Originally Posted by The Revelation

Every post I make, somehow you are there saying I suck in audio,
You do

or some other way of insulting me.
you look like the type to get insulted and then spaz out. kinda like what you're doin now. So I keep doin it.

When you first started I just responded cuz I was bored, now you are annoying me.
Then die

You say I don't have it, ya I'm sure Em got that too,
wtf is you talkin about right ere? how'd eminem get in this?

and he can wipe his ass with 100's.
he could wipe his ass would yo tongue too, I bet

I messed up one song, big whoop.
you didnt mess up 1 song. you messed up however many songs is on your soundclick

I know Paranoid beat me,
"beat" isnt the word son, sheesh

that's why I'm not arguing with the posts.
damn right, hoe
You act like I am saying I am the best.
if you have even an ounce of respect for rap, you wouldnt even think it. not now, not in the future

You know nothing man.
I know you wack

Your stuff has nothing original,
I would love to see you revolutionize rap

your flow is choppy,
no it isnt

I don't even like the beats you choose.
I assume you think the beat you used in that battle against paranoid was dope, huh?
How long you been doing audio?
since like, the beginnin of the summer, maybe a few weeks before

Listen man, right now, you are like that fly that you swipe at but it gets away.
you couldnt swipe shit in my direction, Rev. you admitted to me bein better than you, already. And I will always be

You are an annoyance to my free time.
then die

I am on this site for fun, but you just make it annoying.
leave then, cos Im not goin stop remindin you how wack you are.

Stop posting random ish to insult me when I don't even take a swipe at you.
you do take swipes at me, you're insultin rap. How? by rappin! stop playin around

Cuz all it shows is that you have to beef on the net
I dont have to, and its not beef, its just a friendly reminder of how wack you are

and try and bully some kid who just started audio
I bully kids in real life. the kids I bully would merk you, physically and lyrically, nahsayen? Rather you just started audio is pointless, dont tell me you have never written a rap before you was able to record? if you didnt then thats why you suck.

and has only done 3 songs. It's pathetic.
yeah, it sure is

Originally Posted by The Revelation

I give up man. Your flow is text based, Dooms said it. And you've been doin audio since the summer? That's said. I don't take swipes at you until you take em at me. As for spazzing, I'm just responding, but having to respond to your dumbass remarks in every thread is annoying. I said you are better, but I never said by how much.

Your flow is choppy, it is text based just like Dooms said, and you've been doin audio since the beginning of summer, that's bad man. You should have developed some kind of natural flow by now.
I've recorded 3 songs, and I didn't write rap songs before I started recording. I wrote topicals to beats I wrote in my head, so ya. This is new ground for me, so how bout you and your 3rd grade IQ go and read a book so that you don't sound retarded in every post you make.

Originally Posted by The Revelation

I give up man.
then die

Your flow is text based, Dooms said it.
Nah, it isnt text based. Dooms also said there isnt a god, you believe that too?

And you've been doin audio since the summer?
yes

That's said.
you're sad. die

I don't take swipes at you until you take em at me.
I said you DO take swipes at me. For tryin to rap.

As for spazzing, I'm just responding, but having to respond to your dumbass remarks in every thread is annoying.
well, buddy. do you know what the best thing to do? stop responding. you try to be "intelligent" any intelligent person would stop doin somethin that they dont like to do, if they dont have to.

I said you are better, but I never said by how much.
I can tell you by how much. 10 SHITLOADS! Thats 10000000000.943874x better


Your flow is choppy, it is text based just like Dooms said,
didnt you say this already? I bet with my "choppy" ass flow, I could own you in a battle, EASY

and you've been doin audio since the beginning of summer,
You said this before, too. :-\

that's bad man.
I know, bad in like "Im baaad" type of way. even in an argument you still have to compliment me, huh?

You should have developed some kind of natural flow by now.
my natural flow owns your natual life

I've recorded 3 songs,
please, dont record a 4th. if you like rap and helpin people as much as you say you do, you'll stop. You make for a perfect example on how NOT to rap.

and I didn't write rap songs before I started recording.
then
I wrote topicals to beats I wrote in my head, so ya.
this is the best way to contradict yourself
you're an idiotic asshole
thats why you trash. you prolly listened to hardcore rock and slit your wrist because kids at school called you fat.

This is new ground for me, so how bout you and your 3rd grade IQ go and read a book so that you don't sound retarded in every post you make.