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nirt 08-05-05 12:55 PM

Voted For: Chameleon

My words are chock full of scorching letters Method you think YOU'RE better??...
I'm STILL the King round this bitch and you're one of the Court Jesters...
^^OK punch....better flow...
Who the fuck said you were dope?? It's a vicious rumor...
Try and shoot me i dodge bullets like Wyatt Earp with six shooters...
^^No punch.....but dope multi
I'm forever-great finished in a flurry words typed quick-in-a-hurry this is checkmate...
This is what happens when a legend faces a bum who's less than second rate...
^^FLow was good...but punch lacked..
U wanna discuss posts. ho, urs are jokes writings worthless as if ur mind capacity was zero...
Ur mouths shape like an O cause u sip bottle tops n poke holes thru guys like cheerios...
^^LMAO....DOPE...creative..hard hittin...multi...10/10
I'ma call u whistle the way u blowoff MC's ur skills are pitiful n simple...
U bit the big pickle, ur best efforts are compared to nursery rhyme riddles...
^^internal seemed forced
Psssh.. and to think this wasn't even close to the best I could write...
It's bed time kid I just put you to sleep for the rest of ur life
^^NO punch

Seems to me you basing it all on multis and flow.And your not concentrating on punches.Your best line was the cherrios one....but aside from it...there wasn't much eye-opening one.You had flow...but not punches.WOrdplay and metas.

you aint street now go back to the burbs
they call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs
^^basic and whack.....
you can pray to god that you hope to win
shit you fallin off more than baggy jeans on an eithopian
^^Flow bad ans punch sucked
i've never heard of you kid, so get off of my cock
so when i say nobodys perefect im really givin you props
^^Hmm....OK....5/10
he aint drop knowledge, im jus makin him my son
i should change my name to 0 the way he's next to none
^^HM....Ok again...6/10
you schemin to win, theres no way man
dats walkin on thin ice an ima help you fall through w/ya plans
^^No....
id prank call this bitch but cell phone sucks
but ima get you on the horn...of a fuckin elephant tusk
^^NO...

Only 2 good punches that I've seen.You were just a lil newbish with some of the punches.Like the Chameleon/herbs...basic as fuck.Use wordplay and metas...and stop with the basic rhyme sheme.Use multis.

Vote-Chameleon
RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203166

Sik Wit It 08-05-05 03:14 PM

This was feedback posted for New Meth0d
 
both verses were weak...

New Meth0d 08-05-05 11:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Sik Wit It
both verses were weak...

not compared to your shit....

noname 08-05-05 11:40 PM

This was feedback posted for Chameleon
 
pollzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

TeamOne 08-06-05 11:42 PM

ugh............................................... ......

Sik Wit It 08-07-05 05:04 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by New Meth0d
not compared to your shit....



ur's are still lame...

13th. 08-07-05 09:11 AM

This was feedback posted for Chameleon
 
checkin pollzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..................

New Meth0d 08-08-05 09:11 PM

ok thats cool uh huh yup word i agree no not really

New Meth0d 08-09-05 07:14 AM

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Cocaine 08-09-05 02:11 PM

Voted For: New Meth0d

wow.. Chameleon u have decent concepts.. ur punches just arent hitting hard enough... your structure was meh.. but i dont base shit on that.. ur flow was iiight... but ur punches just didnt connect well... ...

New Meth on the other hand had good ish.. the closer was tight im loving the personal in ur opener.. and ROFL @ me using an ethiopian line against Chameloeon too.. ur verse is all nice shit... soo.. overall decent battle but i think New Meth just edged it..


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