Voted For: Appocolyptik

i felt like spektikuls punches were stretched the fuck out, and none of connected that hard...appocolyptik didn't have the greates verse either but he had some shit i liked...the first bar....the 3rd bar....4th was ok...5th was creative as hell...and thats about all that impressed me.....my vote goes app....hands down..

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This has been reponed because I didn't agree to it being closed. People who think I won and have 500+ posts don't just leave feedback telling me so, VOTE.

why the fuck was my vote taken away...it was as adequate as it gets....do I need to actually write was said in the bars I like?

Voted For: Spektikul

Fucka sailor, I aint need spinach, now vision this boy
Cos it’s true I’ma Popeye…till ya fuckin vision’s destroyed
I love gardenin, with a spade and a shovel I’m standin coo
So I plant my seed in ya girls cooch…
…but the floralB where I’m plantin you

vs.

He said Im tryna beef, damn rights, *hits him with a piece of steak*
I still 'burn herbs', your a 'Pyro-kronik'..should be a piece of cake
Thought that me and Soul liked him, we really thought he was a weiner
If you seen the tunes he rocked, you wouldnt wanna be his friend neither
No wonder this bitch is on my block list, all he does is stalk and annoy
Kid cant even serve me through text, and ironically he's a paper boy


Ok, Pyro threw some played lines, spek, some of your wording made your lines look pretty corny, but LMFAO @ the blink 182 shit, hard personal IMO, so with those 2 lines it was good, then it fell off, with like blah or badly worded lines. Pyro had some good shit, the lines I quoted were the best, but then he had a fake personal, plus some played lines, and others that coulda had some better wording, so overall I just felt spek got this, close though.

v/Spek

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I can't vote. but...

Good battle. Enjoyed reading this shit.

Appocolyptik outshined Spektikul in this i.m.o.
he had doper punches and some wof the werdplay was crazy. Good shit..

If ya'll could check my battle i'd appreciate..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211938

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oye, shoulda brought the post to vote count lower, I woulda gave this one to you, -_-

The world’s a bitch, and it’s a fact that’s burnin as true
So yeah life’s fucked… makin it less of a virgin than you

^ That was the only punch in this battle that I thought was good.

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upping this gay thing once again.....

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Voted For: Spektikul

Check out his flamming RB sig , who does he think he is...the 'devil?'
Shit, for this battle Ima have to litterally 'drop down' to his level
ok opener, wording could be better..
He said Im tryna beef, damn rights, *hits him with a piece of steak*
I still 'burn herbs', your a 'Pyro-kronik'..should be a piece of cake (1)
not the best, but ok nameplay..
Thought that me and Soul liked him, we really thought he was a weiner (2)
If you seen the tunes he rocked, you wouldnt wanna be his friend neither
setup was cool, but the punch lacked..
This kid just runs his mouth, when I ask to battle him every night
Appocolyptiks never shuts up, which makes him a-pac-o-lips, right?
lol, corny but funny nameplay still..
No wonder this bitch is on my block list, all he does is stalk and annoy (2)
Kid cant even serve me through text, and ironically he's a paper boy
Lmao!! best line so far..
In the classifieds he needs a new job, cause his rap style is scary
Battling me, I leave his verse posted at the top of the O-Bitch-uary
the obituary wordplay i've seen before..
I hope he aint staying on Rv, shit, he'd only be wasting our time
For all I know...
He could just be a 'pussy in a hat', and is still unable to rhyme (3)
decent enough closer..

really spek, this was one of your weaker verses, i gather that you didn't really take this battle seriously, you had some aight lines, i was liking the paper boy punch, there were a couple of played concepts used, and your wording and delivery needs work, overall this was a half-assed verse to me...5.5/10


Fuck you and The Establishment, I guess it’s critical G
That I don’t diss ya leader, coz you’d take “fuck Soul Rebel” literally
homo lines are fucking gay..[/WORDPLAY]:laugh:
When it comes to wackness you’re the epitomy, but I’ll nail this shit
And I’ll put your girl up for DIY…right after I nail the bitch
ok bit of wordplay, pretty basic stuff..
You’re fuckin failin this… and I’ll leave you leerin hoe
Coz kid, we all know Specticuls went outa fashion YEARS ago
every nameplay on Spek has become played now, this one especially..
The world’s a bitch, and it’s a fact that’s burnin as true
So yeah life’s fucked… makin it less of a virgin than you
ok punch, it hit..
Fucka sailor, I aint need spinach, now vision this boy
Cos it’s true I’ma Popeye…till ya fuckin vision’s destroyed
Lmao!! dope wordplay, lol..
I love gardenin, with a spade and a shovel I’m standin coo
So I plant my seed in ya girls cooch…
…but the floralB where I’m plantin you
again, nice wordplay..
I’ll smash you foo, I’ma win, no point in debating
And I’ll put your concepts on t.v…
…just to boost the antique channels ratings
concept is played..

ya verse was weak, you started off real wack with a homo line which is fucking played to fuck, you finished played...you had a played nameplay on spek, the only two bars i was feeling was the popeye one and the seed/planting shit line....other than that your verse was weak, the wordplay in other places was real basic and the punches lacked....overall 5/10

V/ - Spektikul

rtf hoe, on my battle with natural killa...link is in my siggy..

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Voted For: Spektikul

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Voted For: Spektikul

ok spektikul won this hands down he had hard hitting punches and his structure was good he had nice word play had good personals everything he took it by a long shot


RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...529050&posted=1