone like a pussy ass Manager This was a good one too I'll come with "Six Teens" to your block and make sure that you Dont Make It** The only way ill be a "Long Shot" in this battle is if i was spitting Butt Naked ...Meh not to hard hitting.....maybe if u werded it different 7/10....meh okay verse got tha job done just about.... Your welcome for the loss, n' ima kill this lame Then bring the Narcs to Uzi like I spelt his name So you better be carefull son, watch your back N' fuck your member title, cuz... In general... your just wack And Uzi is a gun right?... so wait just a second He'll be gun-running ...without transporting weapons ^^^Woe fam thats like hella basic....im not even gonna break it down....man get complex family... rtf in my sig or i'll get this vote removed |
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