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Untraceable 09-24-05 05:47 PM

yeh he got potential.....but some seemed forced.....he got too heavy on the multi's but it wasnt that bad.....just work at it a lil more.....add some humor and i hate to see tryout that only self glorify.....so mayb do like more of a battle verse that way we can see how you would handle it....and i even let you pick me as the one to diss....:thumbup: cuz i wana see what you can come up with.....8-10 lines :thumbup: now get to work......i wana see how you work punches and personals....then i can make a more educated decision....about whether i think you should be in :thumbup:

Texxus 09-24-05 10:01 PM

vote-nope...........

.Barz Of Steel. 09-25-05 07:08 PM

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p4ntzistheish 09-25-05 07:13 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .Barz Of Steel.
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Exactly what I was thinking.

Recluse 09-27-05 09:02 PM

Whats Popin......

Kawn Flixx 09-27-05 09:03 PM

^What homie i already said you in..you can just check in and rep us

Recluse 09-27-05 09:06 PM

^Werd.....Listen Bruh You Got AIM?

Kawn Flixx 09-27-05 09:08 PM

Aim Name: LOL Im High

^Dope

Recluse 09-27-05 09:09 PM

Werd....Ight Hold Up......

Kawn Flixx 09-27-05 09:13 PM

iight lol its

LOL Im High

Recluse 09-27-05 09:32 PM

Edit:....................

Kawn Flixx 09-27-05 09:33 PM

^yea ill think about it but lets chat in the Grape Vine

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-29-05 10:50 PM

ayo wassup....my boy untraceable told me to join but imma give you one of my battles....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209681 pm me if im down 1

Untraceable 09-29-05 11:33 PM

hm...i neva saw ya shit b4.....but uhh...idk if you ready for an estab'd crew yet.....you got structure issues.....work on your punches.....add personals........and work on multi's and up your vocab.......so yeah just elevate some......thats all....:thumbup:

GKillaz05 09-30-05 02:43 PM

Im down with this crew, check out my battle with fraud right now. I wont be on all weekend, but let me know if im in. I will be on Monday if you need me to freestyle just let me know. PM me.

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-30-05 05:02 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Untraceable
hm...i neva saw ya shit b4.....but uhh...idk if you ready for an estab'd crew yet.....you got structure issues.....work on your punches.....add personals........and work on multi's and up your vocab.......so yeah just elevate some......thats all....:thumbup:

u wrote that towards me??? cuz u told me to come so idk.....

Kawn Flixx 09-30-05 06:08 PM

Word Gkillaz your in...

GKillaz05 10-02-05 04:25 PM

iight, kew.. I will rep this crew in my sig..

Kawn Flixx 10-02-05 10:01 PM

^iight your added to the roster..rep us

Micsachek 10-06-05 06:34 PM

its like i got a discount in this battle cuz these kids are "worth-less"/
im a lyrical merchant, i spit once and kill two with this purchase/
im not nervous dawg my name rings bells/
i will drown you with no glock and you can still "see shells"/
i bring demons and hell and im like fire mixed with ether/
your gonna get warm and im not talkin about with a heater/

hit me back and tell me if im in or not, im active as well, dont worry about that, let votes commense...

Texxus 10-06-05 06:35 PM

^no.......

fucka 15character.

Micsachek 10-06-05 06:47 PM

dont gotta be ignorant, just say no

Implicit 10-06-05 06:52 PM

^he was talkin about the 15 character limit. the word no only has 2 characters so he was sayin f that.

Texxus 10-06-05 07:03 PM

yeah...noobs......

:cool:

Micsachek 10-07-05 11:40 AM

so whats up with the tryout? what you peeps think?

Implicit 10-07-05 01:26 PM

be patient and we'll get an answer from the whole crew.

Untraceable 10-07-05 03:22 PM

yeh i say no.....

Kawn Flixx 10-07-05 05:56 PM

v// no ..goodbye.

Micsachek 10-07-05 06:55 PM

thanks anyway 1

Abraxas 10-09-05 05:01 PM

i'd like to tryout....
for topical and text.. get back at me...
give me a topical to write or a text battle..
or just accept me on the spot....

Kawn Flixx 10-09-05 05:17 PM

^word para your in ..rep us in ya sig

Abraxas 10-09-05 05:22 PM

but ummm.. who are you though??
u some alias i know??

Texxus 10-09-05 05:31 PM

i say yes....i was your partner in like a tag team tourny...we murder r-rated n forgotten flow

Abraxas 10-09-05 05:33 PM

i still dont know...
pardon for a bad memory...

Texxus 10-09-05 05:34 PM

Kyleon...my old name(you still prolly dont remember)

Abraxas 10-09-05 05:36 PM

i dont...
i know the verse i did though...

First movie ratings now chemical substances, fuck is this coming to…
Fuck, I’ll merk both of these kids with letters from my alphabet soup!
It’ll be Arrr-rated like brutal pirate movies, with semen and sailors.
Cause I bet ya Nitrogens flow will be forgotten like chemical failures.
R-rated’s overrated, I could call him a rocker with his Hot Topics.
Fuck stoning ya, shit I can crack open your head with a damn lockpick.
So fuck it I’ll just bring out the hoes, and water these herbs in drizzles.
But I’ll be damned if your R-Rated sex audio was worse than Sdizzles.
Watch me drive R-Rateds career away but shit it wont even go that far.
So I’ll be sunning Nitrogen, till he becomes more yellow than his avatar.

^ this one...

Kawn Flixx 10-09-05 05:47 PM

^Word your in homie..i edited you to the roster

Texxus 10-09-05 05:49 PM

yeah i remember that verse......

Gorgeous 10-18-05 08:55 PM

Aye I'm a topical head.I don't have a link but I have a freestyle.

Bring me Down:
The rain was salty & the air was thick with sadness....
...The day I had to face the death of my Mama Ms.Gladys
She died of a stroke,the doctors said it was typical for,
A grieving mom that's broke,my heart was initially sore
Life wasn't the same for me,My aunt didn't want Sadie
She said she was too young so she had to be always strong
Out on her own she starved to death & mauled by dogs
Prejudice tainted my aunts heart black & love 's what I lack
For those who take back what God gives is for I know a fact
A sin in his eyes & I dont see the fascist working the fastest
To make life any better yet for the illeterate bastards who 'r lastest
In the fight for survival on Earth & it Brings me Down when birth
Is looked down upon cause Lurch is ugly & loved with warmth
But I've yet to come to a nigga who didnt need my help to be bigga
Than life to the over achieving who figure hes a wack ass nigga
Leave em face down in the dirt until his eyes 'r sore & his heart hurts
But I fight back cause I see the good in those who fought since birth
To be the best amongst those who 'r in their fancy new car
I'm barely above par but those who aren't their ain't a single part
In this world in which u cant fill to the fullest pimple on the face...
...Of the Earth so do ur best & in Gods eye youll find ur ment place

XM 10-18-05 08:59 PM

pretty decent for a freestyle..........up to bone thoh....

oh and i kno who you are lmao


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