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Chris Stylez 08-23-05 07:29 PM

Now when i posted in post 38 my is still da same and when she posted in post number 36 her Ip is different from mine but in one of her other post its da same

Chris Stylez 08-23-05 07:31 PM

If you got aol does you IP address change or some shyt?

Sik Wit It 08-23-05 07:32 PM

This was feedback posted for Drakel
 
checkin polls.....

Adam 08-23-05 07:44 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by KhAoZ ThEoRy
Voted For: Drakel

BQ:
Not a good verse here, alot of your rhymes were horribly worded and lacked a good solid personal, punches were OK in some places, nuthin spectacular in my opinnon.....Creativly you could of been alot more solid with your concepts, overrall i wasnt feeling your verse like i thought i would, I know you can do better.

Drakel:
Good verse man...Personals were alot stronger and more hard hitting than BQ's...creativity cant be faulted, and your complex wordplay got the better of her, Each bar was worded alot better, so it flowed alot easier as you are reading, a good drop man....

Punches=Drakel
Striucture=both of y'all (besides BQ's wording of a few bars)
Mettas= none really
Personals=Drakel

Highlight of the battle was Drakels ''Hauling ass'' line, that was real nice.

My vote goes too drakel for a more consistant verse.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.


LMAO at getting this voted DQ'ed. You're whack Black Queen.

Adam 08-23-05 07:45 PM

^ I said voted. I'm so dope like that.

Yeah, Drakel whored you.

Black Queen 08-23-05 11:33 PM

shut up bitch i didnt get them d/q sum1 else did faggot stop complainin u cudda voted but u didnt so stop freepostin

Yvonne 08-24-05 02:13 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Drakel
1. you had no personals
2. you talked about my dick inaccurately
3. d/r....well i see you brought your pussy riders, yvonne, who hasn't been active in ages, and sucks
4. im not saying mine was amazing, but its hella better than yours.

my brother i dont c why u shud be pickin on me when i barely know u...fuck it if i may suck to ur eyes prolly too much come have been busted on sight...but if i voted on own fuckin prsonal impression i dont c why u shud be hatin thats bitchy...u talkin about the best text heads?.,..yes i gues they the best and better than u becos they know xactly how to accept defeats...bring ur invisible ego down and stay cool....dont think im a pussy ryder becos i voted for mysteri...i never knew you and u never knew me and i dont think this is the most intelligent way to get to know some1 for the first time...bein it that u categorize urself as some1 with brain when u been dashin it arround...

Peace (add that to ur dictionary)

Black Queen 08-25-05 02:19 PM

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PrahJect 08-25-05 07:10 PM

This was feedback posted for Mysteri
 
pollzz............................................ .....

Germ 08-26-05 01:44 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Yvonne
my brother i dont c why u shud be pickin on me when i barely know u...fuck it if i may suck to ur eyes prolly too much come have been busted on sight...but if i voted on own fuckin prsonal impression i dont c why u shud be hatin thats bitchy...u talkin about the best text heads?.,..yes i gues they the best and better than u becos they know xactly how to accept defeats...bring ur invisible ego down and stay cool....dont think im a pussy ryder becos i voted for mysteri...i never knew you and u never knew me and i dont think this is the most intelligent way to get to know some1 for the first time...bein it that u categorize urself as some1 with brain when u been dashin it arround...

Peace (add that to ur dictionary)


seriously, dont try to come off as intelligent.....go read your vote, it was clearly biased......i know how to accept defeat, i also know how to spell properly, so all your claims about me being ignorant, can fall at this post, because you seem as educated as a 6 year old

now how about a battle, if you proceed being an idiot?

Crazy Hades 08-26-05 11:32 PM

This was feedback posted for Drakel
 
...What in the fuck? This battle is one-sided, it's not dickriding.

yous lackin fine wit my text is divine try matchin mine kids
but don’t ‘think yall can school me’ being absent minded

Bad opener.

and just forget about creative bars, jus stick ta ya played lines
you're ass will never release an album with your one-tracked mind

Bad closer.

Bunch of pussy riders..

Crazy Hades 08-26-05 11:39 PM

By the way, what the fuck at Theory being DQed when he had like the most explained shit here...

Germ 08-27-05 11:41 AM

uppin............................................. .......

Germ 08-28-05 03:38 AM

bump this.........................................

Sik Wit It 08-29-05 01:58 AM

up this .

Germ 08-29-05 02:29 AM

bumpity yos.......................................

Young_law 08-30-05 03:10 AM

Voted For: Mysteri

Drakel

Came with a few nice punches, but you revolved almost your whole verse around one topic try to "broaden your horizons" a lil bit mo, brag and vague dont rhyme, "dumb bitch's slacking in text, but she aint worried she's falling fast
cause look at her pics...she already knows the term 'hauling ass'" good personal towards her pics if you would have added more personals to your punches you would have won this battle, your verse was str8 overall but not good enuff 2 win this battle

Mysteri

Nice verse came with some good punches, punches were unique you might say, i noticed some good anologies in there
"your dick's too small, wudn't be rich if you turned sex-to-money", "verse is just clowned..but if ya dick size was seen in ya steeze bars
then you`d have more ‘1-inch punches’ that`d rival bruce lee’s art"

this vote goes to mysteri

Deranged 08-30-05 07:34 PM

Voted For: Drakel

yous lackin fine wit my text is divine try matchin mine kids
but don’t ‘think yall can school me’ being absent minded
6...good punch and flow..tho the multis in set-up was a little forced to me
you write rhymes for kids novel,I write "Text-for-Dummies"
your dick's too small, wudn't be rich if you turned sex-to-money
3...nah..i ain't feelin this..ESSPECIALLY the set-up..really forced multi here too
verse is just clowned..but if ya dick size was seen in ya steeze bars
then you`d have more ‘1-inch punches’ that`d rival bruce lee’s art
3...stop with these jokes..it ain't connecting well
you're most cowardly puss on this board, you ain't bad as me
bitch thought making new aliases would give him more personality
4...ok..but didn't connect well again
wow, you’re a horrible lyricist, ur verse is just….babble babble
do your words ever have a point? Not even when playing scrabble
5..didn't like the rhyming here but punch was ite
and just forget about creative bars, jus stick ta ya played lines
you're ass will never release an album with your one-tracked mind
4...he doesn't do audio so this seemed to be a general punch

i knew you always liked me, but i didn't come here to brag
came to solve the misteri of your whackness, but signs are looking vague
5...kind of a personal i guess..so good...
fuck it, im killing this pussy, and no other cats will care
cause your style is more plain....that the fucking hats you wear
6....good....
but shes a lover, not a hater, even still after this fight
heh, shit, im pounding bq more than her saturday nights
5...good..but sexist jokes while battlin females are played
and baby let me tell ya, you're not just cuz ya think ya thug
i hate to beat you black queen, but they do call me the king of clubs
6...good wordplay
you do write alot on RV though, but i still see no hope in sight
you just hang around that corner, cause one day you might get to open mic
7....ur best bar in my opinion
dumb bitch's slacking in text, but she aint worried she's falling fast
cause look at her pics...she already knows the term 'hauling ass'
4...ok..but i think one rip on the pic is enough.
lez be real though, she's been here since december, and still no skill
shit, so im rippin' black queen easier than her dildos will
4...nah..like i said..too many sexist jokes are a no

Ok...Drakel got this..

Mysteri...Problem with your verse was that you were really lacked personals.i don't recall seeing one at all.Just general punches that could have been used against anyone.I esspeccially hated those jokes about his dick.And some of ur rhyming didn't connent.Like text is divine/lackin fine...and text for dummies/sex to money....those are forced multis.

Vote-Drakel

Black Queen 09-01-05 08:32 PM

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Germ 09-01-05 10:43 PM

uppin............................................. .............

Germ 09-02-05 04:15 PM

uppin............................................. ....

Germ 09-03-05 01:44 AM

bump this whore....................................

Red Bull 09-07-05 11:42 PM

Voted For: Drakel

Drakel..
i knew you always liked me, but i didn't come here to brag
came to solve the misteri of your whackness, but signs are looking vague
Word..Nice..
fuck it, im killing this pussy, and no other cats will care
cause your style is more plain....that the fucking hats you wear
Dope punch..
but shes a lover, not a hater, even still after this fight
heh, shit, im pounding bq more than her saturday nights
Owned...
and baby let me tell ya, you're not just cuz ya think ya thug
i hate to beat you black queen, but they do call me the king of clubs
Cards are fun..
you do write alot on RV though, but i still see no hope in sight
you just hang around that corner, cause one day you might get to open mic
Meh..
dumb bitch's slacking in text, but she aint worried she's falling fast
cause look at her pics...she already knows the term 'hauling ass'
Hahaha word...
lez be real though, she's been here since december, and still no skill
shit, so im rippin' black queen easier than her dildos will
Fuckin' OWNED..

Mysteri..
yous lackin fine wit my text is divine try matchin mine kids
but don’t ‘think yall can school me’ being absent minded
Nah...
you write rhymes for kids novel,I write "Text-for-Dummies"
your dick's too small, wudn't be rich if you turned sex-to-money
That doesn't make sense..Worded it wrong..
verse is just clowned..but if ya dick size was seen in ya steeze bars
then you`d have more ‘1-inch punches’ that`d rival bruce lee’s art
You just used a small dick line..
you're most cowardly puss on this board, you ain't bad as me
bitch thought making new aliases would give him more personality
Meh...not bad..
wow, you’re a horrible lyricist, ur verse is just….babble babble
do your words ever have a point? Not even when playing scrabble
Not bad, pretty forced rhyme..
and just forget about creative bars, jus stick ta ya played lines
you're ass will never release an album with your one-tracked mind
Nah..

Vote: Drakel

Drakel came harder in this battle. He had better punches, better flow, funnier wordplay, and better personals..

So yeah, my vote is Drakel..

Texxus 09-07-05 11:45 PM

Voted For: Mysteri

checkin polls...yao ming......

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Texxus 09-07-05 11:48 PM

wow i knew Foo would vote for Drakel:cool:....but w/e...erase my vote suppose to be feedback

Red Bull 09-07-05 11:50 PM

Why would you know? Because his verse was better? Yeah that is basically the reason..

Germ 09-10-05 09:44 PM

i shoulda won this already...........................

Black Queen 09-10-05 10:08 PM

lol uppin cus i dont kno wat cezar or foo talkin about in because the guy above me cracks me up

Germ 09-13-05 01:54 PM

uppin............................................. ..

Germ 09-15-05 12:48 PM

uppin............................................. ..

Young_law 09-15-05 01:12 PM

wtf @ this battle havin 69 posts damn...............

Shade of Eden 09-15-05 01:45 PM

This was feedback posted for Drakel
 
how easy is this..................................

Black Queen 09-19-05 04:18 PM

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Adam 09-19-05 05:09 PM

Kesse hasn't won this battle yet.....?

...Wow.

Germ 09-24-05 07:42 PM

whatas a kesse?....................................

Sik Wit It 09-27-05 04:13 PM

Uppin this shit.

Pro. 10-03-05 03:36 PM

This was feedback posted for Mysteri
 
Nice battle...uppin this for fam!....close battle...Up!

Dickard. 10-03-05 05:44 PM

This was feedback posted for Drakel
 
pollz............................................. ..

chip 10-03-05 06:01 PM

This was feedback posted for Mysteri
 
hey girl.........lol @ him tryin to use your picks against u.... that wont backfire...... checkin polls an uppin for Mysteri.......... by the way Drakel, vague and brag don't rhyme...........

Germ 10-04-05 04:26 PM

vague, and brag do rhyme....wow, dont be so damn narrow

haha, also, dont be a hypocrite....you rhymed version with virgin


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