do i smell a cheap aqua song rip off?

lmlo....ps, got a new OM idea :evil:

Dreams chasing me, when my presence starts to exist,
Just an untold story of the shark and the fish,

i just realized i love this line

Wasnt bad i liked it keep it homie.....

good flow good vocab and excellent emotion i give it 9/10

Your concept is ok.. Not exactly something that provokes emotion or thought.. It kinda makes me say "Well ain't that some shit? I wonder what's on TV.." Dumb down your language because no one really wants to read that shit.. Haha. Not tryin to shoot you two down, it was pretty good. You had nice flow, and the imagery was well done. Truely, keep droppin'. Peace.