Vocabulary was excellent, really complex but all made sense. Use of alliteration made this shit just bounce off the tongue lol obviously the emotion was fire and the topic and the way u approached it was dope. Best piece I've read on RV and thats not an over statement. :thumbup:

holy shit ^^^wow ....nominate me if you like it:thumbup:

how do i do that and i will. U have straight talent man.

go to nominations n put the link in woooooooooooooo

Wow.. I enjoyed this. Your vocab was always indeph-like. (almost :))
I liked some of the messeges you got across. I actually understand your rap style,
which means you aren't a confused rapper who imitate what they say.
I'm dead tired and I still got entertained with a text open mic. Congrats.

thx.....................wurd^TAKE HEED TO MY DOPENESS mwhaahahaha..rofl

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UNF yo hit me up (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2384460)

i ask you to go with a true flow some hood stuff would be good enough, come with double stats and throw a couple of gatts up in this make it blend crisp should step with powers and accept flowers like sick patient then come quick and flagrant with war nahmean?

this was fire...

really long thou i kinda got tierd of reading it,
but the depth of the story is what keep me going u had alot of creativeness and alot of time on ya hands to actully get that deep man shit is crazy flow good creativeness good depth was extremely deep and all around hella drop......

9/10 good drop

^i am dope .....

DAMN!! that shit was pure fire.........

a real dope piece, the flow was nice throughout, the overall quality of the piece was amazing, some of the best stuff i've seen on RV and it was consistent all the way through. the imagery of the piece was real nice, backed up by a lot of complex vocabs which always adds a lot to a piece like this. the multies in there were dope, made the verse flow better, the rhyme scheme itself was not basic at all and i pretty much can't find a fault in this.........

9.5/10

the reason i don't give 10/10 is cuz to me nothing can be perfect :cool: werd

thx a lot upping

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack homie

wot waz wiv all tha big werds?

read it dumn ass...n get the shit s6 thing out

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Amazing, pure amazing, thats all I have to say, brilliant imagery, well done, keep it up

nice shit there bro,nice shit

I liked this alot homes, keep it up, good emotinal work...9.10

thx............upping............

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