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Voted For: HiPnoTiK

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on chiefs vote fo ryda...lmfao at where it said that ruda has sick punches...rydas punches are shit...no hate ryda but you need to elevate ALOT...i mean you really need to elevate,cuz that shit your spittin,is literally shit...werk on everything...you got multis down though...but thats it...no hate jus stated tha fact that your punches are pretty damn weak...and if your gon take this shit tha wrong way and challenge me,go right ahead cuz ill merk your ass again...but once again no hate mayne...jus some constructive critcism mixed with some fuckin trash talkin...which of course i have to add in...hit me bak niggaz...uppin on this battle fo my homiez...come on close this battle and declare a winner between these two

its obviious the winner is hipnotik, i mean he had the only good quality punches....the votes for ryda are becuz ryda is a homo.....:cool:

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Voted For: HiPnoTiK

HiPnoTiK - Good spit, you had a few good punches, and it flowed well.

Best Line - ya structure goes down just like ya win column
not elevatin since ya first battle, ya lost all them

Worst Line - Clearly you see from ya name ryding things is u
Pei and big-o be ya d/r's there's proof that its true

Ryda - iight spit, it flowed well. You had some attempts at punches.

Best Line - Ill drop a bomb on u like in vietnam
beatin me u have better chances gettin a date to the prom

Worst Line - Battling me ur dead wrong
ill smoke u like a blunt afta my hits ur gone

OVERALL - iight battle, but my vote goes to hiP, he came harder wit the punches and flow.

Vote - HiPnoTiK

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Voted For: HiPnoTiK

HiPnoTiK

ya structure goes down just like ya win column
not elevatin since ya first battle, ya lost all them
Nah..
cheap vocab that you look up on the internet
no skill on your half, dawg you lack intellect
Not a punch..
hadoken knock you like Ryu from street fighter
Got all ya votes from a voting cycle, lil dick ryda
Concept had potential.. worded wrong..
Clearly you see from ya name ryding things is u
Pei and big-o be ya d/r's there's proof that its true
Didn't connect..
reppin rockland wit ya, p/m's fo my single vote
askin fo help ta elevate, put u in my hold 'choke'
Not a punch..
you reppin the R.O.C. clan...haha ill merk that clan
Dude wit the fake personals? oh yea u are that man
Nah..
dawg i can take u out w/out a diss im my finish-ya
cuz i can self glor against ya wack verse. still i diminish ya
Not a punch..

Ryda

You say ur HiPnoTiK but ur rhymes are chaotic
Wen i spit you'll be first to fall ill cross u up like mj in Basketball
Concept was played.. worded wrong anyway..
Ill drop a bomb on u like in vietnam
beatin me u have better chances gettin a date to the prom
Nah..
Battling me ur dead wrong
ill smoke u like a blunt afta my hits ur gone
Not a punch..
ur a hypocrite u have to admit it
u gunna lose like da tru cashmoney u two are fools
u overuse ur words i beat u up like bully to nerds
your goin downwards like the redskins
I have no idea where you rhyme in these four lines. It's just a big mess..
at least they get a couple of wins unlike u
man u stink like peppy la pu thats all i gotta say to beat you
Not a punch..
Afta line one this battle was already won
thats it this battle is done so go practice some more son
Not a punch..

Overall, neither of these verses were that great. HiPnoTiK had one concept that had potential, but it was just worded wrong. The other lines either didn't have a punch or didn't connect at all. The wordplay was pretty simple and the wittiness was lacking. Ryda's verse wasn't very good at all. His best line had a very played concept and was worded wrong. His other lines either didn't have punches or didn't connect, and there was that stretch of four lines where he didn't rhyme his verse at all. HiPnoTiK just came with the more polished verse, coming with that one concept that had potential, rhyming his verse, and attempting more wordplay. So, in conclusion, HiPnoTiK gets my vote.

Vote - HiPnoTiK

uppin for the win, ya'll no i beat this kid.......

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Voted For: HiPnoTiK

ya structure goes down just like ya win column
not elevatin since ya first battle, ya lost all them
cheap vocab that you look up on the internet
no skill on your half, dawg you lack intellect

^that was the onli deccent part in this battle....

both need to up the content...get off the elementary concepts....put more thought into it...so the readers will be pleased....and ryda..PLEASE RHYME

so, yea...those were the good bars...and hipnotik had them, so he gets my vote