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aiight AC...welcome to OYD.... holla!!!...tito...still need to get my comp up...staying with family right now til i get my place...ish is hectic...but omma holla at all y'all on da collab tip.... uppin for more heads to join....wizzerd

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and that p-werd ain't working....holla

......................bump

omma hafta wait for my comp

ight since im currently elavatin I was wondering if i can join and if you want too see my stuff then pm me. :thumbup:

heres this topical i did

A sense of anxiousness in every breath.
dreary visions as I watch my footsteps.
possessd pausing in stance gaze at her house address.
Knocking on her door patiently waiting for a answer.
She opened up to find out shes a belly dancer.
walking beside me is a beautiful girl askin questions.
lost for words with no expressions and embarrassing impressions.
hearts racing fast feels like a formula 1 race pulling tons.
She winks at me and laughs and her smiles as good as the sun.
Finally we enter the restraunt obliged tried telling jokes an I almost cried.
Couldn’t make up my mind to be embarrassed or to run and hide.
No appetite and I havn’t ate a single meal in hours.
Reached in my jacket to pull out a bouquet of flowers.
Something in me seemed to seize
I blink a couple times and I can finally see
Now that im talking I feel I cant quit never leavin I wont make it
Walkin lonely now and I cant face the truth to brace it.
Goin home no one to love on or hug
an even no one for me to give back rubs.
Only to wake up and see shes lying beside
Now living our lifes one day at a time.

I kno kindarushed verse but like i said im elavatin so yea. :thumbup:

you do know this is an audio crew right????


if you got a mic... plug that ish in and spit something nicca



LMAO


werd

aww ight then nvm peace

i still read ya piece and it definitely needs a better structure than how it's written... ya thoughts are all over the place... lots of stuff doesn't make sense where it's placed... potential...keep workingat it

why dont u ever talk to me anymore :(

Someone send me the password :(

iiight....sent.

why are yall not established yet yall been up longer then some of tha established crews

Cuz Fools Been Sleepin On Us But Fuck It We Are Who Are Dont Neeed To Be In An Established Spot To Know We Are!!!

i gotta get my comp set up.... you never on aim when i go on...lol.... i'm at my bro-in-laws til my house gets finished... 3 more weeks then it's back to dooing audio!!

uppin this shyt.... yo tito.... holla at a nukka.... matta fact... pm a nukka with da digits... i'll holla atcha so we can set some shyt up!!!!

yo...i got 2 more audio kats from BK... they used to rhyme with me up at W4th before the hiphop cops shut everything down!....werd.... my mans Animosity and my mans Amsterdamn aka Barz-N-Penstripes

get them niggas on the mic and lets get some tracks jumpin off wit them niggas mayne!!!

werd....thought you'd NEVER see this...lmao.... I see you done got R.I.C.H. overnight, too!!!....thas wussup!

blocka blocka !!!!

were is everyone !!

uppiin for more talent

i've been affiliated with OYD for a long time now. You know Imma still hold it down even if I'm not an official member.


For the record, I'm not in PSA any longer.

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to the top for more audio

<--- talent....well potential talent.....holla at me....or at least vote.....then holla at me

vs. J Summers (before i got my mic right) - http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=222463

vs. Fuck You Up! - http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=223354

vs. Broadway - http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=223364 (some name drops of some of yall on there, not dick riding....just stating my opinion....but if i did drop ya name dont vote on the broadway one....cuz i dont want him bitching

Honestly......you do have some potential. You have problems with keeping your flow. You seem to throw too many words in some of your lines every once in a while. And on the real......change your name. How can we take someone seriously who's got some numbers after their name. It's like you are the 286th person to use that name or some shit. Come up with an original name. You also need some lyrical content. Your punches are pretty played. You seem to have like 32432qo34195721741 gay punches. If he's not really gay, then it just sounds like you don't have anything else to say.....and it gets repetitious.

So step your game up and drop a couple more lyrically sound tracks, then hit us back :thumbup:™

yea i haven't actually sat down and written in a while...i feel you on some the lyrics most of it is revised freestyles....and yea when battling i guess the your gay thing comes up too much....yea i feel you...the name thing....2-86...birf date....i guess no one pics that up....my old alis was defult....but i dont like it anymore....so the jay thing is just temp....holla thanks for the feed.....and please please vote, on at least one of the three battles

Like I said.....you got some potential, but if that's all you're gonna let it be, then we will have to pass. If you actually show us something, then hell yeah, we would take you in a minute :thumbup:™

thats why i pmed you man....hit me up with a topic....so i have som inspiration to write

Yea...he can get away with a lotta words in a bar if he has excellent breath control








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yo.... is there a sc page for R.I.C.H. Ent. ?

lol...yo....on the real.... ya sig look like an Al Green throwback....lol...no beef or nuffin'.... but i can't be the only one who sees that shyt!

lets collab up in this mother fucker
wjole group
just pass it to each member an let em throw down like 8-10 on it
and mangle it up

toss a OYD siggy in your shit bro !!! ^^^^^^^^^^

hey r u going to send em taht other hook?

hey man i wanna be in a rapper dude group ...please ....i swear .... i am not as dorky as tonyself.... all he does is watch the JUGGERNAUT BITCH and giggle...

maybe its not juggernaut makin me giggle remember i have a girlfriend ...........lemme elaborate tho girlfriend is a women whom you meet "preferably not on the ineternet"as your e-macking is huge these days unlike ya cock however see i can be online gettin kissed on while your over there being the biggest subscriber to mental funk girls and babes section!!!

wow tony owned u lol