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Voted For: MeTaFo'
Plz Return Da Vote In One Of Deez Links http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=209249 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=208859 Kon Yo Verse Wuz Ok Sum Rhymez Seemed Forced Though! An Datz Neva Good! But I Liked A Couple Bars U Had Like Da Wallet One Dat Wuz Sik Yo! U Didnt Have a Consistency In Yo Punz Thought n Dat Wuz Yo Main Problem!! Metafo Yo Verse Wuz Str8 Hommie!! Alot Of Good Solid Punchez! Matta Fact Dem Shitz Wuz Non Stop Droppin Each Bar Hit In Its Own Way n Yo Verse Showed Versatility And I Think U Get Dis Win Ez Hommie!! I Wuznt Feelin Da Last 2 Bars But Da Rest Wuz Fiya Keep It Up n Plz Return Da Vote |
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Voted For: MeTaFo'
dopeman, Imma pop a few, to show the chrome's no rumor n have this cat eating slugs like timon and pumba 0...no punch...sayin he's eatin slugs is NOT a punch metafo has a face only a mother could love... a shame we saw it he's father still carries a picture of the kid who came with the wallet 3...played shit.Anything about birth is likely to be played. buck.shot keep talkin bout guns, we know you ain't seen gats bitch, u couldn't be 'fresh' if ya verse came in listerine packs! 3...played...again. u cant beat me, cuz u'll be 'coming off the top', like fat-bitches on ya nut-sack cuz this battle ain't fair, my flow sparks like a lighters.. no need for a match! 0...self glorifing. this pest's getting slaughtered up against a prizefighter bitch is walking a thin line and it was drawn with his eyeliner 2..weak....c'mon..where ya creativity? Ya shits lonely not a decent Damn Line,one trick pony Got props? niggas was just being Man-Kind and I aint talkin Mick Foley * the wrestler hes name was mankind* 5...decent concept...for once. Half the time ya shit is asinine...the other half u no-show its better for u not to be seen, like Blackmail photos EZ!! MOTHER FUCKER... 3...decent concept..worded horribly. I'll have Kon in a body bag, while the ambulance rushes the spot.. Lifes a hardly a Loss tho, look at ya battle stats, Your experienced ALOT.. 5...hmm...ok. I'll get ya 'shot-boy'.......... an I dont mean handin you my Alias The way i'm ''spittin'' at kon, ya'd think i was retarded 'Sprayin-this' 3...i wuz't feelin this.1st line is borderline selfglorifing I say-a-diss....... an your Punch game must be Made-to-miss I come at you from every angle, shit its like i Fade-my-fist 3...weak. Like a bottle of Cris...I'll leave this kid left to chill on Ice Handin me this win...Is the only time you'll ever be Nice 5......ok. An i appreiate the jesture, But i'ma Test-ya, then lyrically arrest-ya Now your stuck behind my bars chasin a bird, Like tweety n Sylvester* 4...decent. I'm the best-too...Ever drop, regardless of the weather..... Kon thinks he so slick...He actually rocks latex an leather! 3.....weak.... I'm the better-man, your no veteran, But we'll let the voters decide Ya idea of ''swayin'' is..........Drinkin a 5th then trynna Drive! 6.....good.... It wont make you hit 5, So i suggest you just slap the winners hand... If only i was Strobe, I'd enforce a new rule...'BEGINNERS BANNED'' 3....NO...weak.didnt' connect well. Then you wont know where you stand...Like blind men in a Que.. All you ever spit is BULLSHIT, an i'm allergic, do you got a Tissue? 4....played. achoo, sorry, I just sneezed, hand me a gun an i'll have trigger town Squeezed.. Ya crew is shaming RV!...You can call me...the reprosseser, I got your forum Seized! 4.....meh...ok Well...this battle wuzn't that hot.But Meta 'fore got it easy.WHy?Well...for starters...he had a lot more lines than Kon.Kon had played lines like a mutha fucker.That 2nd bar..a face only a mom can love?I heard that shit when I wuz in elementary.And it's been used in battles countless times.Fresh/listerine line...also played.FLow spark lighters line...self glorifing.Man-Kind line and blackmail ones were decent concepts...but they were worded horribly. Vote-meta'fore. Hit one my battles up in sig. |
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Voted For: MeTaFo'
I'll have Kon in a body bag, while the ambulance rushes the spot.. Lifes a hardly a Loss tho, look at ya battle stats, Your experienced ALOT.. Lol...decent and fairly original punch on his rec.. I'll get ya 'shot-boy'.......... an I dont mean handin you my Alias The way i'm ''spittin'' at kon, ya'd think i was retarded 'Sprayin-this' LMAO!! retard lines are coo.. I say-a-diss....... an your Punch game must be Made-to-miss I come at you from every angle, shit its like i Fade-my-fist kinda weak, not really fellin it.. Like a bottle of Cris...I'll leave this kid left to chill on Ice Handin me this win...Is the only time you'll ever be Nice played concept, too basic.. An i appreiate the jesture, But i'ma Test-ya, then lyrically arrest-ya Now your stuck behind my bars chasin a bird, Like tweety n Sylvester* meh, its ok.. I'm the best-too...Ever drop, regardless of the weather..... Kon thinks he so slick...He actually rocks latex an leather! Lol, second line was nice.. I'm the better-man, your no veteran, But we'll let the voters decide Ya idea of ''swayin'' is..........Drinkin a 5th then trynna Drive! Lol, nice concept, good flip on it.. It wont make you hit 5, So i suggest you just slap the winners hand... If only i was Strobe, I'd enforce a new rule...'BEGINNERS BANNED'' ok, this was average.. Then you wont know where you stand...Like blind men in a Que.. All you ever spit is BULLSHIT, an i'm allergic, do you got a Tissue? corny, but funny.. achoo, sorry, I just sneezed, hand me a gun an i'll have trigger town Squeezed.. Ya crew is shaming RV!...You can call me...the reprosseser, I got your forum Seized! i think u meant "repossesser" so gud.. ok, ure verse was kind of inconsistent, u had a couple of played lines in the middle, a few average bars with weak delivery. but then you had some real hard punches, the opening two bars had me rollin straight away, the swayin line was nice, u had a fair amount of multies which made shit flow better, a good verse, not ure best but nice. 7/10 dopeman, Imma pop a few, to show the chrome's no rumor n have this cat eating slugs like timon and pumba cheesy concept, but ok.. metafo has a face only a mother could love... a shame we saw it he's father still carries a picture of the kid who came with the wallet lol, nice punch.. buck.shot keep talkin bout guns, we know you ain't seen gats bitch, u couldn't be 'fresh' if ya verse came in listerine packs! meh, not the best delivery on the concept.. u cant beat me, cuz u'll be 'coming off the top', like fat-bitches on ya nut-sack cuz this battle ain't fair, my flow sparks like a lighters.. no need for a match! weak lines in this bar.. this pest's getting slaughtered up against a prizefighter bitch is walking a thin line and it was drawn with his eyeliner LMAO!! nice punch, i like it.. Ya shits lonely not a decent Damn Line,one trick pony Got props? niggas was just being Man-Kind and I aint talkin Mick Foley * the wrestler hes name was mankind* lol, decent wordplay Half the time ya shit is asinine...the other half u no-show its better for u not to be seen, like Blackmail photos average closer.. ure still using a newb structure, ure delivery is weak in a lot of bars, u had a couple of nice bars, about ONE that i thought really stood out, u just need to use a more complex rhyme scheme cuz ure's is too basic, throw in multies to for better flow, cuz ure's was a bit choppy in places. 5/10 V/ - MeTaFo' plz plz plz RTF on my NK battle.....its getting mad slept on and its dope :thumbup: the links in my siggy as always. pz. |
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Voted For: MeTaFo'
Kon-Your verse was iight, you had some iight punches in there that landed and were present...a bit was played/i just wasnt fealing it......ur structure is annoying and just plain un original...up on that...overall 5/10 metafo-now this was a good verse...u incorporated good mulits...ur structure was stretched at times but flowed better...u had good personals and tight punches...everything molded together overall 8/10 v/metafo' rtf links in sig...1 |
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