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Young Un.. you should have dropped a vote, why you checkin' the pollz, you can see that in battle stats or my sig. 8-1! , lets see if I can get 20votes VS this herb. Well he out there Dick Ridin' like a motha fucka.
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Voted For: GKillaz05
-Natural Killa's best line: Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee, Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME Nice flow and decent personals but I wasn't really feeling the puns -GKilla had really nice openers at the start (4 lines) with the wordplay. His verse was much wittier. For example, "Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord... My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"... Though his rhymes did not have as much personals, I think he won because of the amount of content in his rhymes: puns and similies. |
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Becuz I can spell it, and you cant. You dumb fuck. 9, votes for me now, goin' to get give up yet, pussy-ass-bitch! |
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UPPIN, lets get some more votes I wanna see if I can be the first to beat NK 20-0
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Voted For: Natural killa
Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head... Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"... >so NK is a piece of toast now? 0/10 When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib... Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid... >vampires don't exist, and they suck blood for nourishment, not for rapping 0/10 All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition... Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician... >how many electricians do you know that carry around shorted out bars?...and bars of what? wtf 0/10 Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby... Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby... >cars get flattened, or destroyed...they don't just fall apart....and you're gay for owning a furby 0/10 "Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord... My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"... >poor wording 4/10 overall: 4/50....think of less gay comments, and you should raise your level of homosexuality to about rosie o'donnel....pz IP: Quote: Originally Posted by GKillaz05 sending a PM to me Battle me BITCH! On this account tho, not the other one. I wanna merk ya on NK. Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words, ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs >true...3/10 A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice, Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice >not bad 5/10 Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee, Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME >nah 0/10 & again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?, Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED >no 0/10 So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst, And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse >plaaayed, 1/10 overall: 9/50....uhhm, you better realize this was a shitty verse, i've seen alot better than you, but i know gkillaz is whack, and you probly didn't try, nor needed to, but you're probly getting fucked cause he has d/r's, and he's gay, which i understand....but you owned him with your second bar alone, but just try harder next time, uggh, so many played lines....cheerio v/Natural Killa Confirmed hate vote removed |
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iI CAN'R VOTE BUT I'LL LEAVE SOME FEEDBACK FOR Y'ALL.
Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words, ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs ^^IGHT,A ITTLE BASIC THO A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice, Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice ^^dopE,SHIT WAS CRACK DUN Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee, Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME ^IGHT & again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?, Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED ^^EHH,OK..IZ IGHT NIGGA So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst, And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse ^^NAH,PLAYED 4 IGHT LINES. OVERALL=DECENT VERSE DUN. Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head... Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"... ^^NAH,WACK When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib... Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid... ^^YOU BIT THAT VAMPIRE LINE.I KNOW IT.I CAN'T REMEMBER WHERE,BUT I KNOW YOU BIT IT. All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition... Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician... ^^PLAYED THE FUCK OUT!!!! Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby... Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby... ^^IGHT,NOT FEELIN THAT FURBY SHIT.YOU DON'T BRING THAT GAY ASS SHIT INTO BATTLE RAPS.KEEP IT HOOD.NAHMEAN? "Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord... My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"... ^^FORCED LIKE A MUTHA FUKER.WHAT THE FUK IZ ALL A BORED?WOULD YA GO TO SOME NIGGA AND SAY,YOU KEEP ME ALL-A-BORED?FORCED SHIT!! PURE WACKESS PON YOUR PART. THE KILLA WON THIS BITCH EASY. |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Gkilla won this cus he had better punches, the derby one was the best in his rap, and in nk the milked twice was his best, but Gkilla came down harder. |
Just Keep gettin' more and more votes, keep them comin' Ima be the first person to get like 20votes vs this man. Thats all I care about, lets leave this battle open for ever.
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Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words, ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs this was good....a while back, now these types of punches are beyond used.. A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice, Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice this was decent, a good personal.. Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee, Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME the concept was good, but wording and delivery could be better.. & again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?, Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED this is like a statement, not really a diss.. So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst, And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse used concept, ok delivery with it.. In all honesty, you can do better. A lot of the shit you used has been done before, by many others on RV and even by yourself. You had that nice personal with the shit about him losing to oreo, the rest was pretty weak, a few lines that were average and could've been dope with better wording. Not one of your better verses. OVERALL: 5/10 Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head... Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"... wordplay was forced, concept was played.. When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib... Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid... vampire concept was ok, but you worded it wack.. All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition... Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician... ok wordplay, punch was average.. Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby... Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby... again..basic wordplay with a weak punch, and :wtf: at the furby shit, that was gay.. "Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord... My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"... wordplay was nice, punch was ok, this was easily your best bar.. Yeah, you to...not your best. This was one of the weakest verses I've seen you put out. You win out with the wordplay in this battle, but really the rest of the categories go to NK. He had better punches than you, you had no real personals either. You had a few played bars, some real weak ones...especially that fucking Furby line, that was gay. The closer was really the only decent bar you had, you were just too inconsistent. OVERALL: 4/10 V/ - Natural killa |
^Thank you...at least we have one voter with sense here :)
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Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head... Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"... ^^weak When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib... Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid... ^^^ight All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition... Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician... ^^^Weak Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby... Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby... ^^^Ight "Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord... My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"... ^^good closer just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words, ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs ^^^Good personal in the opener A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice, Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice ^^^lol good Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee, Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME ^^^Good personal & again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?, Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED ^^^ight So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst, And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse ^^^good closer V/nK.....this was an ight battle....but g u camee unconsistent in ur punchs an personals...no hate....nk u came wit some good witty fresh punchs an good wordplay u get my vote V/nk RTF.......... |
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I vote for Killa but im not gunna vote im just checking the polls and uppin this for you guys... Nice battle 2 both NK just had more personals... even though his opener was played like fuck |
UPPIN.............. lets get this over with sick of gettin' votes DQ'd.
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Natural Killa Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words, ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs Bad punch. A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice, Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice Oreo wasn't that bad, punch concept was blah. Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee, Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME Not feeling this punch. & again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?, Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED No punch. So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst, And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse Punch was blah. Your punches aren't that strong in this verse. Your concepts are the thing that holds you back mostly. You base them after who he loses to, and just overall played concepts. GKillaz05 Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head... Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"... No real punch. When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib... Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid... Haha, this made me smile. Concept is played, but the punch is ok. All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition... Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician... Not feeling this punch. Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby... Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby... Not feeling this punch. Concept is weak. I remember Furby, God I hated those things. "Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord... My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"... Not feeling this punch either. Overall, you only had 1 punch that kinda connected. You need to keep elevating, and re word your punches so they connect better. Work on better concepts too. --------------------------------------------- Overall both of you need to work on your concepts, because without a good concept, the punch will suck no matter what. I vote for GKillaz for that one punch. Cuz they went back and forth on punches, but GK had one punch that was ok. v- GKillaz05 |
thxx for the vote 4-2............ UPPIN, lets get this closed!!
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Flow: Tie Multies: Killa Punches: G Personals: MEH Metaz: G v-G better punches and better metaphors.....dats wut won it for me Killa u had a good verse, i jus feel u coulda came wit more or better metaphors to acompany ur punches, woulda made them more effective |
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