Okay, personals are not just throwin' the dude's name in your bars...just cuz wicked's name is in your lines doesn't make it a personal. You have to make a play off their name...you just tossed his name in there.

a random example of a personal would be like this:

Like out of date slang sure he's totally "Wicked"
He couldn't be his name if he was makin' out with Witches//

Lame, but, you get the idea.

~1~

Voted For: Wicked One

a yo betta structure easier to unda stand and way harder punches overall vote//wicked

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Im sippin the life outta wicked like the capri sun, coco rum?,
Hiz shit iz wicked, but slang leavez like the fall so he's second to none.

i believe thatz hiz name.

Voted For: Wicked One

u won with just that first punch wicked u wer stronger in flow and punches
ven. u could get a lot better i have seen better of you
rtf
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Voted For: Wicked One

hmmm not a bad battle between beginners... couple of aight concepts in both verses... needs alot of polishing on both ends... but better than some of teh other garbage I've voted on in this forum...

Opener: Wicked One
Closer: Wicked One
Punches: Wicked One
Personals: Venture
Structure: Neither
Creativity: Wicked One
Complexity: Wicked One
Enjoyment: None

Vote: Wicked One

Voted For: Wicked One

um........EZ.......first bar did it, 8th bar killed it, last bar ended it


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Voted For: Wicked One

You should stop rappin, find another way to make your pockets jingle...
Being clumsy in a record store is the only time you'll drop a single...
So I can easily rhyme through your whole rhyme crew...
And put more shells through ur window than a Taco Bell drive thru...
vs.
nothing.
and this line;
Call him scotch tape, cuz that mixtape never seemed to happen,
Man you get tossed out more than clothes in a hamper.
; i recomend not ever repeating agian, shits made corny

vote-wo, for two good punches

can this battle get closed please?...................

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Voted For: Wicked One

this was an okay battle........nothin really speciala nd AWW!!! about it but yea i like wicked's flow and creativity along wit wordplay homes.


venture was good too but it seemed like he cocked back his punches but never let his punch go!!!!



V/ wicked.


also why does it say no crew votes when both of you in the same crew?! weird.