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First Drop I've Seen From Either Of You...
Uuuum, I Dunno, It Wasnt Bad... But You Didnt Really Define The Storyline Enough... With This Sort Of Direct Invovlment Piece... You've Gotta Include EVERY Detail... I Mean, It Was Like, You're Both Going To Jail... Then Randomly You're Trying To Start A War Between Gangs???... I Was Kinda Lost... But, The Imagery, Emotion And Flow Were All Sick... You Just Left Out To Many Important Supports To The Story... Keep At It Though... If You Two Hone Your Shit You Could Do Alot Better... Please Return The Favor On Me And Vango's New Drop... Called "Hallow Tips Pt. 2": http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ghlight=atticus Thanks Alot Mayn, Stay Up... .One. |
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I Agree. Overall Madd Cool Drop...Structure Wasn't Anythnig Special but it wasn't an eyesore..so Props...Really HE Said Everything I Will Rate This THough.. 8/10... Stay Up Wit It http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204027 Chuuch Defyned -aka- Savior's Souljah |
thanks upping........
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This shit was tight, i was feelin everything....you can deffinitley up on ur vocab and multis but then ull be str8...iigh....yo sick one looks like u lost ur sidekick^^.....hit me up if u want another collab...1
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