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Texxus 10-17-05 12:49 AM

This was feedback posted for Theory
 
checkin polls...i like the veggie lines that was dope

Shade of Eden 10-17-05 12:22 PM

Voted For: Theory

>i ain't even takin this shit serious....i'ma just get up 'n tattle
cos c'mon,i ain't losin..this cat doesn't even kno how to set-up a battle
played...3/10
>I'ma dent up his saddle 'n raddle..kill him 'n bury his heart in the clinic
& his flow's is like his name.....shit's just "TEARY" from start to finish
hmm, if this was worded better, like a punch from a kids perspective, cause you pronounced theory incorrectly...3/10
>ya cards diminished...this shit could be B-ball 'n u'd try to cough on the batter
I'll snap a finger in ya face... cos that's how quick ya fell off the ladder
eh, nothing special 5/10
>Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position
solid, set up was gay 6/10

overall:16/40....word, uhh, thought a bunch of your punches could\ have been worded a little better, finisher was good, but didn't keep consistency throughout this battle

>Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well
creative, good wordplay 6/10
>Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck
liking that wordplay 7/10
>I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved
cool, 6/10
>'m ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick
haha, i laughed 7/10

overall:26/40...theory was more consistent, had creative punches with witty wordplay....his punches made me laugh as well, so he takes this one

v/theory

Theory 10-17-05 09:00 PM

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Spektikul 10-17-05 11:43 PM

Voted For: Theory

Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position

VS

Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck
I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved
'm ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick

LMAO!!!

Theory, those bars were fucking fire.
Great wordplay, wicked wording.

Natural Killa,

I thought you came wack in this battle. Ive seen your stuff before and this didnt really compare. Plus with stiff competition like that it didnt help you out at all either. Next time try using more personals, harder punches, and come with better concepts kid. But Ill admit you multies and wordplay were pretty good.

One sided battle.

V/Theory...............

...must be from b-boys or sum shit. wow.


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