that bass kicks ilm... so makes the flow and chorus automatically ilm. this beat is just dope. think this would be better less hype in parts and more cocky and deeper voices
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ilm?................ lol

lol still on the top..up

Hook is good, it woulda been better if you wouldn't have tried to change your voices for it. It woulda sounded better in your normal voice.

Verse 1:
Flow is nice, delivery is stable which is good. Sound very comfortable on the mic. Lyrics are decent it works for the track. Good verse.

Verse 2:
Flow is cool, got that Harlem swag going which is cool. Delivery has gotten leaps and bounds better from last time I heard. Lyrics are cool. I def. like your swag on this you sound comfortable in your own skin.


RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243871

lol... i guess this is strait... i dont really like club shit so i cant really comment. nice beat tho lol