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NaRc-UzI 08-31-05 02:51 PM

This os getting Removed....................................

Typical 08-31-05 03:11 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Typical
Voted For: hotshh!

This bitch is Cautious cause he has no Offense like the Miami Dolphins
To Win Hotshh needs Dick Ryders like Casting Directors in Adult Films
If that was my verse i would be Embarresed cuz that Shit was Trash
vs
General? Ha! .............These newbies is getting so Stuck Up*
Aint robbing gunshops......But I bet I "Jack-Uzi" the Fuck Up
Use this dude as a Recliner, your crew....a group of Minors
So you can ALL "Get Lost" like Condoms in Loose Vaginas


both pretty much sucked
but that condom closer was funy enuff to take this
narc need to try harder and hotshh is past his prime
give it up already




ok i'll elaborate more
You aint "Hot" so "Shh" cause ur verse is putting the voters to Sleep
The chances of you beating me R slimmer than a Benz losing to a Jeep
THIS WAS A WEAK OPENER, NO PUNCH OR PERSONAL
Homie I know you Scared but I dont Care so its the end for this Guy
After the battle hotShh will be saying "No Fare" like a "Free Bus Ride"
PLAYED PLAYED FROM BACK IN THE DAY
If that was my verse i would be Embarresed cuz that Shit was Trash
If T.E ever gave a call I would be like a Quarter Back and Just Pass*
SELF GLORY HERE, NO REAL DISS BY SAYING YOU'LL TURN DOWN TE

NARC U LACKED PERSONALS, NO NAMEPLAYS NO REAL HITS BESIDES THE DR ONE,

Wish I never 'Slept' on ya name cause pain is all it Gets Me
Cause since I read ya battle stats I've suffered from NARC-olepsy
THIS IS DECENT BUT THE WORDING MAKES IT LACK
You paid the price to face some vets like it dont Matter the Cost
But whats the point, huh?.....Just to say you Battled and Lost?
MORE OF A STATEMENT THAN A PUNCH
See theres no Way he's Ill, You get bashed with Crazy Skill
'Seeing' me will make your head spin more than your Avy Wheel
DECENT AT BEST I CAN TELL U DIDNT TRY

HOT U SLAPPED TOGETHER A VERSE AND I CAN TELL U SLEPT ON YOUR COMPETITION
LIKE I SAID THOUGH YOUR CLOSER WAS BETTER THAN NARCS DR LINE

NARC GET IT DQ'D IF YOU WANT BUT ITS OBVIOUS THAT EVEN WITHOUT TRYING HE STILL BEAT YOU, NO BEEF WITH YOU, YOUR COOL
BUT I WILL BATTLE YOU IF YOU MAKE ME WASTE ANY MORE TIME ON THIS SUBPAR EXCUSE FOR A CREW BATTLE

AND FINALLY HOTSHH BATTLE ME YOU DUCKING ASS HOMO
YOU NEVER RTF AND THINK THAT YOUR SHIT DONT STINK

Ryan Hughes 08-31-05 03:13 PM

Voted For: hotshh!

You aint "Hot" so "Shh" cause ur verse is putting the voters to Sleep
The chances of you beating me R slimmer than a Benz losing to a Jeep
^^^Not Real Feelin the Opener but it was ight....Nutthin special
This bitch is Cautious cause he has no Offense like the Miami Dolphins
To Win Hotshh needs Dick Ryders like Casting Directors in Adult Films
^^^No....U Started off good...but u feel off
Ur verse is "Injury Pone" like a gymnastics performed by a "Blind Kid"
Dont like my style then ill "Split Ur Dome" and make u "Open Minded"
^^^Nice.....
Homie I know you Scared but I dont Care so its the end for this Guy
After the battle hotShh will be saying "No Fare" like a "Free Bus Ride"
^^^Good...i Like this line
If that was my verse i would be Embarresed cuz that Shit was Trash
If T.E ever gave a call I would be like a Quarter Back and Just Pass
^^^Ight.....Closer Not Bad wit the personal


Wish I never 'Slept' on ya name cause pain is all it Gets Me
Cause since I read ya battle stats I've suffered from NARC-olepsy
^^^Nice Opener wit the personal on his name
You paid the price to face some vets like it dont Matter the Cost
But whats the point, huh?.....Just to say you Battled and Lost?
^^^Ight....
See theres no Way he's Ill, You get bashed with Crazy Skill
'Seeing' me will make your head spin more than your Avy Wheel
^^^Hot.....Nice personal
General? Ha! .............These newbies is getting so Stuck Up*
Aint robbing gunshops......But I bet I "Jack-Uzi" the Fuck Up
^^^Nice....That was A Sick personal..i liked this
Use this dude as a Recliner, your crew....a group of Minors
So you can ALL "Get Lost" like Condoms in Loose Vaginas
^^^Good Closer.....
V/Hotshh!.....this was a Good Battle Both came Wit good verse's....Narc u suprised me u had a pretty solid Verse u had good structure u need more personals tho but some lines i wasnt feel Adult Films Kinda played....some lines u need to work on ur set up's but u did give hot a run.....Hotshh! u came wit a good verse i felt alot of ur punchs u came wit consistent diss's an good flow wit good structure an wordplay.....V/hotshh!

NaRc-UzI 08-31-05 07:35 PM

aight he up 4-2 good battle Hotshh and typicals vote will not get removed cause he explained it more

Adam 09-01-05 11:13 AM

4-2 for my boy. Word, good looks on The Establishment's part.

N.Tavarez 09-01-05 11:36 AM

werd.............................................. ...........

Daubs 09-01-05 04:14 PM

Voted For: hotshh!

You aint "Hot" so "Shh" cause ur verse is putting the voters to Sleep
The chances of you beating me R slimmer than a Benz losing to a Jeep

OK FOR AN OPENER...GOOD NAMEPLAY IN SET UP.

This bitch is Cautious cause he has no Offense like the Miami Dolphins
To Win Hotshh needs Dick Ryders like Casting Directors in Adult Films

PLAYED BUT MEH, SORTA HIT.

Ur verse is "Injury Pone" like a gymnastics performed by a "Blind Kid"
Dont like my style then ill "Split Ur Dome" and make u "Open Minded"

DOPE PUNCH, NICE WORDPLAY DECENT CONCEPT.

Homie I know you Scared but I dont Care so its the end for this Guy
After the battle hotShh will be saying "No Fare" like a "Free Bus Ride"

AGAIN NICE MAN, DECENT WORDPLAY.

If that was my verse i would be Embarresed cuz that Shit was Trash
If T.E ever gave a call I would be like a Quarter Back and Just Pass*

MEH, I SEE WHAT YOUR GETTING AT BUT AM NOT REALLY FEELIN IT.

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Wish I never 'Slept' on ya name cause pain is all it Gets Me
Cause since I read ya battle stats I've suffered from NARC-olepsy

OK, ORIGINAL CONCEPT A DECENT OPENER.

You paid the price to face some vets like it dont Matter the Cost
But whats the point, huh?.....Just to say you Battled and Lost?

NICE PUNCH, IT HIT.

See theres no Way he's Ill, You get bashed with Crazy Skill
'Seeing' me will make your head spin more than your Avy Wheel

GOOD PERSONAL AND IT HIT.

General? Ha! .............These newbies is getting so Stuck Up*
Aint robbing gunshops......But I bet I "Jack-Uzi" the Fuck Up

LMAO, DOPE...NICE NAMEPLAY GOOD PUNCH.

Use this dude as a Recliner, your crew....a group of Minors
So you can ALL "Get Lost" like Condoms in Loose Vaginas

DECENT FLIP OF A PLAYED CONCEPT SO IT HIT.

__________________________________________________ _________

OK, 1ST OFF NARC YOU ELEVATED A LOT MAN,KEEP IT UP...BUT HOTSHH GETS MY VOTE HERE, HE CAME WITH HARDER PUNCHES AND BETTER NAMEPLAYS AND PERSONALS. PERSONALS HIT HARDER SO I FELT HIS VERSE WAS JUST PLAIN BETTER.

PROPS ON ELEVATIN SO MUCH, NO HATE.

PLEASE RTF ON THE 2 IN MY SIG.


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