I apreciate this feedback aswell. Alright then

getz at me if you need anything

I'm not really the club banger type (in fact i really hate that kinda shit) but this was a good track. The chorus wasn't bad but wasn't as exciting as a club banger should've been. The first verse was kinda blah with the lyrics but the presence was there. the second verse i actually was kinda feelin. overall really i'd say on regular scale it was a 7/10 but seeing as it was a club banger type and i don't really feel those it's a really good club banger.

I guess you could return favor on my invektive battle if you have the time if you don't then don't worry about it i always have time to check out people's tracks and anytime you need feedback on anything just pm me. yea peace

GET AT ME

indeed. thanks for the feedback. Will do

iite... intro is kool.... i aint really feelin the beat... reminds me of j-kwon lol... i aint gonna let that effect my views on it thiough.. you kick in pretty nice... lyrics are ill. flow is on point. quality is ok... delivery is niice.. emotion is kool aswelll second verse is kool aswell.. did flow better.. lyrics were kooll nice track man

part from the beat its an ill track.. keep droppin em man

rtf on my rapgame song.. aint got no others.. want me to fetch the link? coz its on the first page

aiight famz. ill rtf on that shit...thanx for the feedback

Yea son def elevated alot playa...flow was on point but ya delivery really stood out..I remember when u was blan an emotionless o tracks now u got ya shit right......beat was koo....not spectacular but koo....lyrically wasn't bad...punches was ah'ight nothing was crazy but decent...wasn't fellign hook....u let beat play too much...coulda dun alot more wit dat...but overall real solid track....keep droppin dat heat son.....1

fo sho homie.. appreciate the feedback. and yeah i did.

and again. imma change up the hook

Yeah, the intro's cool, doe sounds like Slim Thug, doe.
Bad things (3 in all):
1. why'd you say you don't have guns? You gotta do the opposite: BRAG about how you got heaters.
2. The beat kinda sucks...probably cuz it sounds like that J-Kwon beat.
3. Your accent kinda throws me.
But over all I give it a 7.6/10
Okay stuff, man.

naww homie im sayin i dont a gun..i aint no fake nigga..but its easy to get one...whenever i have serious beef..thats when the guns come out naww meanz ..but thanx for the feedback..and what fuckin accent!?!? LOL

this shit is fire man, the hook and the verse's, you had a better delivery to me on this than what you usually do, the hook was hott and your hooks are usually catchy, and your quality has gotten alot better then what it used to be, also your creativity is alot better

thanx famz...i appreciate it.....

The Intro on this track i loved cuz like Ltizzle said it gives an up and comin star feel. The first verse was aight but the second verse kinda brought it back for me. The lyrics were pretty good. Chorus was aight but all together its was a nice track.The beat i loved by the way. And one more thing i think u need to relax a lil bit cuz ur flow a lil stressed. I give it an 8/10.

Peace.

stressed..DAMN U ITS NOT STRESSED IM EXPRESSIN THAT I GOT NO LICENSE BUT ROLL IN A LEXUS lol

intro lol dooms sounds mean lol his voice is jsut menacing really
flow was on point throughout really did hear any flaws so props on thsi uve elevated alot here
emotion you got this pretty much on lock ur layed back yet hyped iono loveing it lol
you had great clarity i heard every word reall crisp props on this you dont see this that much on here
chorus like everyone else not feeling it lol are you going to repost the new version?
overall goodtracl 7.5
for stats

thanx ma. and repost new version? ill just edit it

Ayo Famz this shit is Hot..!! yo flow and delivery is nice...adlibs came out well....this has to be one of ya top trackz...namsaying....u did ya thang B we need to drop on that beat i send ya

Yo, this song is dope, good club banga. The beats ok but not really feeling it. The hook could've been abit more complex, was abit plain. But overall the song is Pretty hot, keep it up man.

Overall - 8/10

thanx famz i appreciate it. And DV im down. I dont have the beat no more though :S

Lmao @ intro, Dooms does sound all mean haha...but gives something extra to the track though...he sounds all hyped up near the end lmao

The beat is DOPE, I'm loving that beat and it's so suited for this type of track. You can definitely see the club headbanging to this shit you know.

Your lyrics are good for this type of track, you brought a decent level of complexity to it in fact. The flow is on point throughout the entire track. Your delivery is good, got that hyped up, grimey vibe going on. I'm feelin that shit man...

Hook yeh, I agree with people...could've been more complex but the concept behind it is good you know...

Keep it up (feedback to learn rankings in RG)

iight thanx ma appreciate the feedback

this was pretty solid mayne...

i aint know Apexx was producin tracks ... and all that.... like.... that was kinda hot... Dooms hostin tracks??? that was a nice touch to the track...


beat reminded me of something ... but i cant put my finger on it... " tipsy" thats what it reminds me of... lol... but the beat was hot...

you put your lyircs down hard to this ... you deff elivated since we was beefin back in the day... lol... your style deff improved ... your delivery used to be so forced but now it juss kinda... its like you grew up a lil man.. lol... your presence was deff felt on this track... good shit...


8.5/10


solid

Yo Kon, you have to reply to this dudes track or this post gets locked down in 24hrs: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211121

lol word @ appex intro....

lol beat sound like tipsy kinda....... lol

you got nice flow yo....... quality coo, could be upped lil. But lyrics nice yo....... likin' the flow and shit... beat sound a lil too loud...... but i'm feelin' this flow dude. nice so far dude. This shit nice. damn like your voice. shit tight.... overall man really hot track dude. We should collab some time. ~_~ 9/10 (this for RG ranking thing)

thanx famz...i appreciate that feed alot. Much appreciateed

and appexx imma get at that link now...and thanx SPul i apprecaite it alot. and jea we'll collab

this track is fuckin sick...stay up fam...uno

thanx homie I appreciate it....respect

that shit was saucy, im feelin tha beat.... flow was coo i think a bit slo in a couple parts on tha first verse, but thats that club shit..... i like it tho.....tight track


9.5/10

thanx famz i appreciate it..ill get at your track

Damn such an active song thread...nice track kontro done ya thing keep it up :thumbup:

word i know. thanx i appreciate it..

well not really my type of song.. but mainstream radio.. this got a chance.. just on some of the lines u have too many words in it.. like all the words dont fit so try to fix that a lil.. but other than that jst raise the vocals on chorus just alittle.. n everythings good

ok homie. thanks for the feedback

listenin
like the intro
beat drops in, not wut i wuz expectin but not bad
then it changes, i liked the first one better
rappin starts, really fits wit beat, nice lyrics
hook comes in, too quiet imo
2nd verse, lyrics are a lot better, like how the beat goes out on the alicia keys punch
hook again, same as i sed be4
overall its a good song 8/10 id say

thanx famz...i appreciate the feedback

lol @ the Apexx dick ridin

the beat sounds dope so far
OH NEVER FUCKIN MIND!

You sound funny, like..ionno, not bad funny, and not haha funny, but, like..ionno.

1st verse
nice, hype delivery
the beat wears on me after a while
so its gettin dope

chorus
aiigh, I guess

verse 2
more punchlines, but your flow messes up 2 times I counted.

the lyrics is mad simple
the rhyme scheme is mad simple
but overall is decent its a "dead banga" as you put it.
kind of short.
we should do a remix to this shit. holla at me
this feedback is for the RG
Return the favor of my track
diamond in the rough

WOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOLY SHIT WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

FLOW DOPE DOPE DOPE 9/10

DELIVERY-PERFECT-11/10

PRESENCE-REAL NICE-9/10

WOOOOOOOOOO WOOOOOOOOOOO

I Like The Hook -_- Its Simple But Affective

Dope Club Banger

*Puts On Mp3 Player*

DOPE

OVERALL 9/10

Haha, was feelin this track mayn.. Was feelin tha beat & lyrics. Overall keep it up wit this shit though.

thanks famz i appreciate the honest feedback. No doubt. And fo sho i'll keep it up. I can only get better right? but again thanks for the feedback





LOL. word homie thanks famz i appreciate it alot. Ay if you puttin it on your mp3 make sure yo homies hear it LOL. and look out for the remix its comin REAL SOON. word again thanx for the feedback