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ILL GEE 12-06-05 07:26 PM

aiight...y'all.... uppin for more votes.... you got links for battles or tracks? post em up.... holla....

Speats 12-07-05 11:45 AM

Voted For: Mad Dog

listening:
MadDog: Beat is ill, like the flow and punchs made me laught, quality is better than grammatics, when you battle on the mic you sound frustrated so it makes the presence dope

<)-(>: first beat was bad, second bad is cool, a kinda classic soundclick beat, flow is dope, quality is bad, well the hiss, punchs were weaker than mad dog,

overall vote goes to mad dog

ILL GEE 12-07-05 01:16 PM

x-spitty.... you were kinda vague on both critiques... accept for what you said about flow and qyuality... you need to be more descriptive when you vote cuz it'll lead to issues and vote removals and shyt like that... what about the punches? what about the personals? not that it just made you laugh... if i said poopy cock snot monster in a rhyme that'd prolly make someone laugh but it don't necessarily mean i got a better rhyme, nah mean?... laughter is a factor BUT it isn't one of the strongest points of a battle...just get more in depth....for both opponents sake,,,,,

and lmao@will being blacklisted

Speats 12-07-05 04:19 PM

iight take it off then............................

ILL GEE 12-07-05 08:52 PM

i ain't taking it off (strobe would prolly leave it on anyways... he forgot what rules and shyt is)...i was just asking for you to go more in-depth to justify why he got the vote....

Mad Dog 12-08-05 03:51 AM

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Originally Posted by <)-(>
i ain't taking it off (strobe would prolly leave it on anyways... he forgot what rules and shyt is)...i was just asking for you to go more in-depth to justify why he got the vote....


werd agreed...but reading ya 1st post made me laugh @

Quote:
Originally Posted by <)-(>
poppy cock snot monster


lol uppin

ILL GEE 12-08-05 07:31 PM

well if this shyt don't get battle of da month for november....sheesh.... it's been almost a month already and da shyt still need votes... damn... if you got 20 posts get ya asses in here and vote..... it ain't that hard to say.... "i like so and so because....." really though

Mad Dog 12-09-05 04:36 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by <)-(>
well if this shyt don't get battle of da month for november....sheesh.... it's been almost a month already and da shyt still need votes... damn... if you got 20 posts get ya asses in here and vote..... it ain't that hard to say.... "i like so and so because....." really though


werd.............................................. .

PrahJect 12-09-05 05:52 AM

This was feedback posted for Mad Dog
 
polllz............................................ .......

ILL GEE 12-13-05 08:07 PM

good f***ing night!!!! can we PLEEEEEEEEEEASEEEEEEE get some votes on this?.... i mean really... what a brother gotta do?

ILL GEE 12-18-05 02:26 AM

up................................................ .

Mad Dog 12-19-05 05:52 AM

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Paranoid 12-19-05 08:21 AM

Voted For: Mad Dog

ILL-Gram
um I liked your beat choice and fa sho your voice is very good. your delivery wasn't really appealing to me though. flow wasn't that great either, though the punches were decent....some shit seemed a bit rushed but overall you hit the beat pretty nice. but you didn't really do anything special this one man.

Mad Dog
not bad, beat choice is some what quite bad for you most times but this time it's ok. flow and delivery is pretty good through out the verse. punchlines were pretty decent as well, though shit seemed rushed as well, but it didn't show as much. overall I think you got this because of just trying a lot harder and hittin the beat with meaning more.

vote: Mad Dog

ILL GEE 12-19-05 07:16 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Paranoid
Voted For: Mad Dog

ILL-Gram
um I liked your beat choice and fa sho your voice is very good. your delivery wasn't really appealing to me though.

flow wasn't that great either, though the punches were decent....some shit seemed a bit rushed but overall you hit the beat pretty nice. but you didn't really do anything special this one man.

Mad Dog
not bad, beat choice is some what quite bad for you most times but this time it's ok. flow and delivery is pretty good through out the verse. punchlines were pretty decent as well, though shit seemed rushed as well, but it didn't show as much. overall I think you got this because of just trying a lot harder and hittin the beat with meaning more.

vote: Mad Dog

wow.... kinda contradictory, don't ya think? how do i have a not so great delivery and not so good of a flow.... but then you say sumn like "overall you hit the beat pretty nice."

lmao.....WOW!!!

ILL GEE 12-22-05 04:47 PM

if you go to his soundclick...for those of y'all who didn't get what i was doing...you'll see that i broke down more than a few of his songs in SC.....starting from his first drop and working my way up...without knowing this, i could see how you wouldn't get what i was saying.... but be for real when ya vote.... my delivery and flow are prolly on point 95% of the time that i spit... i'm real critical of those two points.... when shyt don't sound hard enough to me, i usually do it over.... and that's with every track i do... so for anyone to say my delivery is off.... learn sumn about rap....and as far as flow...ya entitled to ya opinions... i ain't gon argue that one cuz folks like certain kinds of flows.... but i've always been known for how i ride the beat... even when i'm just fucking around with it... so ehhhh whatever... let's get this shyt over with

Mad Dog 12-23-05 04:52 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by <)-(>
if you go to his soundclick...for those of y'all who didn't get what i was doing...you'll see that i broke down more than a few of his songs in SC.....starting from his first drop and working my way up...without knowing this, i could see how you wouldn't get what i was saying.... but be for real when ya vote.... my delivery and flow are prolly on point 95% of the time that i spit... i'm real critical of those two points.... when shyt don't sound hard enough to me, i usually do it over.... and that's with every track i do... so for anyone to say my delivery is off.... learn sumn about rap....and as far as flow...ya entitled to ya opinions... i ain't gon argue that one cuz folks like certain kinds of flows.... but i've always been known for how i ride the beat... even when i'm just fucking around with it... so ehhhh whatever... let's get this shyt over with


like the attempted swaying...but thank strobe for blocking people from viewing this UNTIL they poll or vote...uppin...

ILL GEE 12-23-05 10:51 PM

here you go.... i know they can't see it dick.... i wanted YOU to see it.... cuz YOU know what my lines were about.... now after they vote, whether they vote for me or not, they can go back and maybe get a better understanding of what i was saying... i don't write shyt for no reason.... i always got a plan behind the lines... if these young dudes don't get it then that's on them... like i been saying the last year and some change, most kats on here don't know shyt... i'm old skool... they can learn from kats like me.... just schooling them... no swaying going on here... lmao at you even bringing that up when I know how the system works already.... if i wanted to sway i'd just make a random thread somewhere else and make sure people read it or i'd pm people.... but i haven't done that.... that ain't how i operate... but whatever, man.... see it how you see it

BigTony.Self 12-27-05 11:13 AM

This was feedback posted for &amp;lt;)-(&amp;gt;
 
peepin dawgs.......................................

Mad Dog 12-28-05 04:12 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by <)-(>
here you go.... i know they can't see it dick.... i wanted YOU to see it.... cuz YOU know what my lines were about.... now after they vote, whether they vote for me or not, they can go back and maybe get a better understanding of what i was saying... i don't write shyt for no reason.... i always got a plan behind the lines... if these young dudes don't get it then that's on them... like i been saying the last year and some change, most kats on here don't know shyt... i'm old skool... they can learn from kats like me.... just schooling them... no swaying going on here... lmao at you even bringing that up when I know how the system works already.... if i wanted to sway i'd just make a random thread somewhere else and make sure people read it or i'd pm people.... but i haven't done that.... that ain't how i operate... but whatever, man.... see it how you see it


bold = word.........................uppin................ ......

Willa 12-29-05 09:10 PM

Voted For: &amp;lt;)-(&amp;gt;

cool beat
lil intro was pretty cool very long lol
chasing the wrong cat puttin dog to sleep lines were cool
beat change i dont like this beat lol
choke chain lol flow is good very good multis

mad ugggh i hate that beat wayyy overused
flow seemed off in a few spots but was overall good
punches i heard a few that were good btu i couldn't understand most of them because of ur accent so u naturally had a disadvantage
quality lets be real you have no reason dissing him about his quality you guys are about the same there lol

overall i couldnt understand alot of mad's lines so i listened 2 times and hear a few and they werent anywhere close to the nameplay and personals ill threw ill's flow wasnt off mad's went off in 2 spots overall ok battle

Mad Dog 01-05-06 10:59 AM

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Terumoto 01-06-06 05:05 AM

Voted For: &amp;lt;)-(&amp;gt;

Mad Dog: Cool shit man. Pretty generic beat though... Ive heard it, and I think I have it.. lmao. But yo, lyrics were good bro. I liked some of the wordplay and personals in there. Flow never fell off and stayed consistent, but sometimes that can be a bad thing. You needed a bit more variation in delivery for the track to be more engaging.. That said, pretty good stuff all around.

IG: Love the beat, and the change up to the next dope beat. Sick flow, sick delivery... killed it man, ya killed it. I heard my name lol.. what was with that. Lyrics were nice and ya punches were hard. Sorry if this sounds offensive or rude, but fuckin shit.. do yourself a favor and BUY A BETTER MIC. You can have the best lyrics, flow, delivery etc in the world, but quality is what makes it sound good man.

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anyway... Both tracks were cool. But I was feeling IGs shit a bit more. It was more convincing, in a way.. Pulled off the "dismissive" tone and style real well. MD, your track gave off the impression that you were treating IG as an equal, but trying to explain to him you are better than him... Sometimes that can be a good approach, but your track needed a more involving beat and delivery to get it to that owning level.

v/ IG.


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