nawl we had a text battle set up but he didnt show ....................

^the fuck u talking about lol...i checked in...u didnt......i gave u 1 day check 1 day drop...and i saw u on...u just didnt check in lol

set it up again or tell me u down and i will

quit freeposting or I'll kill you all....

^you did this in my battle sucka....and im basically upping this for u....so u wont kill me...ull love me :)

I checked in and dropped.....................so STFU
http://www.rapverse.com/community/s...ad.php?t=232337

^wow im stupid my bad dude...i had a battle with mc:philosopher..that i checked into..and for some reason i thought i checked into ours too...lol i can set it up again if u want

yeah jus ask strobe to reopen it and give you a day to drop ......................

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lol Thanx man .,...................But your vote has to be a little bit more explained than that

uppin

Voted For: Wordz Ahgod

Man, stanza... you are still trying too hard to maintain a structure in your verse. I get that you've been away for a time, but the style that Wordz has got down is a growing one and is more appealing nowadays. Your verse just seemed too structured. And you were forcing some of your wordplay which downplayed the overall hard-hitting aspect of your verse. Some of the concepts was played to, and mostly the punches weren't really direct punches. They were generic statements like with the first bar. And that is what let your verse down in my opinion.

Wordz, I see you still elevating. Definitely on the come-up. You had some decent lines, but before I comment on some... let me "E-SLAP" you for dropping a fucking COME/CUM line. That shit is mad played. The wonderland punch was aight.. and the one about him having no job was cool. The wording could be better and you are lucky that I ignored the fact that you accidentally put "at all" at the end of the 2nd line which actually makes it not rhyme. Overall, your verse was mediocre.. you didn't really try but you had a couple of nice punches. You still need more elevation, but you definitely took this battle.

V/ - Wordz Ahgod


Now, RTF you motherfucker. Just peep the battle statistics and search my name like I did for you. Vote on either one of the two open battles I got. :thumbup:

thanks dawg. I'll get around to your battle 2morrow mourning man. word.

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Voted For: Oz.

this battle was whack..not even worth a vote..........


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sorry..cancel the vote...i meant to press feedback

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Voted For: Wordz Ahgod

Wordz AhGod:

I'll put you deep in a hole, you trying to battle is funny
bet you wont come(cum) original . . .
. . . Like you jerking other dudes for money
^^weak 2/10
your flows watered down, son you gotta be kidding
'Coz I'll beat oz till he leaves, and then he'll be taking WonderLand wit em
^^no 3/10
I wont even drop 16 at all, I could stop you wit no prob
Slow hustle is no hustle . . .
. . . That explains why he has no job at al
^^ok punch 6/10
kid you soft like pussy, the flows twice as wet
You aint battling vets . . .
. . . You battling niggaz that would rip the words out of your neck
^^ehh 3/10
Id beat every oz. to death before he even starts speaking
Murder before he 'drops', thats how we keep the secrets from 'leaking'
^^no 2/10

Overall: 16/50 (32%)


Oz.:

The way I drop This shit, You Could Say That I Trash The Place
Pull Out My Piece and Give Ya Ass The "Whip Appeal" Like "Babyface"
^^ok 3/10
I Talk a lot Of Junk But You know That Your Lines are shitty
I come to yo Hood & "Nut on Yo Street" Like I was Having "Sex in the city"
^^ok meta 4/10
Yo Moms a Hoe and I told Her That She Shouldnt Suck N' Tell
Now Yo ass mad Bcuz You a "40 Yr Old Virgin" Like "Steve Carrell"
^^ehh 3/10
Jus Look at ya .. You all talk Nigga But U see im ready for action
Hit Yo Bitch & tell Her "Dont Take It Personal" Like I Was "Jermaine Jackson"
^^ok 4/10
Talk Shit And Ill Leave Yo Ass Bleeding Like The Girl Off "Fatal Attraction"
Yo Girl Want Me So She Shot Yo ass....Let's Jus Call It a "Fatal Attraction"
^^wow 0/10
Call Yo Folks and Ill have Them Nigga's Mixed Up like Fruit Smoothie's
Then watch the body Sink Like "Lady In The Water" But this aint no Movie
^^no 1/10
This nigga aint Never had no pussy always claimin He Believe in Abstinence
Yo Ass So Wack Man My Last Puchline decided He should Jus Be Absent
^^no 1/10

Overall: 16/70 (23%)


Vote: Wordz Ahgod

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