^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
u better not be talkin about me
cuz ill whoop ur ass in a battle

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

MC took this one because his drop had more fluidity and was well connected... Picture had good puches but his transition from line to line cause the vibrancy displayed at the begining of his verse to dissappate: I enjoyed the personal used by MC as his closer ... my fav. line from picture is "bitch couldn't back up his shit if he was constipated"..But again my Vote goes to MC
GOOD LUCK TO BOTH
PEACE

blah blah blah cut the bull shit no matter how many votes u get dqed u still aint got one damn vote yet shit lookin at it like that i koed ur ass twice already

your all gay......................................

whateva man uppin for votes ready to get this battle ova

uppin again.......................................

uppin again.......................................

Voted For: pictureperfect2

pp2

only u could make that shit wordplay.. boy you soft
this kids seen wit so many forces nelly challeged him to a shoe off
^^lol ok
thecrunkone, u got slickflow u ganna seal my f.ate
sorry...^^^
those aren't compliments those the wack fucks makin ya record look great
^^^lol nice
ugly ass bitch.. im doin you a favor when my punches make ya grill break
cuz it aint dancin when mc shoulda lean...
...............his shoulda just wants further from his face
^^^ok
that aint buddah in ya sig thats yo fat ass.. so watch how im stackin this
u short armin punches so much only long sleeves u seen come in oreo packages
^^^creative, but sorta indirect
talkin shit to me homey? u never ganna make it
bitch couldn't back up his shit if he was constipated
^^nah played

MC



If u the one who is marked the amazing then change your perception
thinking he’s the answer to A.I. who the fuck asked him a question
^^^eh
Painted like the eyes of Mona Lisa u study my flows equal
So I originated the perfect picture nobody like you the sequel
^^ok
U a joke whos never been taken even if it was the last pick
U even got smileys in your sig laughing at the skriptz of your soundclick
^^^eh
U not A.I. material u cant elevate if u was Iverson at the rim
A.I. intelligence is authentic not artificial so u got the wrong acronym
^^^eh
Nigga u failed abort mission I know a battle lost is hard to chew
Or go swallow a grenade that could make your picture perfect 2
^^^eh

overall pp2 got this easy IMO, harder punches overall... up ya creativity and clever game Philosophy, youve got some aite concepts but it was all just meh...

vote- PP2

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okay uppin anyway votes from none rhymers but uppin

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MC Phil got that, im an audio head dont know how to vote on text but I thought id look n see

Voted For: pictureperfect2

Nothing

vs

only u could make that shit wordplay.. boy you soft
this kids seen wit so many forces nelly challeged him to a shoe off

That bar from pictureperfect was pretty creative. MC Philosopher had nothing really, all his bars were simple and didn't hit in the slightest.

v/ pp2

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is kempo an audio head too?... and yo gopha is in the contendership match in lbl's text battle league. both these guys know what text is about.. all phil's votes are from dead heads that aint up on the game

^^^that last votes not legit man but im uppin this anyway

uppin to the top to get this battle done..........

i won this battle... i dont care how many fags vote for your fag verse

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I'm voting for Philosopher because his verse was more direct, less "reaching" as far as punches go. You need to get more advanced with your punches though, throw in some other techniques such as wordplay and work on your stuff.

right everybodies a fag when ur dumb ass is loseing right lol stop bitchin be a man for a day nigga

why was my vote DQ'd? it was broken down and explained...

same reason gkillaz was dqed when it was brooken down and explained

lmao, this battle is never ever gonna end. Stop dq'ing so many votes both of u.

nope not like this but uppin ..........................

uppin this for votes...............................

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uppin this for votes...............................

Voted For: pictureperfect2

i have to give this to picture perfect for actually having a decent personal..overall both verses were pretty whack...but philos....god damn..that's one of the worst i've ever seen...you had decent structure..that's about it...

personals - pp
punches - pp
metas - mcp
flow - pp
structure - mcp
word play - mcp

as you can see it's 3-3...but in the grand scheme of things..punches and personals win battles...vote goes to pp2

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Hey this joint was off tha hook. Good Punches. I like how u went on his sig and his name.

Painted like the eyes of Mona Lisa u study my flows equal
So I originated the perfect picture nobody like you the sequel

Yeah thats whats up right their. I was like dang. Then u had this one

Nigga u failed abort mission I know a battle lost is hard to chew
Or go swallow a grenade that could make your picture perfect 2

This was good too. I like the overall flow of your verse. It came together. Nice

Picture Perfect u had some good shit too. But i think MC had it. Much love though ~1~

no guys he's right. Nobody here is credible, especially not me. I'm definatley In-credible. and strobe didn't see fit to dq my shit. We're not all wack you both had good verses but his was more consistent with complexity. plus, the fact is that one of his punches were bad, there was one bar where you didn't know what you were talking about and i'm convinced they buried your closer with my great grandma. It happens like that sometimes man. Chill.

How the fuck was this vote DQ'd? I followed that bull shit ass thread and this is wat it says:

Whats a good vote? We don't expect you to write a novel, but a decent sentence or two containing personalized feedback will be adequate. Basically hit what were the good points for the winner and bad points for the loser. That way both opponents will be able to figure out how they can improve.

Battles get prolonged over the dumbest shit cuz the mods dont know how to do they jobs some times. My vote should not have gotten Dq'd...just wanted that said.

u right but hey im ready for this one to be ova cause i woulda won twice already but all the dqed votes

Voted For: pictureperfect2

This was a close battle.

MC: PHILOSOPHER: your verse was decent had some good hard hitting punches..yet i feel u could have came stronger u sort of drifted from your hard punches and came with some slightly weak...your personals were kinda played not really orignal...coulda came harder...overall 5.5/10

Pictureperfect2: I think you came stronger in this battle you had some nice punches that fluently stayed hard throughout ur verse...except your last bar..it was whack and played as fuck lol...other than that you had some nice nameplay and good hard punches that landed effectivley...all in all i think you took this 6.5/10

v/pictureperfect2

Voted For: pictureperfect2

Dirtas lines made me laugh... other cat was just same old played out shit...

^^^^^^^^hahaha this vote isnt even correctly explained