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Voted For: veyetal
You juss "out and about" cuz "being pussy illegal"...........and "homie you criminal" And judgin by yo "avy and text skillz".....you still aiming toward being original...... 5....weak...weak....c'mon.... I mean really You're juss lonely and unsucessful homie....as far as crews went.... Vey you got "eye' for this "shit" you should see.....I drop unexpectly like his sig bowel movements(bird shit) 4...stretched like fuck!....and the punch was a played concept worded bad, Looks like Tha LW tournament got you fucked......cuz you juss "Lose Well" V ...It's a shame...You would'nt "break me down" if you were "spelling me" 3...didn't rhyme well and the punches ain't connecting Homie you're juss a "dull sepicmen"..... like god had prewritten seeds he had majority of infant fans Wit Geber on his verses....he still did'nt get feed 4....you got good vocab..but it doesn't disguise the lacking punches Yo homie this is juss "one on one" don't "Flex" wit me...and call for intefearance... He wanna be a "Living Legend"... but Im afraid Daubs wit a sig can't fix yo apearance 3....the dude IS in LL... this dudes a clown with rhymes, and RV is the jerk's stage im not talking bout killing time, when im about to merk age 6...good nameplay whats this bout good days? cause i see free agent, that says alot oh wait, having bad days....you're just talking bout whenever you drop 8..LOL.....good punch..worded nicely so what? im beating this kid, i dont need to be bringing reasons cause i'll spring to make this bitch fall quicker than skipping seasons 4...weak this kid even insults himself, wow, how could ya be that dumb even he knows he doesn't have skill.....just look where he's from 5....this was ite.... 4-0 eh, hope you were playing around, cause those 4 were all no game but i'll ruin that record faster that trashing the hall of fame 4...more like self glorifing Ok..I though veyetal got this mad easy.Fokuss..ur punches were weak.The open mic you did on Trigga town was better than diss.Stop trying to be so complex and just worry about dissing and shit.Get some personals n shit.That bowel movements one was shit...learn not to use gay vocab.Next to it you had to say"bird shit"...whenever you have to do that..then you got gay vocab. Vote-Veyetal for harder hittin punches & shit Rtf below....or this vote will be removed in 3days :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206352 |
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Voted For: veyetal
Veyetal this dudes a clown with rhymes, and RV is the jerk's stage im not talking bout killing time, when im about to merk age Decent.. whats this bout good days? cause i see free agent, that says alot oh wait, having bad days....you're just talking bout whenever you drop Ehh.. so what? im beating this kid, i dont need to be bringing reasons cause i'll spring to make this bitch fall quicker than skipping seasons Pretty chill.. this kid even insults himself, wow, how could ya be that dumb even he knows he doesn't have skill.....just look where he's from Nah.. 4-0 eh, hope you were playing around, cause those 4 were all no game but i'll ruin that record faster that trashing the hall of fame Didn't connect.. -FokusS- You juss "out and about" cuz "being pussy illegal"...........and "homie you criminal" And judgin by yo "avy and text skillz".....you still aiming toward being original...... Nah.. I mean really You're juss lonely and unsucessful homie....as far as crews went.... Vey you got "eye' for this "shit" you should see.....I drop unexpectly like his sig bowel movements(bird shit) Way too forced.. Looks like Tha LW tournament got you fucked......cuz you juss "Lose Well" V ...It's a shame...You would'nt "break me down" if you were "spelling me" Decent concept.. worded bad.. Homie you're juss a "dull sepicmen"..... like god had prewritten seeds he had majority of infant fans Wit Geber on his verses....he still did'nt get feed Nope.. Yo homie this is juss "one on one" don't "Flex" wit me...and call for intefearance... He wanna be a "Living Legend"... but Im afraid Daubs wit a sig can't fix yo apearance Nah, didn't connect.. Overall, Veyetal came with quite a few decent lines with a few original concepts. His verse was pretty good, there was some pretty good wordplay tied in with decent punches. -FokusS-'s verse had a bunch of forced wordplay and punches. There wasn't a decent punchline, but there was a few decent concepts that were just worded wrong. But, in the end, Veyetal had the better overall verse and that's why he gets my vote. Vote - Veyetal -FokusS-, you should sign up for the Punchline League. It's one of the best leagues this site has ever seen, with over 50 people in it right now. It's a good place to elevate without messing up your records. You should sign up. |
Voted For: .Merkage.
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I think fokuss won because of like one category which was PUNCHES
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Voted For: veyetal
veyetal definately has the cooler name, that was his advantage. |
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Voted For: veyetal
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