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This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
 

yo jus checkin the polllllzzzz my homiez.nice job both................................

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errr body pollz errr body feedback.............if u got the posts VOTE :thumbup: upppin

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a whole page of effin dots...........lol so ill continue the tradition

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please leave honest and explained votes....i will rtf on all explained and honest votes

man stfu..who the fuk complains about upping a battle?

"oOh..yOu uPp yA bAtTlE tOo mUcH!!"..wtf?shut up

besides...this battle should have been closed..

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lol it was a joke.......u need to chill out hot head

and it shouldnt have been closed becuz those were unexplained votes.......so you stfu go back to your cypher ho

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thanks for calling it MY cypher

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Voted For: Deranged

this was a good battle deranged verse was better though fo the fact that his vocab was good and his flow was on point through out the whole verse i like the emotion also and how the concept went along with the topic this was a good battle but deranged take this and also mystic chaos you forced some of your lines also for example:
"Fearing for my life no response in return as the demons lead the way
Needing my soul for the extinction of god Thinking i will not live to see another day"
that line was streched and forced good verse though

thx....uppin for more votes

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Voted For: Deranged

both verses were dope!

Mystic Chaos your wordplay was vivid and your structure was cool. I feel you kept to the topic and were especially creative about having a revolt and starting an uprise. The dialogue with Satan was shakey though you should of elaborated a lil more if you were going in that direction. The dream sequence ending was ok and comical but at the same time its been done to death. The verse was dope but i give it a 8 overall! Good Job though kid!

Deranged i really liked your verse because of the theme of it. You stood consistent to the gloom and doom aspect of it. It was hell on earth from beginning to ending with no salvation in sight. I feel its ok to not have a happy ending all the time because that is a reality of life. You were also very vivid and your structure was also very good. I give you an overall 9.

This battle was more of direction in storyline for me. Both verses were equally dope in structure and vivid wordplay. Good job emcees!!!

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